All Comments on 'Daughter's Initiation into Incest'

As a young chick living way out in the Bush, I don't get to the town library often, but with stories like this on Literotica who needs to? Unfortunately we don't have a Minister nearby to save my soul either, so my vibrator is my best friend. Thanks so much for your story "Silky", I thought it was beautifully written and as HOT as hell.

Daughter's Initiation into Seduction, is the way I would like to go, but please include Beth, Katie and the other girls in it.

Just love your "WICKED" mind.

CK.

My cunt was dripping yet I couldn't stop reading! Fantastic story.

Good story. Hope you continue with more of Eve and her adventures

For my own part, I think you need to continue on. Katie needs to recieve what her just rewards are. Pastor Dylan should exercise church discipline in her case. Blackmail is preventing a person's freedom of choice. We, as women, should always have the free choice to follow our Lord. The Priest in our small town is the protector of all the female flock in the church and the Director of the men of the church. We need him to Bless our Pussies so that we do not commit sinful acts with other uncircumcised and unGodly men in the town. Sometimes even our husbands can be controlled by evil. Father**** has a cadre of Godly men to keep husbands in line with the will of God. But usually his wife, Mistress Superior is successful at teaching the men how to be Godly husbands. Most of the women in the church are submissive. We have a few for Dom's, such as our Mistress of Music, the Mistress of Sunday School, Mistress of Adult Teachings, and of course the Priest's wife Mistress Superior who is responsible for the training of each Mistress. It is a good system and protects all who wish for unpolluted bodies and peaceful, happy homes. Since I became an adult I have been a Godly woman and a submissive wife. Being submissive is not weakness, it takes great strength to submit to what is right.I am an Assistant District Attorney and still a submissive, Godly wife who gets paid better than my husband! Eve is on the way to a wonderful life. Lilly needs to take a strong stance with the young men of the church, such as Peter and Adam. They are on their way to becomeing unruly and rebellious by tainting the beautiful works of God. I could go on and on, but as it is written that the church is the Bride of Christ - the women in the church are the Brides of the Priest who is the local representative of God. And he, as our Husbandman, protects and cleanses us. And sometimes if the Undergardner is unable (our earthly husbands) he will fertilize us. I hope this is written based on reality. I like to think that the Will and Protection of God is widespread. As women we are so vulnerable. If we aren't watchful we can be at the mercy of our sex and it needs to be as well managed as it is beautiful.

you are one sick fuck why cant a pack ofstray dogs pull a dogdicktrain on the butthole of the sick 9inck dick padre hmmmm beeeeeeeeoooooootchs

Near the knuckle.

It should be in the hall of fame. You should continue with your Eve series. Nice pics too Walt.

Please continue these stories. I would especially want to read the introduction to orgies.

Becky should be punished by the pastor and her dad like the bitch she is.

Awesome story, please add more pictures! ♡

Please write more. This is too good to be a stand alone.

Fucking amazing story!

part two is written...

Just waiting on illustrations..

Feel free to leave comments for the illustrator if you want to see more

Jasmine July 2015

Oh my so totally depraved,love the cunt lapping. I so love eating cunt and getting totally drunk on cunt juice, then fuckin said cunt while sucking another young cunt. Oh bring it on. If it were possible I would give 10stars. I will be acting out as much of this as possible this afternoon and night with as many of my young female bi fuck buddies as I can get together. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK

Reminds me of what went on in Douglas WY during the 60's and 70's with the Baptist Church.

Dear Jasmine,

Nice Story and Great Ilustrations!

Thank you!

Aunt Helena

Thanks to the author for a fictionalized account of the hypocrisy which is seemingly endemic in all branches of the church, whatever denomination. This apparently happens when a holier-than-thou exterior is overcome by biological necessity.

Fantastic story - was hard the whole way through. Let Eve be used like the slut she wants to be. All your characters are so good. Would like to hear more about Beth and the mom as well. Great writing.

I loved this story, I reread it at least once every two weeks or so. I truly hope that you will continue this series.

Please continue to write more stories like this!!!!

Bravo another brilliant story, so enjoy your work

EXCELLENT STORY: Very good Imagery, good Story Line. A bit weak in description of the erotic parts. Very Very Good.

