by silkstockingslover
Your stories are always excellent. Although I respect the talent of the illustrator, the images didn't do much for me. Definitely need more mother/daughter action.
Shaving a vagina would be really painful (and pointless), but shaving a vulva is sexy.
Daughter's Initiation into Seduction followed by Daughter's Initiation into Orgy seems to be the next logical steps in this series. Loved the illustrations, just wish there had been more especially Lilly shaving Eve, Lilly sucking Dylan under the table, and Katie getting sucked on by Eve.
Loved it. I would go with "Daughter's Initiation into Orgy" as the next chapter. But include either a female Minister or two or some of their wives or female office staff.
I found this to be a quite astonishing story. Despite the wild premise behind the tale it was almost believable in content! Extremely well written, and very hot and horny!
I so hope and wish that the follow ups hinted at at the end of the story actually get written. This author has huge talent, she's one of my favourites.
Maybe she is only familiar with a western fairy-tale and not a mid-eastern fairy-tale? You were warned of potential offense, yet you read it anyway... Maybe to get that persecution-boner some christians like to get...
Why don't you change your story? Swap Christ for Islam? Because you are a fucking coward.
Thoroughly enjoyed the story. I don't care for this style (caricature) of art, though.
I loved the complete story the illustrations where the best but you needed much more for the story really a well written story Tenbears43 next chapter more illustrations good luck with the contest
Loved it. Your stories never fail to entertain and Walt's artwork was both sexy and humourous with his scripture quote boards in the background. Will definitely be watching for sequels with Daughter's Seduction into Lesbianism/Orgy/Seduction.
Very sexually charged story, with awesome artwork.
Please both continue.
I enjoyed panel one but the other art work accompanying your story I passed right on by. Eve helping to seduce other women seems a good path to explore. Please give at least one of the women a full bush.