All Comments on 'Culture Shock'

I guess that is all that I can really say, this was a brilliant story.

This is a story I would recommend to anyone who wanted to get into BDSM. This is a must read.

This is a remarkable story, and so very realistic, about a journey into a new sexual place.

A woman having desires that she can't understand. Trying to put them down, but in weakness she gives in.

Sounds eerily familiar.

Well done, and do keep writing. I for one, will keep reading.

Please don't leave me hanging like this I must know what happens. please continur with the story

Please write more, this story had me hooked from start to finish. Don't leave us hanging!

Thank you so much for this story!

I couldn't stop reading it!

hot and very informative!

Thank you so much for this story. Well written, informative, and HOT! I'm prepared to beg for more!!!

This is amazing! So informative and I found myself wishing it was made into a book! Please, you have to finish it, this is not a good cliff hanger, I MUST know the rest!

It is so well written and sounds familiar.. ;)

I think this is a great story. This is exactly what I hope will one day happen to me.. and it also gave me a lot of good information about the D/S lifestyle.

I relate to this story a lot in my curiosity and wish to know more about the lifestyle. I've tried entering into D/S relationships beginning online, but always knew something was off. Now I've discovered what was missing: respect. Thank you from saving me from being one of those girls who has to learn the hard way that not all Dominants are right for them. This is a wonderful story that helped me make a breakthrough in my life as well as educate me. I don't know if that's what you were going for, but you succeeded. Thank you, Sir_Nathan.

Pleease don't just leave it at that hanger! You write such a great, thought-invoking story....among other things....

Please write more!

This was the most incredible bit of literature.

I haven't been so absorbed in a long time.

Thankyou!

(and please... I want to know where this relationship goes... please give us a sequel!)

So much care and work went into this story! It's impressive to read a piece this well edited - it helps it go straight past the brain and to the right places. I couldn't help but think that the writer must be a woman, because of the phrasing and POV - so shocked when I read the username!

So hot Sir

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I love this! I printed it off for reading anywhere I want!

Sir,

I loved this story. Absolutely loved it!!! Thank You, for writing and posting it here.

i also was wondering if the author is a woman - finding a man who has THIS incredible amount of patience and communicative skills AND a dominant streak all at the same time - maybe i should move to Australia :)

having read the story with pleasure and wetness and intellect and with a little regret that i am neither as young nor have been as careful to select the right experiences for me, - i can only offer my sincerest thank You from the other side of the world (Germany).

:)

You are incredible talented. This was the first erotic story I read and coming back to it years later I'm really glad it was my first. It is well writted, respectful yet super fricken hot, was a great way to ease into BDSM, and taught me what to look for in my perfect guy :D

You write a story this long.. A really good story.. But very very long... And you leave us like that. You horrible horrible tease. I mean really 36 pages and you leave us without ANY of their weekend. Just cruel.

That was the best story I've ever read on this site, thank you for writing it.

Wow. The story... I read it in one day... :) Its apsolutley great, and i did read there isnt suposed to be a part 2, but i beg you to write one... I would be so happy if you did... But, keep on the good work with all stories, they are magical... :)

Rly hope u did more with this story than just post it here ... it deserves more.

PERFECT

Wow awesome story love it. So awesome. Charcters r awesome. All I seem to be able to say is awesome lol. Anyway I would totally read more ty

Befitting the title I was "shock"ed and fell even deeper into being curious about this "culture". It's scary how life can be so coincidental; I am 20, virgin & been curious about dominance & submission. This is was wonderful story that made me blush, giggle, and smile like a idiot. Even if its just "characters in a story" I genuinely cheer them on and feel happy/excited for them.

Interesting choice. Leaving all of us readers to our own imaginations as to just HOW fabulous Elaine's and Gary's consumation would be is probably best. Zero chance of dissappointing anyone that way.

Fabulous writing, I enjoyed it tremendously. In fact, this is the first comment I've ever left. (Although I do regularly vote for stories I like.)

Thanks so much!

Well written, with lots of good solid background stuff for the curious, and without being full of cliches. Some of the best fiction I've seen in this genre, both in quality of writing, believability, and knowledge of the lifestyle itself.

Please dear god let there be more! I'm obsessed with your story! So beautiful and erotic.... Please!

Sir Nathan written one of the best stories. Culture shock leaves you breathless!

I want more!!!