Illustration: Could be supplemented with more pictures. Eg: Lilly hungrily lapped her daughter's juices.- detailed Picture of Lilly enjoying her daughter.

Sick, sexy, and oh so hot! I loved the story, you are a gifted writer. The art was a great compliment to the story, and just as sinful.

Fantastic job to both of you.

2 fucking long

I got confused and thought that "Daughter's Initiation Into Lesbianism" was already published... Very disappointed! Next part can't come soon enough

Please continue. I am so ready to read the next installments!

Just more, don't care what order, just write them !

This story was simply awesome !

too many words and not enough illos.

so nice no word to describe . one more thing use more and more illustration to emphasis the sex scean. overall its tremendous superb story with nasty drama.

Rubbed myself to an orgasm. Pls update I'm still shaking

I loved it

Really Awesome... Make Eve to do a nude dance for the dad and devotedly ask other girls to have sex with her father and with their own fathers.

Grand, and the illustrations were nice, too. I hope that you add to the series. "Daughter's Initiation into Seduction" sounds especially intriguing.

Happy imagining!

i'm so wet right now, gonna play with myself

I must go to church right now and spread the faith, or at least a few legs!

Eve is truly a woman of god. Pastor Dylan has finally rightly divided the spirit of the word of god. The Evil harlot named Katie must be punished for her sin of blackmail and there needs be more episodes to illustrate this. Where two or more are gathered in the lord's name he is there, but Katie doesn't have this in mind. She is not obeying the orders of the pastor. She should be home seducing her father as she has been instructed by the mouthpiece of god, but she is at a social engagement blackmailing the offspring of a man of god. Lilly, Beth, and Eve are holy submissive women in the tradition of the women of the bible and will be blessed for it. Eve is so naïve and willing and will always need Beth near to hand to be her instructor, guide, and protector. Even when Eve has found a husband, she will need pastor Dylan's seed of protection and Beth's guidance and instruction. She will always need Lilly's mothering as all daughters do. The principle should be cautioned about taking too much upon herself also. Having said all of that the author needs to make it plain that all loving within the family unit is a blessed union. They love, support, and satisfy the needs and urges of each other and so feel no need to sully the act of fucking given by god to strengthen the bonds of love and family. Your quotation of the bible is only right. It has been misinterpreted by so called men of the cloth for too many generations.

Just keep writing

Has the next chapter been released yet?

I came thrice to this,,,, please add more!

This is really a sick perverted story. But, you have to love how hot it gets you. I comed more than usual while playing with myself. Real pictures like some of your other stories would put this over the top.

This story has everything, this is my kind of church, where can I go to join? I look forward to reading the rest of the series, I hope they are as good.

Not a bad "tail", pun intended. It would be more enjoyable with much more illustrations in it.

this was FANTASTIC! I think we all would appreciate a follow-up

Please add more chapters to this series with more illustrations

This is wonderful! Would love to see Eve fall further into seduction! Real fun read!

this was absolutely wow....delicious...wonderful...and I wish I were a fly on the pastors wall...wow...does that make me a sick perv?? who cares....I had a good rub down...;) thank you for writing this as this is happening in churches still today....

Please for all your readers, we want you to continue the series. Also give Katie her punishment for blackmailing Eve.

Great story. More please in a hurry. Oh shit I came twice while reading the story. My vibrator helped though.

Thanks a for the great story

Mary

Devilishly intriguing and real. I love the preacher and of course Lilly

Amazing!!! Needs an update though!

Wonderfully written, I need to know more. I love how clueless eve is.

As an Ex Catholic, with little knowledge of the Bible, Reading this lengthy story, left me conflicted. Wasn't sure, whether to make the sign of the Cross, or Masturabate.

I guess that's when the Devil took over my body, as he did to my hand.

I'm sure the Lord, smiled, as I gave him my holy seed, If not, I surely did, lol.

Hope there is more of this fun erotic story. Well written and Illustrated.

A definite five star production,

Thanks :)

I think this is great. But in your proposals for more stories, you did not mention taking Katie in hand. She is in danger of becoming a malevolent instrument of Satan. Perverting the Holy Acts with force and blackmail. Pastor Dylan and the Principal, as well as the female leader of the church - Lilly- need to take her to task for her insolence, haughty, and false attitude. Accusing these women of God of commiting acts outside of God's Perfect Will and using her ill gotten knowledge for her own earthly pleasures at the expense of others. God's Love and Christian Submission are not in her heart. This is good and I've read it many times.

