All Comments on 'Daddy's Breeding Slut'

Lucy is the only girl in the world who has her hymen way up inside her vagina instead of at the entrance like the rest of us. Fucking idiots want to write explicit porn but know nothing about the most basic anatomy which would take 30 seconds to Google. Idiotic mistakes ruin stories for me.

He bred a baby in his own daughter so that's a good thing.....

Umm you used the word cut to many times got a lil anoying try useing words like vagina and flower or even pussy is fine but over all was good 😊

Great story!

So - we need another chapter, please!

Thoroughly enjoyed the story what apart a next part of it

i cant wait to see for a next chapter

Makes me want someone to be my daddy. Damn, still cumin. Want her to have more babies from that good fucking her daddy is giving her!!!😀

This is a lovely write up although I am entirely not in support of incest. But the pregnancy/Virginity line caught my attention. I am totally a 22 years old thick ass virgin(nothing has gone into my hole, not even my little finger), and I've been fantasising about getting pregnant since forever. Reading about the possibility of getting pregnant while still intact just made it better. Although I totally want to get married first. I'm not interested in breeding a bastard! If you are thinking like I am thinking, then hit me up @cutieberryv@yahoo.com

I like the way you developed the characters and the story is well written.

I enjoyed it and look forward to Part 2. Please do a follow up of these characters..

I'm going to see what other stories you wrote. Thanks for a story well thought out throughly... Keep writing

I too want to breed my daughter

Too bad I wasn't ur daughter. I'd love to be used as a breeding slut

this has always made me cum thank you

and why do you always blame someone else for your religious obsessions i. this part of your life when you shoved them down my throat in childhood just like you apparently wanted to do with something else. did you?

The hymen is very close to the vaginal opening therefore this story doesn't make biological sense.

I like incest stories but this one was oddly unsexy. I mostly laughed during the whole thing. Especially during the lactating titfuck.

First of im a girl I've post my whole finger up my vagina and had to lift up to even touch my hymen its not right at the entrance. Hymen's in general are not the as every other female some are born without one some have holes in them and some are formed differently its the lack of resaerch on the female body that leads us to be unsure.

Hate to break it to you darlin', but you're clueless. Your hymen can only form at the entrance to your vagina. Period. It's there or it's not, but that's where it is. Your generic structure is set. Sure, there are the occasional one in a million oddities, such as growing extra fingers or toes, or nipples, hell one person actually had an extra pair of legs! But those were a type of mutations. You don't see a person that, say, grew a nose on their stomach INSTEAD of on their face! Or say their left ear grew on their knee instead of on their Head. Just doesn't happen.

As to the post a few down saying the story put the hymen in the wrong place, I think how you're reading the phrasing might be throwing you off. Basically it sounds like he's putting his head in, I took that to mean he was getting it past her outer and inner labia, up against her hymen. Some girls are pretty flush, with a nice innie labia, my favorite, hehe, others can have a fatter, hanging labia, and/or a protruding inner labia, so there could be plenty enough to cover the head, depending on the girl.

Hell, while totally wrong/inaccurate physical/sex related things drive me to distraction, ruining the story's enjoyment level, and generally pissing me off because someone is writing about something they know nothing about, haven't experienced and are too lazy to look up, that isn't too much the case with this story. Hell, I was more concerned about the fucker making her lay on her back while she was nine months pregnant just so he could get his nut off! Hehe.

The story was ok. I secretly got off on it, controlling my innocent, fairly naive daughter, Stockholm ing her into my love/sex slave and partner. Knocking her up, taking her ass (notice how the fucker didn't say anything about being Catholic when he wanted to bang her butt!! ROFL!!) Then taking her other virginity! Giving her countless orgasms!! Yummy! Closer to the surface I wanted to strangle the dude repeatedly for raping her, but deep down I got off on it in our little fantasy world, letting it be ok because she loved it all in the end, even though that doesn't make it right. Aaah, fantasies!! :)

Of course I would have taken her virginity the same hour we did her pregnancy test, not wasted nine fucking months!! Idiot!! Heh.

Wish this could be me. I’d love for you to make me a pregnant virgin, then fuck your baby out of me. I don’t care about anatomical accuracy, this was fucking hot, and I was fixated on the image of potent sperm oozing through my hymen while cumming as I read.

There's nothing exciting about taking all the door handles off so she can't get away. I have avoid rape fantasies until now, and yes, it's my fault for reading as far as I did. Far enough to know I didn't like this at all.

