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Click hereAfter Mary had climaxed and was slowly recovering from it, Bud quickly moved and had her straddled him. He knew this might be dangerous since Mary may decide o stop and get off the bed. But he took the chance. Mary smiled and straddled Bud's hips. As she sat facing away from Bud at first she looked at Danny and said, "You! You look pathetic. This is a man! He's fucking me into more orgasms than you ever had. He's fucking me like none of the others. He's bigger, harder, and knows what he's doing so much better than you Danny! You're more like a boy and he's a man. Now you get to watch me fuck him now. Watch as I ride his big cock and watch as his cum runs all over us. WATCH IT DANNY!"
Mary and positioned his cock at the opening between her legs. She held him as she looked down into his eyes. She smiled as they both heard Danny screaming and cussing. Then Mary felt Bud's thick cock pushing up into her and she let her body fall taking him fully into her body again! She sat on him and as she looked at her husband she said in a sexual whisper, "Yes, oh yes! I have wanted this for so long! Oh God Bud. Fuck me. You feel so good!"
Bud had his cock in her body now and held it there as Mary tried to push up and down on him. He smiled and said, "Tell me Mary tell me what you want!"
She moaned and grunted the words, "Fuck me Bud!"
He said, "Louder! Tell me louder baby! What is it you want?"
She moaned as she sat down on Bud and he pushed all of his cock deeper into her body. She cried out, 'I want you to fuck meeee!! Oh Bud! OH God Baby that feels so good! Fuck me Bud! Fuck me! Fuck me! Fuck me!"
They both looked over at Danny and Bud said, "Tell him! Tell your husband what you want!"
She said, "Danny I want Bud to fuck me! Oh God he's so deep already Danny! Oh yes Bud! Fuck me! FUCK ME! FUCK MEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! OHHHHHHHH GOD YESSSSSSSS!!!!IT"SSOGOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Danny's face was blood red and he was screaming as tears ran down his cheeks. He had started crying again and cussing and was now going nuts with rage as he struggled against the handcuffs around his feet, hands and the rope around his body and things.
The chair fell over but he was completely secured to the big chair and could do nothing but lay there in the room inhaling the odor of sex coming from the big bed. He could no longer see them but he listening to his sweet young wife moaning and begging for Bud to fuck her harder and faster. He heard the bed squeaking as Bud did just that. He fucked her like a machine, like a whore she was. Bud his brother-in-law had cuckold him rather than the other way around..
It was suppose to be Danny fucking Mandy. But Bud had changed the plan Danny had set up for many nights. Bud would fuck Mary in three different positions, missionary, and then she was riding his cock. Then Bud got up and sat Danny back up so he was looking at the bed again. He bent down and looked Danny in his eyes and said, "Now you know how the fuck I felt you little shit! But now Mary is mind whenever I want her. Right Mary? If I tell you to come over to my house without Danny here and fuck me you'll come won't you?"
She smiled and said, "yes!"
Bud said, "Tell him Mary tell your husband your pussy is my pussy now. I'll let you fuck him but when I call you you better show up." She said, "I'll be there in 10 minutes baby! As long as you eat my pussy first I'll fuck you until we can't walk. Now get back up here and finish me off. And you little cock, watch and learn."
Danny was defeated he sat there and watched as his wife smiled at him when she felt her new lover and brother-in-law push his big dick back into her vagina. Bud was finally living out his favorite fantasy, he was fucking Mandy's youngest sister doggie style. And to add the icing on the top of Bud's cake they would be doing it right in front of her husband Danny.
Bud would show him what it truly felt like to see his sweet young wife get nailed as Bud filled her pussy over and over again during the night with more and more cum. Each time they woke up Mary would suck him hard again and he would fuck her and cum inside her. Danny stayed restrained all night and had to watch since Bud woke him each time that he was ready to fuck Mary again. Many times Mary woke Danny before she sucked Bud's cock so Danny could see her do it! Released after release was happening with both of them as Mary couldn't stop climaxing and Bud shot his load until he had nothing left. Finally in the morning they showered together and then Bud ate her pussy again making her scream with rapture as she had orgasm after wonderful orgasm. Then she asked Bud to move Danny into the other room.