Nice combination of holy - devil. 'was continuously aroused with the conflicts explained in the story. Lilly's part of affirming her daughter in the act is very nice.

All 4 stories sound really good please add more

Love your delectable twists of emotion against ingrained "wisdom", allowing taboo to feed the fires of lust

I think this time the pictures were too minimal. But all said I musterbated about six times before finishing. I'm going to read the other parts. Thank you. But I wish I could see this silkstokinslover .

Definitely write "Daughter's Initiation into Orgy" how about one where Eve's fucked by the incestuous and adulterous fathers of the church?

As for the illustrations, I wish there was one of Eve and Dylan fucking.

Your twist on scriptures had me riveted. I love the extreme situations you put your characters in. I wish I had more time to read everything. Keep them cumming, cause I know I will.

love the forbidden - would love for you to write this part...

another great story as always from you keep it up

It's great to see "the book" referenced for things other than sunshine and unicorns. It's a fictional source of awesome sexual fantasies.

I just can't get enough of your magnificent stories. I love them all.

Love the story, hope there is more.

At the start, I had a hard time reading the story because it was so ridiculous and farfetched and then I remembered Warren Jeffs and realized that the truth is indeed much stranger than fiction. Jeffs was a "President and Prophet, Seer and Revelatory" over 10,000 followers. I say was because he is now serving life plus 20 years. He preached that men had to have at least 3 wives to get to heaven and the more they had, the closer to heaven they were. With that in mind, he married all of his father's wives within weeks of his father's death and ended up with over 70 wives, a 1/3 of which were underage. He had wives as young as 12 in "celestial marriages". He prohibited husbands from having sex with their wives and instead forced the husbands to watch as "seed bearers" (who had "worthy bloodlines") fucked their wives. He sodomized two of his nephews when they are around 5 or 6. He molested at least one of his sons and one of his daughters when they were small children. He would have young girls marry older men who were in his good graces. He had his followers so brainwashed that the young girls parents willing gave their daughters to these twisted marriages. One time, he was presiding over the wedding of a 12 year old girl. He stopped the service and fucked the young girl on a ceremonial bed right in the middle of the temple. Minister Harper has a way to go to match the sickness of Prophet Jeffs!

Name of artist plz and/or other works of art made

At first I didn't like it, it would be better with bit softer start, at least the intend to fuck the daughter shouldn't be stated before the question of the slut girl, that left unanswered (as it was) and then readers filled in on the plan only after witnessing the mother role play the daughter. So, until that I was soldering forward without much pleasure. Then... I jerk myself off twice before end of page four.

Son after I got carried away in fantasy about school where all girls are forced to carry vibro eggs activated trough a mobile app by single use codes...

Before I could return to the story, unfortunately now reading in setting where I had to keep nonchalant posture and flaccid cock. That probably was a grand mistake, but I did enjoy it anyway.

I really like the idea of making this a series! So many possibilities...

Just loved the story and how you wrote it. Although bi-sexual I love sex with a woman so thanks.

Absolutely loved the religion bullshit. however, surprised by author's ignorance of the verbs "to lie" as in "lie in bed" and "to lay" her body on the bed, for example. I don't expect US readers to even know what I'm talking about. As the liar in chief extols "the best education system in the history of the world" or some such drivel, I don't know whether to throw up or give up.

Back to the story. Silkstockingslover couldn't possibly be a female. "Massive tits" everywhere. Yeah, on calendars in auto body shops. On my wife's side of the family, they have those, and all the women hate them. So, reductions are done, so they can run, skate, ski, rock climb... But the biggest give away is Silkstockingslover's ignorance of basic female anatomy. Here are some cuts from this series:

“waxed her vagina “

“saw that her mother had no hair on her vagina”

"Mom's going to shave your vagina."

