All Comments on 'Daddy's Sunshine'

The mother sounds like a bitch

Great story.

Petsonally i LOVE the story, andcwoukd vote fir tge furst option. Not sure if u coukd help write it, but would love reading it.

Definitely need a part 2! Please

Between the two options, scenario 1 seems more palatable. Just because it's incest, doesn't mean it needs to be nasty! Sex while mom's in bed is just too fucked up. And no more dicks! She's his, and he sounds pretty damn possessive. Maybe DD/lg type story.

both option's 1 and 2 ....... Let the Mother heal then change for the better and let the best friend make it a 4- some ........ the Daughter and Best friend can give birth to a second family for Dad then Mom can be their live in Maid ..............

I agree that the 1st option is more arrousing and the 2nd one is more of a fucked up plot twist and it would fit the cops persona.

Both suggestions sound awesome !

Loved this story, would love to have more chapters. Well done!

great story, very well done Thank you

Option 2 is the best

Great story. Option #1.

I love this ! I want you next story to be the one where they fuck and wake up her virgin friend who joins in the fun

Option 1 only.

Option 2

Option 2

Yes. Without a doubt. Another story. And.. of course virgin friend

Option 2. They love each other and he has already stated she is all his so bringing someone else in doesn’t fit with their relationship in my opinion. Love this by the way

yes to part 2; yes, i would help.....option 1

Mom should leave. Either succumbing to her injuries or prison for her crimes. The friend playing with dad and Shay in a true 3-way would be fun.

Option 1

#1

A great story, but... yeah I know about but... I wish Daddy would have taken her gently, lovingly, the way a loving daddy would. He wouldn't try to make her into a slut. Just saying...

Thanks for sharing.

Shayenne aka Sunshine and her daddy bring a bedridden mom home, but have sex on the bed beside her while she's heavily drugged up pain meds.

OPTION 1, OPTION 1, OPTION 1 no more needs to be said, OPTION 1

Let mom not make it. Most likely, she would turn the tables on Shay and her dad and get him sent to the slammer and he would lose his badge. Option 1 would be my choice. Long run development could be that dad marries Shay's friend, Shay marries, but husband is cool to a family party every weekend. Well written overall, but at the end the overuse of the phrase "her core", "my core" killed the "mood". There has to be another way to express that without the over repetition.

Do you also write for Dreame? I found the first sex scene in this story in a story on Dreame, pretty much word for word. Wanted to make sure someone wasn’t stealing from you.

I do not write for Dreame, no.

~Daddy's Hellion

Option 1. Have him fuck the daughter and best friend then divorce the wife to go live with daughter.

more the # 1 options

OMG! Both options seem awful. Guess I'll see what you decided.

Option 2

Mom didn't make it she passed, Daddy and Sunshine move on happily

#3Dad leaves mom, he and Shay moe away and start over as a couple, she is already pregnant and he .akes her jnto his perfect fucktoy.

Mom is in a coma for 8 months when she wakes up.....

Mom is drugged up and having sex around her and maybe fucking her even though shes drugged up.

Stopped at chapter 2 I’m going to try to find a story where the female isn’t such a whore

Neither option is interesting. Some people suggested a 3rd option and one of them is much more promising.

4*

BJ

A definitely A. Very similar to my own dream for my D n me

I vote for ii maybe AA member Mom is alert but can't talk and temporarily paralyzed. SO she lays in bed, mute and immobile just watching Daddy and Daughter

Yes definately. Option I

I like this story very much, but Daddy has a very good reason to NOT accept his daughter's advances. An angry mother could come home, catch them, and ruin him for life. She would without a doubt enjoy that in order to resume drinking and flirting with other men while letting him rot in prison. Similar things happened to two of my coworkers in real life, and I advise that no one think that it can't happen to them.

It is therefore it's a good thing this is fiction.

Yes option 1 with Shayenne aka Sunshine and her daddy return home to fuck waking up her virgin best friend who then joins in the sexual fun

Fuck her next to bedridden Mom

I just read this entire series from start to finish in one go! I couldn’t stop reading and probably has to be the HOTTEST thing I have ever read/seen/imagined etc. I WANT THIS TO BE ME.

Yes part 2 !!!

Mom dies in hospital and friend joins in

Option 1

Yes part 2

I give a 5 great story

Option 1, OR perhaps a scenario where they bring Mom home bedridden. Sunshine gets a job and gets her own apartment ( love nest ) or goes to college not so far away. Option 2 is too fraught with danger for both, especially Daddy. OR MAYBE Mom dies on the operating table or shortly thereafter, leaving multiple possibilities. Good luck!

Great story! And I pick Option 2 where they fuck next to Mom!!!

One of the sexiest stories I've ever read. Is there a way to be greedy and get both options while protection Daddy from his wife confession and indiscretion?

5*

BJ

Option 1. Whatever happens with mom she brought it on due to jealousy and drinking.

