All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

good...... it had awaken both love and lust....!!!!!!!!!

Ive read this a few times and still love it!

...I see a couple people got riled up at the 'dream' story she fed her dad. Heh. ...of course the whole point was to say something specific to get her dads panties in a twist. I suppose the complainers wouldn't have said anything if it were a couple of dirty white bikers that had raped her... No, they wouldn't have said a fucking thing. Just because certain characters are being used doesnt make something racist. You act like there couldnt be arab rapists, I assure you there are. Just like there are rapists of every other race, nationality and religion out there in the world. You shouldnt have to walk on eggshells just because someone takes offense at something. Someone is ALWAYS going to be offended!

"The dirty, smelly rapists of unknown color, nationality, religion and sex raped me in my dream daddy! The penises were blurred out with a sensor mark daddy so they could have been using strap-ons, so who knows what sex they were daddy! Oh wait, I shouldnt call you daddy, should I? That might offend the straight males out there by insinuating that a daddy might fuck his daughter, wouldn't want to offend that group!! Oh, parent of unknown sex and sexual orientation, I was so scared!! The socially challenged persons of unknown race, religion, sex and sexual orientation in my dream raped me! Oh nevermind, I'm sure it was all my own fault and somehow I must have convinced them that its what I wanted!"

Yeesh!

Amazing story. Great plot, outstanding structure. Simply

and utterly addicting. Couldn't stop reading!

Made my so horny and my cock really hard

I stopped at the first page. 'These big smelly Arab men wanted to rape me cause I was American??? Get the FUCK out of here with that shit

Really turned me on = must go and visit my Daddy!

Got my cock up, dripping and throbbing

i really enjoyed this story from start to finish. It reminds me of my own daughter where we have a loving father/daughter relationship and wonder if it would go further. Keep writing stories as they do captivate the imagination.

I really got turned on and couldn't stop until I finished it. Really well described though the end seemed like an effort to not make it any longer. I quite liked it.

I made it to the end so i felt I owed you a comment and a rate. pretty great story man! The only thing that was a little weird was the first part. it was something along the lines of "what if there are more foreigners daddy?". It just felt unnecessarily racist and out of place. I gave it 4 stars on an otherwise 5 out of 5 for that. Good work!

Probably the best story I've read on here. Literary style is mesmerizing and made me breathe heavy. Love the idea of a beautiful young woman seducing her father. Dr. James is a lucky man! best of all, it's a love story that ends quite beautifully. Great job!

My pussy was so wet when he finally took her. I love your stories! They are perfect to read right before letting my fingers explore my naughty place.

Keep writing and we will keep reading, good stuff .

So nice to read a story about "LOVE". A forbidden coupling,barriers to be broached,entrenched morals to be wrestled with,all being overcome in the name of love. Well done!

This was a wonderful story, I hope you continue writing and let us see more of these intense heart felt stories... personally I wondered what would happen if the girl was only 15 or 16? ha ha ha

Thanks again for a great story

I loved it, needed more action .. probably her dad licking her good. Don't end such a sexy story with kids .. took away from the excitement. These are just stories but I really wana try it..

Loved the buildup. Needs a tad more action and depravity. Maybe some thrills. I really liked the parts when she wasn't legal, it really reveals how she was raised. An interesting young woman

great love story and a very lucky daddy to have a daughter/wife as you

The girl seems immature, childish, and spoiled. Nothing attractive about that.

Very good story but it lacked some details...

It was a long but enjoyable read but I felt a little cheated when I finally got to them having sex. I expected more details. For example; the magically appearing finger in the ass.... the scene needed more details like how it got there, how she felt at the first contact and so on.

All in all, I enjoyed it but it left me wishing it had more.

great job

Great storie thst really got me excited.Disnt want it to end

The Daddy and daughter first experience during the European honeymoon needed to be developed more. Remember this was their first sexual experience. The reader wants more graphic description of the bedroom scene. Could she un robe and let it drop so Daddy could see a woman dressed in a sensual satin corset and nylons. Could the daughter see that the Father( lover) was the man going to de-flower her pussy for the first time, as a special moment . Heavy breathing, dimmed lights, a bed that shook violently. the reader wants more. However, the writer did a great job anyhow.

