All Comments on '"Daddy?" I Whispered'

It was amazing. The best I've ever read. So much detail and depth in this type of story. You earned the five stars from me.

A wonderful, tender story of two people falling in love....legality doesn't matter, a nice story, well written, thanks.

That story kept my interest for a lot of reasons besides sex,it was really a story.

I can't wait until there's a full length novel out. This story is like my life (except my father and I aren't doctors)

So often the subject of incest is represented by writers as something temporary, or vulgar, with coarse language, where love has no place.

This story is beautiful, a love story that evolves over time. Thank you for presenting it here.

I enjoyed your story very much. It was very descriptive and made me feel like I would have loved to experienced something like this. Thank you again. Keep the good stories cumming (Pun intended).

this storie was best by far of all insest stories i've read and I agree its not that uncommon for a daughter or son to have fanticys of makeing love to the one that seeded their very beginning of life its self

I hate it that homosexual people will get so riled up about two men or two women being married, they say it is love so why should it be stopped. That is what this is a lot of lust too, but still love.

That is what I see... Happiness. Wonderful story. I really do look forward to more.

Respectful, no scat, name calling, or degrading of the female, fantisy is seldom what it seems, kids always tell, wives often confess, famlies are injured but for a moment it can bring a great sexual moment. I like this guy he has taste.

When i need some relief...i always read your stories. Excellent buildup...like a slow hand. Keep writing this kind of story please...all my love...abby

. . . used as a primer by any wannabe author on How Not To Write. It takes some kind of genius to pen a story that's absent narrative drive and characterisation, but this writer manages it with ease. Add to that achievement a facility for the incoherent and illiterate and it's clear why the author's 369 alts are so enthused. It's also no wonder that the author is, as he repeatedly proclaims, raking in $millions from sales of his, er, unpublished and unpublishable books.

Your telling it is beautifully and sensitively done.

I loved the story. It sounded so much like me and my daughter Alexandria. Same story!! How a father and daughter tired to resist our sexual feeling for each other, but finally gave in to our mutual desires. We fell in love ten years ago, got married in another country, have lived together ever since!! Passionatley, sexually, so in love with each other. I don't think anyone suspects anything differently, Just a father and daughter living together. Our passion still lives. We take vacations together over seas, making love like two lovers!! Our relationship is wonderful. Jerry and Alexandria forever!!!

your story has a good ending, but I wonder what would happen if her daughters start having feelings for her father?

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It was hot sexy romantic and amazing . I humped my bed while stimulating my breasts while I read . I had the best , a HUGE , orgasm soooo good . Thank-you for a great read and an even better orgasm

it was a very romantic and discovering story. i liked how it was not just sex, but also about the love fathers and daughters have together. very well done.

My daughter and I read this story together as it reminded us of our relationship. It took us a long time to consummate our love but when we finally did it was all worth it. We have been together, as husband and wife, now going on seven years. I always wanted my daughter to have our baby and she finally did three years ago. The baby is healthy and now we are contemplating having another child. I love my daughter as a woman and I know she loves me. We have an insatiable appetite for each other and desire to spend the rest of our lives together.

I loved the story . Best orgasm ever

I did love how the story wasn't just straight sex, the suduction was what made this story stand out, nicely done!

Great story and told from the daughter's point of view as she sees herself as the only one who can take care of and be good to her father. It was good to see the father overcome his inhibitions and allow himself to fall into her charms and arms. I would only ask that you watch out for minor spelling mistakes and verify facts before using them.

You write as if you experienced something very similar to this. If you did, I hope you are still madly in love. If you didn't, you did an excellent job portraying the daughter, both with your words and with the sensual and erotic telling of her path of seduction.

Very nicely done. 21 year old male here; loved the story. Very rich flavor and details. Excellent work. More than happy to give a 5/5 stars.

I masturbated to this story and had the most powerful awakening orgasms over and over again. I am a 22 year old female. Thanks for the great wank!

This story some how was able to dis engage my brain from the day to day struggles, of what is next to get done.

