by Grey Eagle 286
The story is too short, if you had thickened the plot a little, we could have been in suspense a lot longer, wondering how he got out of it. Now: pistol out = problem solved.
You get 4* from me because of the story - number 5* is gone because the story was to short!
Thanx for sharing!
Well cuckold you won in the end but you’re still a cuckold. But that is a true black plan since there are so many stupid white sluts to exploit by BBC..
I gave it a 5, not because of the writing, but because of the plot, and progression. The story could have been developed a lot more, with a lot of scenes, and emotional responses.
It amazes me how some of the characters in these stories, always have so much under control, and know exactly what to do.
I think this story went too fast, thanks for the effort.
I'm sick of reading about women over 40 who can pass for twenties and have these incredible figures with breasts that don't sag, no tummies, or cellulite or wrinkles anywhere. These same women all dress like Amsterdam hookers, wear perfect make-up, and have the libido of a male rabbit.
Congratulations! Your story wins the title of 'Most ridiculous, steaming crock of horseshit I've ever read (or started to read at any rate) on this website. You must be so proud.
Any man black, white Spanish or Asian touched my wife I would send him to the fucking morgue.