Bud slid Danny and the chair into the bathroom and when he came back to the bed. Mary sat on his cock and rode him facing towards him this time. She hung her tits in his face and he sucked and made love t them until she screamed with one last climax. Bud held her hips and as she rocked back and forth on top of him he pumped another load of his cum into her body. They were both finally drained to the point they fell asleep again.
When they woke this time it was over and Bud left. Mary kissed him goodbye and told him to call her. He said he would. Now she would have to suffer the raft of her husband's hate. But she could handle it she was sure since she always had Bud if Danny was to mad and left her. After all they had agreed to cuckold and let her other men what could he do about it? Nothing she had him by the short hairs and he and she both knew it. But deep inside she didn't give a shit what happened to either of them now that she had fucked Bud she knew who she wanted.
He was moving on now and Jan and that asshole of a husband John was next for his revenge. It wouldn't be completed until he had done to Jan and John what he did to Mary and Danny. It would be harder since Danny would certainly tell John what happened.
Now he went home and was going to tell Mandy where he was all night and what he did. He wanted to see her face when she realized he had fucked her youngest sister and they both loved it!
- COMMENTS
avator12315 days agoI'm not certain what's going on .) It's not clear how Mandy is grounded, is she allowed to go outside at all?
I thought Mandy needs a lesson, and it was intriguing whether she became fateful now lol. But I'm pretty sure she would jump on any cock on the first opportunity.
i122over 3 years agoThis is a great story however I fail to understand why Danny would be upset his wife is fucking someone, regardless if that someone is his brother in law. I mean one the night they went to Mary’s cuckold party she offered him her pussy before Bud got pissed off because his wife was taking a strangers dick
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoStill , Great writing but this gets kinda busy and doesn't flow with the rest of the story
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis story was going great until Bud flipped out. Too bad the story didn't have Bud come around. You lost me at the end. It was shaping up to be one of my favorites.
Anonymousover 18 years agoGreat story twist which will satisfy those readers who can't handle the emotions of a cuckold being made into a wimp.
I felt the talent of the writer in chapter one, I was sure there were some great twists to come, and I sure have been rewarded for my patience.
Just goes to show that if you set out with malicious intent to fuck your brother-in-law's wife (Mandy in this case), things can turn on you in ways you could never have imagined. Danny has been taught an amazing lesson.
I just new Bud would get both Mandy and his heart throb, Mary. Jan is out there, but I don't know what will happen there. That is "writer's priviledge".
Just imagine for a moment, that Bud, a susposedly "cuckold wimp" gets the three sisters to dance to the tune of his cell phone calls in the future. That surely would be "cuckold's revenge" sweetly magnified - the ultimate reward.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agobut I enjoyed what I read. In my opinion, Bud should get his revenge. But, if one was so inclined, how can someone like Bud truly get revenge on Mandy's sisters? Not much he could do without showing they still had control. It'd be like "you cheated so I'm gonna beat up your boyfriend". control is still in her court. so what does he do? he take control away from them... from the husbands and from the sisters. he humiliates the husband while Bud has his wife completely submitting to his whim because she sees how good sex can be. It's all about control. and Bud's just starting to get that back. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoAs an author you have complete latitude to write the story in any manner that suites you. It makes sense to me, having written stories for other sites, to always start by developing an outline. In fact, I spend significantly more time in developing the outline than in actually executing on that outline by writing the text.
I would question whether you ever had an OUTLINE for the story as a whole. The outline represents a vision for your. You can have a vision without an outline but it becomes harder to execute on that idea if the story is quite long.
When you write without an outline it’s like building a house without a blueprint: you start off thinking that it will have 4 walls, you add a fifth, then wonder where that second room came from. Well, as a reader, I am peering into that unexplained second room and wondering what was the builder thinking?
I can tell by the comments that a number of readers like the passion and emotion that you’ve brought to many of the passages. I like those too, I however, expect them to be a part of a coherent story and not isolated interludes of emotional release.
DoctorWylCard has been helpful in giving his interpretation of the story to date. Unfortunately, his statements while interesting, are not on point with the issues raised in numerous comments about inconsistencies in several characters behavior from one chapter to another. You don’t have ‘character drift’ if you work from an outline. Wnen you have too many inconsistencies in a story the very fabric of the story comes apart and it’s integrity becomes suspect.