Barely disguised rape.

the parts that turned me on were when she admitted she wanted dad to fuck her-i have a super hot daughter that i admit i fantisise about fucking--but id never force her or do some shit like that..but the thought of tasting her 24 yr old sweet pussy as she moans and beggs daddy to fuck her -is hot--i dont know why this excites me so much

Too bad you had to rape and imprison the daughter, but you got the 1 star you earned, freak.

Stopped reading the minute he removed all locks from bedroom doors and his keys. Rape isn’t a fantasy no matter what. Wanted to give a 0, but not iption

This was super sexy!!! I came so hard multiple times reading it I want my family to do this so hot!!!

Don't vote other peoples kinks down please.

Vote on your own kinks.

This story hit every one of my kinks. So well written and it just kept getting better. Can’t wait to read more of your stories now. I am a huge fan!

1.) as others have said, the hymen IS located IMMEDIATELY at the entrance to the vagina. It is not “an inch” inside, as someone else postulated. I had one, so trust me. Yes, most of them are not fully closed and can be partially penetrated by things that are not girthy without breaking or tearing, but then they are, in fact, going past the hymen.

2.) you can get pregnant without being penetrated at all, as long a sperm gets inside the vagina. It is significantly more likely the closer to the cervix it is deposited, as sperm are literally microscopic and have to swim all the way up the Fallopian tubes to reach the egg, and a couple more inches is like hundreds of miles to them.

3.) Most women don’t start showing til around 3 or four months

4.) women don’t make that much milk during pregnancy. The nipples leak a few drops on their own, and like half a teaspoon will come out if expressed in a very specific way (not random squeezing/fucking.) Milk comes in around birth/shortly afterwards.

5.) I understand this is fantasy, but it is 100% immoral to have children with a close relative. The probability of having a child with a birth defect is about 50% with parent-child parents. It is around 25% with same-parent siblings. It is not a myth; please do not have children with your family members

You are a naughty minded woman I LOVE IT!!! These stories you have written are SUPER sexy and with that little extra twist. THAT is what makes you a very good writer , Thank YOU for taking the time to share them with me. I look forward to the next one and the next one. I highly recommend you take the time to excite yourself . You will find that you will be aroused beyond your control and release that tension that has built up by experiencing her stories

Bill

It was sick from beginning to end.

Loved this story. Hope they have a lot of babies.

Absolutely delicious

love it hope you write more to this story

This is gross

Fuck made me hard and came every where

I came hard

Disgusting story of rape and brainwashing once I started it. The characters must be the stereotypical Republican/Trump supporter since almost all of them are a direct result of 160 years of inbreeding. Lol!

Last comment i see on here. Is a comment from five days ago. It is a anti trump and republican comment.

We are in the taboo and fantasy section of erotica and some guy upset about that and trump it is rather funny. I am not even sure this is an american webpage. English speaking yes. But there plenty of brits on here and even more than a few aussies. I mean the date for me is 1/7/22 its been awhile since trump left the office. The posting is 1/2/22. This story over 17 years old. At least it is according to the comment section. Some of the hate on this page is rather silly. 160 years of the republican inbreeding? I was a democrat until Clinton. Who ever you are anonymous i wave the bottom of my shoe in your general direction.

My own father died when I was 4. My mother remarried 3 years later. My step dad filled the role of the father perfectly.

When I turned 18, I told him that he can't hide it anymore. That I knew how he looked at me when I was going through teen years.

Well, I'm 28 now, I have 3 children and the father is my step father. My mom divorced him when I was 19 and he came to live with me. For a 45 year old man, he can sure fuck me better than those sleazy kids with their pencil like cocks.

I hate coercion and brain washing. Maybe the wife had discovered something that justified her cutting him off from sex?

3*

BJ

This should not be in this category but in the nonconsent one.

It was a terrible idea for a story.

nonconsent, rape

Mmm, I love this story. Neither my dad or step-dad ever got me pregnant, but they sure tried. This is just delicious.

wtf

I don't usually go for the pregnancy schtick, but this was hot as hell. I do agree with others that it should be in the noncon/reluctance channel as the first time he cums in her is rape, even though it turns fully consensual by the end. Still, I'll be coming back to this. You write excellent descriptions and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.

To Anonymous who was claiming to debunk myths you are wrong when it comes to the change of birth defects with incest those percentages only come into effect if both family members or just one has something wrong with them Ed has down syndrome or something like that.