I felt aroused, I felt relaxed,I wished more than once I could read faster to get to the ''oh yes'' part of the story. Then calming my anxious mood, by the fact, it is the leading up to the '' oh yes part of the story that stimulates the hell out of me.

thanks for the much needed break,

Cheers, Joe

OMG Best thing I've ever read I got hornier each word I read!!!

Hope u keep on writing it was rellay good. hope to read more of you're stories tottaly hot hottt.

Though I could never do that stuff, this made me cum. Twice. Well done man.

it made me cum I wish I could do that with my mother

The best incest incest stories ever. Made me wet and lust.

would love to read what happens next

Was this dribble written with crayon? It sure reads like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just wish I could take away stars.

This book was amazing and made me wet as hell.

One of the best stories I had read

Wow dude, maybe the best I've read on this site -personally- let alone the taboo section. You're a great author. You put a sense of reality into it that I've seen in very few erotic texts. Very well done, keep up the good work.

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sweet young fresh cute little sisters and daughters

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im wet as fuck.

Honestly The best father daughter story I've ever read! Most people in the incest section don't have much for story telling, they just have a sexual fantasy they need to express. But with this its truly like art! Your story telling abilities are phenomenal! This is the first story of yours I've read but i have no book marked your page! Congrats on a job well done! 5 stars

hay im a doctor,basically a psychiatrist..just wanna say that it was an incest story and most of the peaple think bad as its forbidden...but this story was full of emotions and love not just hunger or just sexual urge which makes it no 1...

I have read every single incest story on this site and this story has by far ranked my number 1. I am not attracted to my father, but I have always found the 'daddy/daughter' scenario to be at the top of my 'want list.' I would give anything in this world to find an older man who I could call my daddy and husband. Anyway, your excerpt, again, is the best I have ever read. Not only was it sensual and sexual, but touching and promising. I do hope that this is a true story, and if it is, I would give anything just to know you and talk to you because you, my friend, are an inspiration. From the bottom of my heart, Thank you. Thank you for sharing. - Ms. :)

Seriously, this was immense... without doubt the best piece of erotic fiction I have ever read... by the end of it, I didnt even notice that it was a story about incest, it became a tale of raw animal lust, desire, passion and unrelenting sexual chemistry... thank you for giving me enough material to fuel my fantasies for a very long time...

as a female i know how it felt for her .as a young girl i also made love with

my father.my mother died when i was very young .and my father and i began making love to each other when i was 13.

Really hot. I enjoyed reading it, got me very wet.

Gotta love incest, best story I've read in years, even better then the sex stories I've been reading lately. 5 damn *****'s

i love incest stories,but yours was phenomenal. thank you for this sexy,passionate,naughty,lustfull,yet in the end beautiful story. totally got me feeling horny. 5*****

absolutely loved this story!!

but I found it well written and intriguing, excellent. 5*

Who ever said this person was racist. How would u know if they were racist or not. And to the person bad mouthing this it warned u in the beginning so why keep reading? It was a great story, 5 stars.

not too lengthy, good build up, great sex scene & seductions!! do u feel the racism added to the story? if it was to show state of mind of the characters, it only shows us they r racists. who practice incest. still, it made me quite wet!

pretty hot it had me all wet wishing i was her

This story was amazing. To adress some people's problems with the racisim this story wasn't written in present day, so the racisim is very accurate and a nice touch. And this story tells perfectly of the romance, I loved it so much that I've actualy read it more than once.

The story flows perfectly from one event to another, creating the illusion that the reader is actualy a part of the story.

I give this story 5 stars, and would happily give 5 stars again.

Good story but three kids is a no no by any member of your family even if it is a fiction story that's gross!!!!!!!! And married to your own dad that's worse!!!!!

Indeed a classic,

great story especially the sex at the end. loved her naivity and the racism that everyone talks about didnt bother mme in the slightest- ITS A STORY for christs sake!

great work keep it up

Wtf is this shit

Knowing that's your Father was the best Fuck u had.

I wish I had a daughter or two like that.