I expect a personality to change in a story, but there must be some catalyst for that change, some reason. In addition, that catalyst should be apparent to me as the reader. Bud’s personality changes are inexplicable in light of what we have been told. Therefore, his outrage in this chapter left me confused.
I will not rehash other problems with how Bud was drawn in the story, or the problems with the sisters and the other participants. Reading through the comments here I think that others have done a great job in expressing my concerns.
What I find equally disturbing though, is your complete silence in addressing any of these obvious idiosyncrasies in the story. You venture a comment with attacks but never clarifications. If you had been silent and your editor had spoken then I would not be writing this note. But I don’t think you use an editor and you should. You ARE a good writer and therefore, editing your work would be challenging. So you need an accomplished editor. I hope you get one for the next story you write.
As it stands now so much damage has been done in chapter 10 that I cannot fathom how the last chapter will resolve the issues that a number of readers have pointed out. I’m eagerly awaitng the end of this trainwreck. Perhaps your next story will be more thought out in advance.
gizzmo301almost 19 years agoI understand the swinging, open marriage bit. If Husband and wife agree with no game playing and everything out in the open, I guess different strokes for different folks... but not for Me. This story is about extreme lying by the sisters. They mary, Jan wanted sex with big cocks, John Mary's husband talked mary into betraying her sisters This story is about Control, Lying, deciet revenge to the extreme as ate most of NeedYou's stories... To bad they have to be so extreme to make us think. So we don't make the same Mistakes .....Sharing your wife or husband makes a great fanasy. But most of us are kinda like Bud ...we can't live with the reality. Keep them comming NeedYou... you make us think and hit us where we live.
PS... Gee My son is Navy also but I am just a proud Dad
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoThis is one of the most stupid stories I've ever read.
This cuckhold voyeur "Bud" has always fantasized about fucking the sisters. Not only that, but he musturbates while watching them fuck strangers, some with dick a few times his size (working in the gym wouldn't have increased his dize diameter that much!); he fantasizes about Mandy, his own wife, fucking others. Just didn't want to give her permission.
Fuck that, as Mandy correctly did: I'll fuck any one big dicked guy I like, just like my sisters! (The tears and begging are only to appease our hero Budhead's false ego.)
Budhead's just not honest like the other husband. He's a little man in a big man's shell. The other guys and their women are at least honest and open; they enjoy what they do. "Bud" pretends to be just the opposite, but in reality he pretends to be offended when they invited him, when his loving wife Mandy, invited, him to their place and watch them fuck Roger and other dig dicked brothers.
Bud the voyeur keeps his pretense even as he fucks one of the sisters and intends to fuck another. But he's not man enough, despite his violent streaks, so he require the wives to handcuffed their husabnd first; so as he fucks their wives --- normal activities for ALL, including our Bud hero! --- they can't easily masturbate, which is what they crave: watching other man bang their wives so they can musturbate!
They are sexual beings who have spouses who are honest and open to sex and can scream all kinds of halirious things while at it: "Oh, god, you be the best, man. You tear my little vagina to pieces, lover. Yeah, yeah, deep. Show my husband you be my main man!"
It's sheer idiocy! The other two husbands are sexual people. Our hero/anti-hero "Bud" is a masochistic and VIOLENT, pot head voyeur!
Revenge?, yeah right!
Mandy, being a sexual person also, should kick this Budhead's ass out the door and have the kind of sex she wants, openly, like the other sisters and their husbands, instead of suffering with this Budhead idiot, who pretends to be moral, ethical, and monogomous --- but he's going to use his false puritanical idiocy to fuck around and deny Mandy what she really wants: Roger's big dick and others like that, like the other two sister have been having with their respective husband's blessing.
Per our Budhead hero: "This is revenge against those mother fuckers who have corrupted my little faithful and loving wife Mandy. And, folks, you've heard from the horse's mouth: Mary and Jan, too, soon --- both will have promised to be my private whores after just one good fuck! I promise you that; I'll show their wimpy husbands and that little Roger-dicked guy who's the real man where these beautiful sisters are concerned!!!"
It is so stupid, the plotting of this story! LOL