The vagina is an internal organ. It has no hair to shave, nor is it accessible for shaving if it did have hair. So I conclude that Silkstockingslover is a guy, one that’s unfamiliar with a woman’s cunt, but has a great imagination.

your bio says your a woman, but you write like a man, well written i suppose to appeal to wankers, but i;m an adult, i would like something a little more sensual and erotic with a softer tone,,,that my lady friend and i would find arousing instead of laughing at,,forgive my bluntness, please,, this style appeals to frat brothers and i guess thats' where your main audience is,,,i did vote a 5, the cartoons were hilarious and of course your effort is stellar

I came so many times reading this while masturbating. I always wanted my daddy to fuck me and although I'm an adult now, I still fantasize about it. I'd love to be gangbanged by all the men in my family. You can watch!

God I came so hard and so many times pls make a series out of it God I loved it

An engrossing story. You definitely need to follow up with sequels. Also, loved the illustrations.. More would bee better

OMG - what a celebration!

Rock hard reading this devilishly hot tale.

Wow what a great story. I love all your writings and have cum so many times from reading them. This story I came 3 times while reading it over a couple of days. I have fantasized about fucking my mom, sister, cousins, aunts and the ultimate one of a family orgy. I have never been able to live my fantasy so your stories are the closest thing I have. Thank you and please keep writing them. It is your stories that give me the release I want and need.

What a story,wow. For sure have find the others and down load them.

Your pard definitely has the touch for art work, thought they were great, funny but good work none the less

Anxious to have Eleanor become his slut so her daughter and her can become lovers for him to enjoy together. Please don't make us wait as we always have to do.

Madam Jasmine, your stories are always marvelous. Usage of Church / Bible quotes for instigating the other sexual meaning and turning innocent teen girl / woman (irrespective of father / daughter / mother / wife) into an submissive incest starving sluts is great. I came again and again while reading the entire story, also I will keep cummming while re-reading this story. Hope some more sequels will follow.

I read this several years ago and it stuck with me. So much, in fact, that I had to google it the other night so that I could find it and get off to it again. And again. And again. I wish there were more sequels than it already has.

I found this Jasmine, whilst looking through the index of your stories, having never read this before. WOW, this was just amazing, how you got all the sky fairy quotes into a really twisted story was amazing, off to read the others now. 5 STARS X 5STARS.

When I think I have read Your 'BEST', You outdo Yourself with the next story I read. Five stars just aren't enough.

Tricked by her horny daddy into doing the devils work but isn't that always the case we have been conned, tricked and corrupted by the church and politicians for centuries.

Go on Eve feed on that Apple and don't ignore the cherries.

The pictures of eve I saw in my scripture books looked nothing like the above, but if I ever meet her I shall endeavour to supplement her daddy's seed with my own. In the meantime onto the next chapter . I realise the story is now wrote, therefore I shall put myself in your hands. I had a Jasmine in my old garden it smelt so sweet and climbed all over. Is this a metaphor.

Why crucifixes at the end? Aren’t they symbols mostly of the a catholic faith, but Eves family use not be Catholic . Somewhat confusing or was this done as some sort of statement?

Mmmmm so nice to see eve being groomed by mommy and daddy, satan loves little girls like eve, satan and lilith are perfect for young children, loved the story, but as more of the dark master god satan and lilith in the next one

Hail satan hail lilith

I enjoyed it very much; can't wait to read the potential chapters, as outlined... :D :D

Loved it. Another classic from silkstockingslover. Love the use of blasphemous bible references to coerce and seduce the young, innocent daughter to buy into being a total cum slut. Mmmm. Well done sir.

Though I don’t think this is realistic it is a hot story. In the picture of Eve in her sexy devil outfit I love the cameltoe, so fucking hot.

This story was amazing you have an incredible imagination and flows . All of your stories i have read are amazing keep up the good work you are my favorite

Meatoplease

Praise God! You are an angel, a gift from the lord. You're filthy mind is so fucking awesome.

Very erotic!!

Nice one, add more illustrations

Hi Jasmine this is one of your honest stories and would love the series to run and run like the Bree stories. Please finish the series

This story is really good, I wish I had a daughter that was just as subserviant.

Wow. Very hot

OMG your best I have read so far. Please keep the series cuming so we can all enjoy your fine talents

This was a wonderful story. In fact I would like to read more.

I would love daugter was pregnat by daddy and mommy too in the same moment. And Beth too...