Loved,loved,loved!!!

i am totally in love with incest!!!! ( even though i would never do it) this story makes me cum every time and is my absolute favorite!!!!! i gave this story a 5... but the racist part kinda shocked me....

this story is perfect, anyone who complains about racism, look at the history of mankind...then you can comment. OH WELL. This beautiful work of art, which could be fantasy....arguably is the greatest incestuous stories on this site. I gave it a five. NBP

I enjoyed the story. It was a good read, and I thoroughly agree about dirty Arabs. If I had nightmares about any such thing, you can be sure it would be about a disgusting Middle Eastern. :)

Wow... Did the kids turn out fine? Anyway, pretty good story. Her dream was... Well, if she felt that way, she felt that way. Once again, nice story.

Very well written, ignore the small minded people who complained about the racist bits, do they complain if someone gets murdered in a story?

I loved it. From begining to the almost incredible happy ending.

I love the story and it is easy to read. Very good. I gave 4 stars because in parts it was stretched to long.

And too those other comments about racism, don't worry.

Some people just need to find the bad in everything.

Who the fucking hell do you think you are? So fucking racist!!!! "The big, ugly, dirty" Arabs who were so mean and wanted to rape me Daddy....

What the hell?!!!!!!!! You destroyed the whole fucking story. god....I cant even believe people are so fucking narrow minded. Americans are so "smart and healthy and good looking.." what the fuck?!!!!!

You're obviously a racist cunt! Typical fucking yank! And for the record, as most Arabs are muslim, they are circumcisied.

A FAIRY TALE ,LEAVES NO REGRETS ONLY SMILES.

WELL VARY GOOD AND YES I DID MAKE IT TO THE END TWO TIMESONLY BECAUCE THE READING WAS GREAT AND I LIKED THIS KIND OF STORY WITH HAPPY ENDINGS I WOULD GIVE A 5 PLUS STARS TOP MARKS IN MY BOOKS

THE LAY OUT OF THE STORY FIT THE PICTURE NICE LOVEING AND CLOSE.

I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF THIS KIND OF STORY................."R".........

I loved the story, except for the fabricated dream about the "big, ugly, dirty" Arabs who wanted to rape her, etc. Get rid of the racist overtones and it'll be perfect.

oh god i'm sooo horny now.

i'm sooo wet.

ahh someone fuck me!

the BEST

great story. but i couldn't help thinking about how many disabilities their children must have considering they're inbred hahaha

Very beautiful story.. What a lucky man he is...

WOW LOVED THIS ALOT!!!

As in Wow, how totally sexy and WOW, how totally racist.

One of the most romantic incestuous stories that made me wish i had a Virginia Slim after reading it.

Was awesome, couldnt stop reading and thinking about this, was awesome and im into blondes anyway so it works for me!!

The story was sweet, sexy and romantic. But the racial profiling was very uncalled for. I hope you were just reaching for shock value instead of following such a low value system.

That was so Hot! My panties are completely soaked. Thank you!

What a great story of love between father and daughter, I could feel the love in your writing.

I am filled with envy of this man.

Keep writing you do it so well.

Wow. I enjoyed the whole story that went along with it too!

Loved the story but the pick on the arab bit was not called for. You have too good a writing style to pick out any specific peoples and could have made them 2 guys in a dark alley that scared her. No reply required, just wanted to ad my 2 cents.

I was into it until you mentioned "dirty Arabs." Racism like that isn't sexy. Not only that, but you seem to think that Americans are better than others. Besides that, it wasn't terrible, I guess. But that really put me off.

860 comments! that just about says it all - perfect!

If you read this and feel guilty for it, don't insult this talented writer, simply rationalize it, both parents were blondes, her mother cheated on her father and became pregnant with her, no incest, no two headed-babies [which is impossible, so go read some biology books who ever said such a ridiculous thing]. Rationalize this and just make up a back story if you're uncomfortable with it, just because it's not there doesn't mean it's not a possibility. And to the author, Darling, please continue to write and to give us all wonderful happy endings such as this, ignore those who seek to drag you down [though i do agree that the comment about Arabs is rude and a completely unnecessary stereotype, even though my fiance fought in iraq and has a nasty opinion of the Arabian people, but still, just say they were hideous, and if at all possible, make at least one caucasian, if us whities are also to blame it makes it un-racist, nifty huh?] anyway, keep writing and keep up the Daddy/daughter incest, it's what certain people like me crave<3

You have a fantastic writing style and a fair building of the primary characters, along with little quirks to the subsidiary characters that really puts the depth into your story that makes readers carry on through the pages.