Thank you so much for righting this. It was fantastically written, and had a gorgeous storyline that makes me wish I could just keep reading it forever!

Very, very well written. Thanks for sharing, I only wish it had been longer.

I thought the story was great! The Arab comments were a little much,but other than that,it was fab! It shows that if u dont get over something it'll drag on forever and stef definetly didn't let moms death get in the way of her true love!

You made the excuse she used the racist men raping her to awaken her father and how she used a fear of his or what would be scary. Why would it only be Arabic men and no other race worked when the events took place long before 9/11/01? That makes as little sense as it does to use a particular race to paint as gross and bad. Would her father not have been just as horrfied by the white and dirty red necks who violated her with their crack smoking, toothless mouths? I suggest he would have been every bit as horrified. The rest of the story was great, but that part did mess up the flow.

To the idiot speaking about the world hating America and being racist against us, well I suggest to you that crap like what is written in this story, your attitude, and a continued sense of entitlement has caused that scorn for us. The if you can read this in English thank a soldier is frankly insulting to soldiers and their families, and I would know. Other countries learn to read and write in their own language and a great number of them also learn in English. That has more to do with their superior education system and the importance that is placed on learning. Even being far behind most of the world in all school subjects people like you continue to feel superior, and then don't understand you are a huge part of why no one likes Americans. We aren't being shipped overseas to fight and die so the world can hate us and believe we are all entitled, ignorant tools. We are being shipped to fight to help make a difference in the world. That fact is obviously lost on one, such as yourself, with your own head shoved so far up your backside. Enjoy your entitled opinion of yourself, but at least try to realize you are the only one tooting your horn.

Yeah the dirty Arab rape stuff,I ignored,and the married part and blah blah.. But I loved it..I always like the energy of the daddy who wants it but holds himself back.

I usually read father/son but this is first one I read about father/daughter and I enjoyed it...it just need a bit of the sex story since that is the reason we are read this story

I can feel the love and romance, best story i read so far :) please write more!

I was getting really into it and it was a great story, but the racist comments about Arabs and white supremacy and dirty foreigners completely threw me off. I couldn't enjoy it after that which was a real shame! Please consider editing the racist comments out!

It's very romantic and full of feelings between lust and love and joy ... you are one of my favorite writers but honestly i notice some kind of racist about Arabs in your stories thats disappointed me .in the first chapter about the dream of his daughter to seduce her father and second in your story ( Alison's ankle ) I hope you avoid this area during your writes to keep all your reads around you if you really want them around ...

more on the sexy seduction and teasing

That's it. Simply exquisite.

What a wonderful story. It's not just centered into lust but also into love. You should write more stories.

"So?" you asked, Why don't more readers vote? I can only speak for myself, naturally. Still, I believe my feelings are the same as others. We are taught from people who are embarrassed to even raise the subject. These kind people are afraid to talk to us, their young children.

Such power there is in fear, one suspected back then. So confusing and indeed, worrying. When we learned anything about sex, as we grew up, it was likely from a friend, who knew little, a book we were not supposed to be reading, or from a kind, concerned, informed, loving adult. That latter may have happened to others, but I never saw it.

So, we, your readers, have been programmed since we were tykes, to not respond to those who, like you, inform us with love and caring. What a shame: for us to fear, even late into our years.

Your story is great. Loved it. Never had a daughter, but I am not surprised to read your statements about the number of father-daughter love relationships there has been. Great job, Scouries

Jack

This was racist against arabian people and messed up fantasy. Having children with family can cause life risking problems for the children. It is illegal and i think its wrong that a dad fucks his daughter, and blaming that the mother left isnt a good enough reason for them to have sex.

so you hate the story and the fact that its father daughter love but you clearly

clicked on incest read the entire story just to waste your time on a hate comment to express your disgust ....but you still wanted to read it thats i call a disgusting

hater

personally i loved it

I loved it your really good at writing these kinds of stories!

A bunch of you guys that are hatin on this writer and saying "who do you think you are trying to write professional stories" or whatever should just leave as well as those who are saying this is sick and this is bullshit. If you didn't like it then why'd you keep fucking reading? Yes you do have the freedom of speech but, BITCH you also have the right to remain silent! Now before all of you try to reply to me and say "go fuck yourself!" I just wanna tell you four words. Been there, done that.

