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The origins of Boyd Investment Group is begun in 'Quarter Ton' in the Group Sex category.

Holly Tannenbaum is a character introduced in 'Very Pretty Things' in the Lesbian Sex category. She is the oldest daughter of Valerie and Roger Tannenbaum.

Becky Trahan, formerly Becky Wright is a character briefly mentioned in 'Cast Adrift' in the Incest/Taboo category.

Irwin Trahan, Marc's older brother is a character introduced in the 'Knowing Your Strength' series in the Nonhuman category.

Samantha Luquette, the Casa Ole waitress is introduced in 'Twist to Remove' in the Loving Wives category.

Carrie Hebert, the artist's exhibition at the Lopez Center that Holly and Hank attend is briefly mentioned in the 'Edge of Breaking' series in Lesbian Sex category. Her art is described in 'Painting Pearls' in the Lesbian Sex category.

The Lopez Center, where the Carrie Hebert exhibit is being shown is located where the former Johnson Furniture & Appliances Rent-To-Own used to be located. Anita Lopez, entrepreneur bought the building, then renovated it into a three story building, with amphitheater on the ground floor, and open floorplan on second and third floors. She then turned around and donated the building to St. Elizabeth Parish. Both Johnson Furniture & Appliances and Anita Lopez are introduced in the 'Wealth' series.

The Lambert condominiums are introduced in the 'Explanation of Love' series in the Lesbian Sex category.

Matthew 'Mattie' Goldman, Rickey and Woody are all introduced in 'Playing Kissy Face' in the Loving Wives category.

Daisy Upchurch and Paula Boudreaux, the residents of the trailer park are characters introduced in 'Vodka: Cinnamon' in the Mature category.

Penny Jones, Holly's attorney is introduced in 'Righting a Wrong' in the Romance category.

Parker Johnson, Mattie's attorney is introduced in 'Admission of Guilt' in the Romance category. His temperament as an attorney is further developed in 'Johnson, Johnson & Lambert' in the Romance category.

Professional Dry Cleaners, Mattie's place of employment is introduced in 'Nothing to Offer' in the Loving Wives category.

Donna Watson, her brother Jordan and Jordan's flirtatious boyfriend Mitchell are all characters introduced in 'Vodka: Tropical Passion' in the Group Sex category.

Buddy Roberts, the manager/owner of the trailer park is first introduced in 'Kindling & Tears' in the Loving Wives category. His position as owner and manager of the trailer park is introduced in 'Vodka: Tropical Passion' in the Group Sex category.

Henrietta's schoolmates, Clay Kraggle, Kincaid 'Bridges' Roberts, and Ashley St. Martin are all characters introduced in the 'Quantity Vs Inequality' series.

Milt Duhon, the chef of 'The Cast Iron Stomach' and the reporter, Chelsea Duhon, formerly Chelsea Guidry are characters first introduced in 'On Channel 12' in the Loving Wives category.

Lou Ellen Stamey is briefly mentioned in 'A Sugar cube Melts' in the Group Sex category. At the conclusion of that tale, it is revealed that the forty three year old Louellen is pregnant with Amelia Frances Stamey.

The Elgee Culinary College that Mealy attends is introduced in 'Life Anew' in the Transgender & Crossdressers category.

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Eaststand1306Eaststand13068 days ago

To be honest I got bored after the second page.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Yeah, but the tagline for this story is “Being used don’t feel too good.” And since the story really isn’t about the ex-wife, but about Hank and Holly, I have difficulty reconciling that line with the ending of the story, where Marc seems to be going along with the women’s program.

Because he was being used. Hank and Holly lied by omission. Not a good way to start a relationship, no matter how many people are involved. In fact, in this culture, unusual relationships require more honesty and taking even better care of each other’s feelings, because they have to constantly handle additional stresses from a judgmental society.

Sure, they’re pleasant, affectionate women and the sex is great, but you don’t have a baby on purpose without telling the guy up front that’s what you want. 🤬

So I am very sad for Marc. 😩

Sorry, I usually love your stories. Not this time.

RuttweilerRuttweilerabout 2 months ago
Enjoyable fantasy

What man wouldn’t feel like he were living in a waking dream?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I feel a bit bad for Mark. Does he ever find his true love? Or is he doomed to be just a tool--an approved male role model for two children--for two women who are each other's true love? Polyamory isn't really a tenable relationship.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

What a fun story. Loved it. Felt I was right there with them living sweet times in LA. Pass them redbeans and rice and buttermilk pie.

Ridiculous69Ridiculous694 months ago

Just not up to your usual standards. No character to like or root for. MC is way to weak and meek. The ending fell flat and made MC just a sad and spineless pushover.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

FTDS....Marc left because he asked Holly to marry him to which she declined because she was married to Hank which Holly had never disclosed to Marc. Marc leaves, Holly finds him to talk, but you never really resolve this dynamic. Does Marc end up the odd man out? Does Holly divorce Hank and marry Marc? Does Holly and Hank divorce and Hank marries Marc?....what's the final outcome...inquiring minds want to know.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

A great story, and given the fact you seem to excel at writing stories full of flawed characters, this is definitely par for the course. Yet, I can seem to feel sorry for Marc, and disgusted by Holly. He's a good man, one who has been "burnt" by his ex-wife, and I can totally understand why Holly, and then Hank both fell in love with him and decided they wanted him to father their children. But Holly started coming tonthat decision after going for dinner with him on the day his divorxe became final. She heard him tell him what happened, heaed him say that his ex-wife had lied and used him for her own benefit... and then decides to do the same thing to him. I'm not saying she should have told him that she was married then and there, but in that time they spent together, alone at work, and with Hank, surely she would have noticed him falling in love with her and her wife, and she never thought it was worth mention that Hank was in fact her wife, and that while they loved him, and wanted him in their lives, part of it was because they wanted him to be the father of their children? I've got nothing against bisexuality, or even polyamory, but he deserved to know what was happening before he commited to it. He deserved to know the truth and have the chance to say no before was tricked into the situation. Maybe it will all work out, maybe there is a happy ever after in the future for all 3(5?) of them living together as a family, but the simple fact is by not knowing until both Holly and Hank were pregnant, the two women who apparently love have have put hin in a position where saying no means also abandoning his children.

Polyamory works, I know this from personal and second hand experience, but it only works if there are no secrets and where everyone is on the same page. As for children and polyamory, sadly Ive seen relationships fall apart because of the lack of stability amongst the parents, and this is where Marc and his girls are heading. They are married, and protected by everything that means, but Marv is what? A Roommate? A sperm donor? A dildo with a heartbeat? Until that question is answered he will forever be a third wheel baby trapped into staying around for the wellbeing of his children. He deserves better than another relationship built on on a foundation of lies.

NoBullAlNoBullAl6 months ago

No problem with Microsoft SPELL Check but it would have been a good idea to re-read your work. Quite liked the story even given that it is most men’s fantasy…. Two beautiful and very horney women??? What could be better??

AllNigherAllNigher7 months ago

I like many of your stories but somehow this one fell flat for me....

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