Having said that, I feel that you have lost a fair few readers in the beginning, with the daughter's feigned 'rape' nightmare.

You have a skill with writing and a talent for building tensions & creating plot developers, which makes me wonder why you write this little insert so terribly.

In one small section, you manage to make a good portion of your readers cringe, while insulting an entire group of people.

The inflections against Arabs and their stereotypical collocations is someting that is not only outrageously unneccessary in the story, but also ludicrous in the way that you portray them, specifically as a people, as the antagonists to the story, as well as the noticable glorification of the protagonists American status.

Creating race/nationality specific roles in this nightmare adds nothing to the story, and shows the character, and the author, in a very questionable light. It has extremely racist attitudes, both positively and negatively to Americans and Arabs respectively, and it averts people from continuing to read.

I gave you the benefit of the doubt, continued to read, and was glad that I did so, because you are a very talented writer. However you must be extremely conscious of what goes into your writing, because it doesn't simply cast a shadow over your work, but over yourself as an author as well.

do keep writing, but please bear in mind how your reader will follow your words, and how it will affect their view of your stories.

I never read a story like this with a beautiful ending..You are a great writer needless to say 5 Stars!!!

wow you are good I'm only 24 and I used to write a little something you gained another reader.

I thought your story was great good details and an even better climax. The only thing that bothered me was when they are arriving in France a character says "bienvenue, welcome" in the style of french spoken in Europe bienvenue is used to mean the same thing as welcome in english so you really don't need it again after that.

You should include details of their kids who have 2 heads and low IQ's. Maybe daddy will nail his kid/grandkids and we need some buttsex action where he squirts his ballbatter in her shitbox.

This is a lovelt story. Godd writing and especially good descriptions of the emotions the central protagonist is feeling. Well done

This story is amazing!! :)

An very, very nice Lovestory.

...and I'm just a Peeping Tom walking through it. DAMN! It was good reading! Wish I read more of the sex between father and daughter than just that one night though....it's all that teasing...should have "heard" more from Dad through the acts man...more sex next time...good writing.

Wish I had such a beautiful and loving daughter as u then I wouldn't mind fucking u to the core

The confusion about a church wedding presumes that all priests, all churches, are thorough, and perform extensive due diligence. That is likely true for most substantial churches, and for formally-ordained priests of large orders. But it's obvious to me that the ceremony was performed by a "hedge priest" who has no real authority to perform such a service so it would have even less legitimacy than an Elvis-Wedding in Vegas! I really liked the epilogue. It was sweet.

And it showed one of the biggest and most heart-warming shifts. The girl, so obviously a manipulative sort originally, with her cooing baby talk, pushing the "infantilism" button so firmly, was redeemed as we saw the woman she had grown into. I deeply enjoyed that, too.

I'm confused about something. How can it be that the father and his daughter are walking out of a church, when te Church would never marry relations. To me, this seems like it's only well written in the sex parts, when the story also has two make sense. The same could be said for mot of these incest stories. BAH!

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I must agree with Smalltitfan **That was weird typing that... anyways** The way the main character spoke was quite... immature for her represented age :/.

I really loved this though and couldn't stop reading this xD

Did anyone else notice that an 18 year-old girl had been accepted to Harvard Medical School? What happened to her getting a bachelor's degree first?

I also felt that the dialogue was a bit childish for a character who is 18 years old and not naive.

Having said those things, the storytelling was good enough that I wanted to be the father.

id love to be in her shoes!!! and like one of your other people who commented i too am pressed for time but couldnt stop reading...really i should be the shower right now but mmmm i had to finish it....thanks for a great story!!!