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To be continued... (of course!)
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoIm so l0ving this. It kind of getting me so adicted i have to be late f0r clas just to finish it, its s0 sensual and passi0nate., and its very different in the sense that its fr0m a mans perspective.
GreenleafRover 11 years agoYour writing is wonderful, masterful, fantastic. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
joodleover 11 years agoThat is how powerful this story was. No words can describe. You have claimed them all! I haven't given this many consecutive 5 star ratings in a LONG time. For a story that hasn't had any true fucking, this has been very moving. It is the evidence of a great writer. Please continue with this story, and don't make it short-lived or half-baked. Looking forward to more of your work, on any story. :)
Scotsman69almost 12 years agoreally are a most remarkable writer Brunne. Terse, spare, intense... just beautiful.
kiwiplumalmost 12 years agoTotally top story. I'm riveted, please make it go on and on, don't stop where you got to with Stephs story, I need to live in their world a while longer!
Quantifiedalmost 12 years agoPage 3 wasn't what I expected. Great descriptions abound. Very vivid. (5 stars)
Brunnealmost 12 years agoAuthorSorry Anons! I know it's a tease enough without the silly page-break promising more...! Formatting fail.
(glad you liked it anyway) ;)
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lonelyspiritalmost 12 years agofantastic again, continued to have me gripped. ,
cant wait for more from both sides.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWhat a cruel, cruel thing to do! But I must be a masochist because I can't get enough of this kind of cruelty! I can't wait to read the next installment!