Resilyn~

Wonderful story. I too want more. What about the rest of the weekend and after that? There has to be more. I absolutely got hung up in the story. Please continue or at least complete the weekend.

wheres the rest..........

Although you had me in a fit of "nooooo"s and pouts, I think for a cliff hanger, that was the best way to end it. I read a little bit of this story over the course of four, maybe five days and it became an enjoyable part of my day, so ill surely miss it. Fantastic job.

I am like the others, I wanted more. Yet it was perfect, we all know what happens next. She finds herself and somehow in reading this story I feel I found some pieces of me as well. I even cried when reading certain parts.

All of us who feel we are submissive, want some of what this story offers. Not only was it intriguing and provocative, but also very informative.

Thank you for sharing it with us!

I read this story while recovering from an accident. It reminded of my submissive self. I read a little bit for several days. I looked forward to it like having a chat with an intimate friend. Although Sir Nathan was able to transport me to Elaine's bedroom, I was left wanting to see her submission truly take hold, (at least Friday night). Can't wait to be dominated again soon.

I read this story 5+ years ago and thought it was excellent. I had just started exploring D/s at the time and Gary and Elaine's journey gave Me My first real explanation of what D/s can be and why it is not be anathema to a healthy, caring relationship.

Then I met "her" in an online sim.

After more than a year of exploring in the sim and then outside the sim, we decided to become more serious and she became My online, long distance submissive and I sent her a leather collar as well as a "day" collar. Still, we had no real intention of ever meeting for real - we lived 1000+ miles apart.

As our relationship grew, however, that intention changed. I remembered Gary's concern for Elaine's safety and His advice for a real life meeting. I applied that advice to our first meeting. To say it was "wonderful" and "life altering" would be a gross understatement!

My kitten has worn My collar for going on 3 years now. I know, by your biography statement, that you are no longer writing, which I understand if your work is being stolen. However, I do wish to thank you for your stories as they are from an obviously knowledgeable and experienced Master. You have helped Me as well as, I'm sure, countless others find a sane and safe path. Without your stories, many of us would not have found those missing pieces to a happier life and fulfilling relationship. Thank you.

This is very well written and very fascinating. Please submit to publishers and get a novel (and finish the story for me) ;-)

Very well written and intriguing :)

This is my FAVORITE story ever! I only have one complaint and I know u cobered this in the begining but it would be AWSOME if u added more! Anyway BEST story ever!!!

I have been reading for a long time in the BDSM section never have i been so entranced in a story...wish You would have written a sequel to it. I will have to definately share this with my Daddy Dom! <3

This is one of the most erotic and frustrating stories I have ever read. Elaine's story of exploration could so be my own except for Gary. Where are you?!

Not only is this story breathtaking and well written, but it made me realize the submissive in myself. And I can accept that part of me, now. I always thought there was something wrong with me. Thank you for letting me discover my submissiveness and soothing my concerns of being such. Thank you.

This story is absolutely breathtaking. The discovery, the hesitation... you capture it so well. And the last couple lines! I absolutely squealed with delight! Thank you for writing this.

This story was spectacular. I stayed up almost all night to finish reading it. I loved how real it felt- how much thought you put into the characters, and not just the two main ones. Thank you for writing.

I do wish, you could at least wrote something about the ride back to the ranch.. i didn't wanted it to end..

Even though at the outset you said we wouldn't be joining Elaine & Gary once they were alone, but the wonderful way you have written this story on the mental preparation of a willing novice submissive demands more of their tale. This has been without a doubt the best story I've read here. Congraulations. I wish I had a sub like Elaine, perfect!!

that was an amazing story. thank you so much. it taught me a lot. so sad to be done with the story. loved it.

Thank you so much for this intriguing story. I couldn't stop reading and it has helped me come to some realizations about my nature.

I have read this story multiple times and it is still my favorite. I love the characters, the way it builds and grows. I wish there was more. I wish Sir Nathan was still writing.

my heart is broken that Sir_Nathan has stopped writing. Yet i continue coming back in the hopes that He will return, while reading and rereading this story as well as His other works.

Thank you for a beautiful story that has stuck with me and changed me.

I think it's only right to leave a comment when I enjoy something as much as I thoroughly, thoroughly enjoyed this. I laughed, I learned and I came hard. Like five times. You're a masterful story teller and I really saw a lot of myself in Elaine. It made me so curious about pursuing the bdsm lifestyle that I joined the chat yesterday!