As for it being immoral yes in today's Society it is a back eons ago it was rightfully not immoral, there is nothing wrong with it, you cannot help who you fall in love with

Ooh my god

My pussy is dripping wet right now so much so that there is a wet spot right under my fingers. I imagined my daddy fucking into my pussy and telling me to take his cum so he can breed me like the little cock slut i am

Completely hot but felt it could have been done better. The writing did little to make him not look like a bad guy. Overall, still a good over-the-top story. Story is prob only 4/5 but 5 stars just because of the absurdity of it.

I love looking at pregnant women's bellies and whenever I can I love rubbing them then going home and beating off thinking of them

This reminds me of the time my boss all throughout her pregnancy she would have me rub her pregnant belly and then just before she went on maternity leave she and I did it and her water broke and we had to call a ambulance right as it got there the baby was born and crying and she said she was willing to have my baby to give him a baby brother and sister and sure enough we quit working together oddly though her three years old son looks more like her teenage son than her boyfriend at the time

Probably the weirdest and worst thing I’ve gotten off to

Omg I am soo wet this is hot I love this but I want more.

I mean it was good except the pregnancy part. At around last year or so my dad sent me a dick telling me it's mine for the sucking (true story BTW) it was big and fat and did I say yes not exactly I hesitated but deep down I was waiting on the moment he would want me as bad as I did years ago when I was 18 (currently 36) when I saw his dick print in his bike shorts ( he loves riding a 10 speed in his spare time) and I wanted to suck it since then. He moved to another state last year and want me to come move in with him. I want to go but he has a girlfriend so that maybe hard to get it in and try it out with him. I know and don't know why he want me to come that way but I wanna try it before he gets too old to perform Lol! I dated guys around his age and was a side piece to a 45yr old married man at 19 and nearly had a baby by a 55 yr old man at 23 but I miscarried unfortunately.

I know this is sorta a moot point, but that’s not how the hymen works. It’s not some big blanket, though it can vary in size.

I love that this was dubious consent. He knew he would impregnate her whether she wanted it or not. Great story!

I love that this was dubious consent. He knew he would impregnate her whether she wanted it or not. Great story!

This reminds me of a fellow employee who has five kids all by five different baby daddies and she a couple weeks pregnant with baby number six

The story was a great story but I don't believe he held off getting balls deep in that virgin pussy.

I know when I first fucked my daughter that virgin pussy got it to my balls and I didn't care if she got pregnant hell I wished for her to get pregnant.

Update from 2 months ago I am currently pregnant and yes I finally did it but didn't think I was ever gonna get pregnant by him but it happened so this is my 7th pregnancy BTW

I SO wish this author had more written for this story!!!

Is there going to be anymore to this story

Love it

EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Loved it💗. One thing have someone independent proofread and edit your work.

oh yes, daddy, fuck me some more, suck my titties and lick and suck my pussy and blow your load and fill me with your seed ... urrrggggh i want your babies

I loved the story but was sad that she didn't experience having her hymen broken first. She might have enjoyed getting pregnant more but it seems that once he was helping her orgasm she was okay with what he was doing. I also love the fact that she loves anal. I know of some that don't like anal but also know a few that love it better than vaginal.

Well done, very exciting story. Her father is very addictive to her body. He gets what he wants, she gets what she wants , witch makes for a powerful story. Could you writ more to the story.

well, he could have sucked her clit and started milking her nipples to bring the milk down ... but, hey, he was some weird catholic guy and they all suffer form guilt and doubt

It makes me hope that one day I will have a daughter. This is one of the best things that could happen between a father and a daughter. The purest act of procreation and the continuation of their bloodline.

UpdatePT2: Our daughter is here and healthy she came 3 weeks early and no signs of disability just pretty and chubby and yes we currently live together the girlfriend don't know that the baby is his but spoils her rotten. Are we still having sex yes just had to wait because of my c-section but it maybe another one this time. Our baby girl Brooklyn Joy July 12 2023 6lbs 8oz

I loved it…I wish my dad bred my pussy like that. Every girls dream to have babies with her daddy

This was so great and I am hoping for a sequel as they have babies and explore their sexual lives even more.

"He shot his cum into her tender little womb a few times a day, always stopping short at her hymen." <<< Translated: Author has ZERO idea of female anatomy, or how totally impossible this premise is, or the slightest clue where the womb, or the hymen are located. Welcome to Incel life.