I love how people want to hate on The writer in this comment box. If you don't like it don't fucking read it. It was your choice to b on this specific page so get over your self. To the writer you did a fantastic job an fuck anyone who says other wise. Their obviously have mixed emotions about said topic yet were intrigued enough about it to read far enough to get to the comment box on the last page.. Congrads on writing an entertaining story :)

I loved this story cause I hate stinky fat arabs

Loved the story so sexy and wonderful ending. Anna

WHAT BULL SHIT ARE THESE PEOPLE TODAY FUCKING IGNORANT OR WHAT MESSING AROUND WITH THERE FAMILY MEMBERS LIKE THAT THAT IS TOTAL UNCALLED FOR BULL SHIT YOU BOTH SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELVES THAT IS TOTAL DISGUSTING

Omg omg who do you think u are to be writing professional stories? Go fuck yourself

That awkward moment where white supremacy rears its ugly head takes away from the story...

Yea right!!! Keep spreading hatred towards arabs, people like you keeping racist on the road. As for the story, it was amazing I'll be objective here. So thanks for the magnificent story you racist fuck. (No sarcasm, I like your story much)

An 18 year old girl does not get accepted into medical school. She needs to attend college for four years. A girl with this amount of immaturity has not completed four years of college. I realize that stories on this site are fantasies, but the fantasies are supposed to in the relationships, not in distorting the way things operate in the world. In some aspects, the story is well told, but, as always, you should write about things that you understand.

even though there was quite a bit of sex, i think it was more of a love story. 5 stars because i couldnt give more.

I truly enjoyed this I am with my (daddy) for twenty years....

Love the relationship and excitement between father and daughter.

Looovvvveeeeddddd the ending. Great story.

I'd suggest, if you took offense to what was said in the story, either don't read it or simply go back to your own country.

It seemed as if you took your time to write such an amazing story, not just a slutty daddy fuck me story. I sat on the edge of my seat reading your story, I really loved this story such depth and body. Thank you for sharing such a exciting story. I wish more stories were of this caliber, you are obviously a good writer please!! Keep up the good work.

Super enjoyable to read! The only thing I would say is that you have a couple of grammatical errors and writing no-nos that could easily be remedied by having a skilled beta reader or editor. That is the only thing that leaves you a hair short of literary taboo perfection! ;) As I said, it's only a couple of things. Also, while I don't condone racism, it actually suited the story; it is perfectly believable for a young woman, the daughter of a surgeon (and therefore probably very sheltered and naive), to fear a group of people that is foreign or that carries a stereotype in America. I'm not saying it's right, but it's true. Could have just as easily been a group of black men or what have you. So well done, Scouries!!

The way you described the "Arabs" was extremely offensive. No idea why you would think that was alright. Unnecessary racism in what was otherwise a very good story.

I didn't like how you added that the people in your dreams were ugly, fat Arabs. I am Arab my son is Arab my dad is Arab my two brothers and one sister is Arab. It's really insulting to me.

I have the same problem as your dad had my daughter is coming up to 18 and she has been flirting with me since she was 16 I had to send her back to her mom's as I didn't want to upset her by turning her down but loved your story

So well written and extremely arousing!

Absolutely a wonderful story...

I am a bit hesitant when it comes to Taboo topics such as this.

However, this story has suaed me to be more accepting.

Thank you for the wonderful read.

One of the best I have ever read. Whether from a strictly writing view, a story about love and sexuality between two people, a seduction tale, or any other viewpoint.

Well thought out. PROPER use of the English language. A truly enjoyable read!

Wonderful story! Sexy writing! And a damn good ending! I love stories like this. <3

One of the best that I've read latley keep writing

I found it funny also cause she has the same name as me

seemed racist

Its a very beautiful story to read. Loved it very much. Thankyou.

Great story with great build up but the racism was completely unneccessary.