The only thing that makes me mad is that Gary doesn't exist. I feel my expectations have become higher that ever before.

This has been one of the best stories I have ever read!!! I Really wanted it to continue. Still a Wonderful Story.

Thank you.

You magnificent b*stard! I was fair warned in the epilogue, but even still, you are such a tease!

Well...this was something indeed. From start to finish a thoroughly engaging read. Don't regret a single minute of it.

Breathtaking, completely irresistible, and such a wonderfully twisted cliffhanger. I'll be waiting for more

One of the most amazing and intoxicating stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. If not a sequel, I you've love to read another story that is instead featured around the becoming of a Dominant. This story certainly taught me a lot and I hope that can learn more through your writing. Thank you.

that was amazing

found it difficult to take breaks from it ,i felt so desperate to continue reading ,

brought alot of smiles to my face ,it may have been "just a story" but there is alot of truth in it and it brought back more than a few very fond memories

thankyou

I read this story a while ago, before I was a member, and I pulled an all-nighter because I couldn't stop reading it. I don't have any real criticism as this is the best story I've ever read. Thank you for taking the time to write it <3

I know, that sounds boring. But while you enjoy reading about the developing relationship between Dom and sub and it gets you hot, it also teaches the uninitiated a lot about BDSM.

Simply amazing. I stayed glued to my computer literally an entire day and night reading this wonderfully artistic and informational work. I really felt like I learned a lot! Thank you so much for writing this story as it was, again, simply amazing!

Gorgeously written, a pleasure to read. If wishes were horses...

Thank you.

Honestly, the ending pissed me off. Only because I wanted more. I BEG you. Please. Write more to this story. Please.

This was the best sexual awakening story I've ever read. Period.

The ending is disappointing ): they didn't have sex TT And Duke could be more dominant

The story is wonderful but I'd like to hear about the rest of their weekend. I'd also like to know if she chose to be his submissive after the weekend.

Your story was very enlightening to me, and has helped put me on the path to discovering a part of myself that I have been suppressing for a very long time. You are a true artist!

Very real. Very relatable on so many levels, with more explanation of emotions and desires that that even i didn't understand of myself when i was in a similar situation. Thank You for writing this.

Why the fuck is this not finished

I need it to be finished

Please at least finish the weekend! Its killing me!!!

As a long term sub it was so good to read a story that was real, not just about punishment. Please write some more......especially about the controlling aspects ;)

Wow..just...wow. Please tell me there is more?! I could not stop reading.

To all those anons out there wishing for more, it's not going to come, I hope you know that.

To the ever wonderful Sir Nathan, this is the best story in the BDSM category, and possibly the best on literotica. You are truely a master of your art, and I thank you for sharing this. This is the fifth time I've read it, and it certainly won't be the last. Thank you again.

This story is about 15 years old and I've read it before. It is beautiful. The anticipation, the yearning is what makes it so powerful. The discussions of D/s are quite realistic too. A sequel is not possible because the hopes, dreams, hints, and possibilities would never live up to what the reader imagines.

What a fantastically honest representation of discovering kink in the modern world. Thank you for mixing in so many safety tips that people often neglect. This work was extremely well written, informative, and sexy. You even wove In a lighthearted and believable side plot. Who could ask for more? I'm just in love with the detailed and positive representation of the lifestyle.

As a female submissive who got her start in bdsm online, I identify heavily with Elaine ( though I don't think I've ever been so innocent and pure haha)...and I've been lucky to know a couple 'Garys' in my journey as well. So this story hits close to home and I see a lot of truth in it.

Outstanding work. I will recommend this to my curious friends in the future.

Sorry to double comment but I began reading feedback begging for a sequel finishing the weekend and I feel the need to point out how impossible this would be.

Think about Elaine and her desperation, longing, and fear of the unknown. She logically knows all she can about BDSM. She is extremely knowledgeable by the end, she has read it all, she has had all her questions answered, she’s enjoyed countless stories and thought introspectively, but that’s all the antechamber to an actual scene.

The entire point of this story is that submission cannot be 100% defined and explained. It has to be felt. Gary’s words apply here: “Imagine us together and times it by 100.” He reiterates that honest submission is unimaginable and must be experienced. Elaine also thinks within this theme. “I HAVE to KNOW.” She knows with her mind but not with her heart.