Good story. Please do option 1

I like them both to be honest, maybe you can put a spin on it and do that

I cheches 1 Daddy has a threesome with Shayenne and best friend making two virgins and Daddy

Absolutely love it, kind of makes me envious of my dad, but definitely the 1st choice on the second story.

sounds like two more chapters

Yes but I like Option 2.

I may be a bastard, but I go for #1, *and* mommy not coming back… Then have BFF become the beard and the three of them living (and fucking) happily ever after…

That should do for at least 2 more chapters…

1 and mommy dies.

Let the Mom go.

1 and mom does it would be lovely to have a flash forward of both girls knocked up as well <3

I say 1 tho have the mom go to jail for the assault on the cop earlier in the story after she gets out of the hospital

I'll take both options i and ii as offered above as sequels. Can't have too much of a good thing. Five Stars for me!

Let her mother join in the fun and have a foursome with the sleepy head in the other room

Yes to both. Mom either dies or is paralyzed and out of the picture. Sunshine assumes her "duties" along with her best friend.

Ys please write on. This is an awesome story

Need to finish it .

Please continue ! And I pick option 2!

Nice story, well written, but how can the mother have been arrested and ends up in an accident driving?

I think the friend had to pee and on the way saw her friend get her cherry popped by her daddy and can't wait for the details and to join in.

Too good to be just a story. Had to of been inspired, Better yet this piece, I hope is an autobiography. Either way it's a stellar piece. Allow the mother to a have a full recovery. Nursed back to health by Sunshine and her father. No sex occurs between husband and wife during the time of her recovery or after. She smuggly tells her husband and daughter she is leaving him for another man. Who slips from her husband lips? Sunshine lays a hand her father's thigh. Its the man you was showing your breasts to at my birthday party... isn't it mother?! Yes it is you husband stealing bitch. Dad she has been sleeping with him for years. Yes I've known for a long time sweet heart. He stands lifting Sunshine his hand in the small of Sunshines back walks her to the stairs. He asks her to wait for him upstairs. He pats her on her butt several times. With a smile tells her it'll be fine. One more pat on her butt as she climbs up. To his wife he says, the house is paid for. Stay here with your new love. What about you and her? I'm taking an early retirement and I'm taking Sunshine and her best friend across Europe. I've signed everything over to you. See my lawyer. They had their bags packed for weeks. Call our friend baby, it's our time now. Hand in hand walked out the door with mother staring on. Daddy love me forever? Oh yes baby, oh yeah. So option 1

Genius, so out. I'm a fan now. Keep um coming...!

Love the story, I pick the first option #i

Loved it and I'm very interested in what happens next so please keep writing. This is actually good enough if you take the time to actually turn this into a full length standalone novel. I am a book whore and read all the time and I'm telling you this has potential to be so much more and there are so many ways you can take it. Personally, I'd have the mom in a coma, let guilt eat at the dad for conflict so he tries to avoid her but constantly has dirty thoughts. Maybe have her bring a boy home to get a tea room from dad. Have her find out she's pregnant but doesn't get a chance to tell him because the mom wakes up. When the mom is fully awake and the daughter goes with dad to see her the mom could degrade her daughter even more and this finally seals the deal with the dad and he decides to leave her and get a divorce. She recovers and goes to prison for the shooting if the cop. The daughter tells him she's pregnant and then when she's showing she can go to the prison alone to visit her mom behind glass and she can tell her all the filthy things she did with her dad and that she was going to treat him so much better than her mom ever could.

Yeah anyway something like that but like I said lots of potential.

5 stars - very well written! The answer is yes for a part two, Option i Shayenne aka Sunshine and her daddy return home to fuck waking up her virgin best friend who then joins in the sexual fun OR

Cant wait for the additional parts of the story.

No part 2... it is bad enough that you wrote part 1, which is really sick.

I think some people can be really mean especially if theyre anonymous. I decided to log in and write a comment for you because i really enjoyed the story and cannot wait to read the rest. You def left me wet so....good job haha ✌🏾

part 2 loved your story

My answer is yes for a part two, Option i Shayenne aka Sunshine & her daddy return home to fuck waking up her virgin best friend who then joins in the sexual fun

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Первый вариант!!

option 1 . I like the option one responder said about taking he virgin sleeping friend when they come home from the hospitial .

I’d love to read a second part to this story. And a third and fourth and so on. I choose option one. Maybe save option two for part three.

This is my favorite taboo story. I love all five. I haven't found anything else like it. I love the dark romance, the sneaky forbidden sex, and the seduction.

So a strange man is in the hospital room. Crying, he loves her, they have had an affair off and on since high school. He feels guilty because of her drinking. He knows that if they can become a couple she will quit the sauce and they will live happily ever after.

What I would change about this story is that the father has been fixed. He is the perfect choice for the daughter to lose her virginity. she tells her mother and is adamant that on her 18th birthday this will happen.

I think 2. The wife has to sober up, and depend on her daughter and husband to care for her.

She catches them fucking, but is helpless to do anything about it. But can't help but get turned on, eventually

5 Stars Great story

(1) please continue

( i i wake-up her friend & have her join them