I loved it:D I wish my daddy would fuck me but so far that hasnt happened

I really enjoyed the build up. But after the climax, the denouement came way to fast. I wish it had more about them exploring the taboo and talking about it. All in all a great read

I wanted her to try daddys monster anally and hear her painful groaning.

stopped reading after the bit about the arab rapists, totally unnecessary to further gross stereotypes about a group of people like that

So beautiful, there are no words to describe it. My Dad and I are lovers and have been for four years. Thank you for this wonderful story

Beautifully written story, loved it. The ending was perfect, the two of them consummating the relationship through marriage and children. Halfway through the story I was hoping it would conclude this way, and it did. Just perfect.

The spot where Daddy finally loses it and carries Stef off to the bedroom, I thought it was going to be abrupt, hard and fast. But just as he gets her on the bed, he slows down! Nonononooo!!!! I wish he had shoved himself in her so hard right away and kept at it like an animal. Ugh. It was still good, but the momentum of the story got thrown a little bit and it wasn't as good as I expected it would be. There is nothing wrong with hard and fast, but so many authors seem to follow the same mushy cliche routine. Finger her, taste her, THEN fuck her. I say, FUCK FIRST! Anyway, the story was good, but the climax of the story could have been more intense. But that is ME, not the millions of other readers. I find myself to be in the minority most times. Guess that's why I belong in the non-con section.

It looks to me like "Daddy" was already in lust with Stefanie for quite some time as he did not seem very upset at all of the actions and decisions she made. Perhaps it made his decision easier. Enjoyed the story very much, like most of your stories.

Ho hum, another 5...I'm sure you're quite used to them by now.

This is actually a 10, Hard at th start n th same at th finish, I have dreamed of this story and so many others. Bring on more, Perhaps a novel. XXXXXXXXX

Loved the series...thank you for "reading my mind: ;)

I almost came a number of times, if someone touched me, that would have done it.

Thank you.

Now I need to cum,, later

I was more in love with the way this was written. great job!! I voted a total 5 stars.

This story just kept sending waves of orgasmic pleasure up and down my whole body! I couldn't stop masturbating and rubbing my clit after reading. ;)

Love it love it love it!!!

This is still a very HOT story and I gave it a 5........

Stories about incest are great as fantasies or as something to turn you on but what governs them are the laws just about everywhere in the world. It doesn't matter what an individual thinks, the law says it's illegal and almost everywhere they are enforced especially when one of the participants is a minor or a child of the other participant. Even when both are of legal age, you still can't get a legal marriage license.

Many of us have fantasized about it, however.

Very well written. An engrossing story. Very erotic. The only story I've ever rated or commented on.

The daughter have shown true love and carecter by pursuing his father all the way, dispite his undecissivness and conservative upbriging.

I love the story which sounds so real. So loving.

The whole defects with incestuous children has been proven invalid. You would have to have incestuous kids that had kids with each other that also had kids with each other for anything to actually happen. Two relatives having children isn't any more dangerous than two strangers having babies.

"Genuine Love," Nuff Said!!!

I also fantasize about my daddy. We have been involved for a while now and I still remember the first time my mother went on a business trip (BTW it was some really naughty fun).... Anyway great story!!

I love the story, but I feel sorry for the children. There is a high rate of child birth-defects in incestuous relationships, because the DNA strands are too similar, and they overlap and merge together. That's the only problem I have with the book.

Having incestuous children is irresponsible. It can have a horrible end, as all know. At risk of sounding cliche, it's a crime against nature.

Also, I'm anonymous because I don't have an account.

Best stories I ever read! You could feel the love, that's why I couldn't put it down.

My daddy played with me as a teenager and although he never "entered" me, he did a lot of other things.... he is dead now, but I often fantasize about the most naughty bits! Like when I got horny and sat on the sofa with my legs open age 16 Prhwaaaarrr

To hell with those other comments from people ( who want remain anonymous) that didn't like the ending with kids. That's what showed there was true and undying love. Was wondering, is it hard to write in the first person as a girl/woman when you are a man? Keep up the good work and I'm going to check out some of your other works. I like incest stories because I think about my daughter and me wishing it would have happened to us but it never did. Now me 68 and her 49.

Any0ne up f0r sextiing ..my piin ::2B72AA0F

Love it! Great ending - possible continuation?

Loved it. But no kids next time.

I would of changed the ending of it no kids no marriage

I loved it