Yes, I join you in disappointment that we cannot know Elaine’s kinky adventures. But even if we read of them, we still wouldn’t KNOW, and it would only be continued disappointment. From the moment they agreed to meet, I knew it would end like this because it simply must.

The ending is frustrating, brilliant, beautiful, and perfect for the story. If you wish to read sexy stories, Sir_Nathan (and other authors) have written plenty.

If you wish to feel submission vicariously through Elaine…well…sorry to say it’s just impossible. I suppose you’ll have to find your own Gary. ;)

For someone who is just beginning the journey this beautiful story has opened my eyes and has me doing some serious soul searching. There is nothing more I can say that hasn't already been said here by the 300+, just add me to the list of admirers of your amazing talent.

This was amazing. Well written, thought provoking. Thorough and reassuring for the curious and un-initiated.

Would love a sequel that encompassed their weekend. Wish you were still submitting.

Just sayin'.

thank you for the story ...

thank you A LOT

This was an awesome read. I guess I'm "vanilla" (LOL) but this is better than any story I've read before and not scary at all. Thanks for a look inside your world.

A truly amazingly real story about a very complex topic. I won't ask for a sequel but simply say l understand why..... read it all in one long sitting

We just got to the good stuff!! ;-) Thanks for a lovely story.

I read the entire thing in one setting. I wish it was continued, but thank You for a great story. Such a wonderful job bringing life to the characters, and the depth of the story bdsm wise was amazing. :)

Hands down the best story I've read. Two hours of sleep because I couldn't put it down and then I spent the day at work having the same problem Elaine had. Thank god for underwear.

This was exactly what I was looking for without even knowing it. Literally almost EVERYTHING described in Elaine I found within myself, tendencies, desires even personality traits which has made me feel like maybe I've found a niche. Thank you for being my "Gary" and being the first baby step into this alluring world. Looks like I need to follow Elaine's next step and do some research. Truly beautiful in its writing and story line.

Started reading as a quick "give me something before bed" fix. Its now 5am. Amazing story, came a few times and really hoping there is a carry on from this!! Can't wait to read more xo

This was such an amazing read! It really educated me and opened my mind to the BDSM community. And I love how I can really relate with Elaine on her curiosity level. I hope you write more soon!

Wow. Thank you so much for taking your time with this story, slowly exploring Elaine's thought processes and emotional journey and building her relationship with Gary. It's so wonderful and refreshing to read a BDSM sexual-awakening story that patiently explores both the psychology and sexuality in equal measures. Some of the insights sprinkled in are gold. The evolution of Elaine's roommates is also a surprising pleasure to read. This has been so enjoyable to read overall, and I will be checking back for updates.

Oh dear, my mistake. I assumed the story was already finished. It stands perfectly as it is, of course, an incredibly worthwhile read for anyone who is interested or curious or relates to Dominance/submission. Thank you again for writing and sharing.

Is probably my all time favorite. While I'd love to read about the weekend the moments leading up to everything is very well written. I actually think happening upon this story years ago is what set me on this path and so for that i am greatfull. Well done!

Looking for something quick and simple, I came across this and thought ah what the hell. Dear god, I was drawn in and ready to read more. This was truly amazing and has left me grasping for more! amazing job!

Oh god, you FINALLY get to where you want and look where you stop ! Please continue !

That was amazing, I cannot wait to see more!

All that build up and anticipation and you end it right there!? I love it XP even if I desperately want more

Oh please write more to this story!!! I couldn't stop reading!!!

Finish it! fuck that was amazing it kept drawing me in day after day untill I finished it now I want more next step take all 3 girls and make them yours

This was by far the best story I have read...I look forward to reading more.

Whens the rest f the story getting published?

This has answered so many questions on how it should/could be, to a newcomer like myself. I love the fact it was very erotic and yet informative and comforting to also know others have had to approach the lifestyle at some point and were virgins in the bdsm sense. Sorry im incoherent at this moment :p

This was absolutely my favorite story I've read on this site. Although of course it was sexy as hell, there was so much more to it than that. By the end of it, I was in love with Gary myself and shipped he and Elaine very strongly! It was powerful and well-written and informative. Please, keep writing!

Very well witten. Good balance between plot and erotic scenes.

Only found one spelling mistake.

Thank you !

Please finish the weekend!!!