Divine Harem Ch. 01

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mrDiffmrDiff3 months ago

It is a great start, really good story. I think it'd be a hotter story if he had no choise to be fertile or not, I mean everytime he has sex he impregnates a woman, but I hope he choses to be fertile everytime and starts to make babies like crazy. It would be interesting too if (keeping in mind the fist blessing he has) some women are afraid of geting pregnant, like they are really into him and crazy to fuck him but with a little risky game for them (girls). I mean, bc of the girs lust they are fucking him unware of his blessings and hoping of not het knocked up, or aking him to pull out and he choses not to bc of heat of the moment. (Im not talkinf about CNC just a little risky game haha) Snd it would be hot as well if he knows that and chose to be fertile (Like he is a very noble guy but when he is about to cum he kinda lost his mind bc of the pleasure and chose to be fertile down there bc of a some sort of a primal instinct everyone has). Well, is just a sugestion, I reallt like the cenario you created and you dont neet to listen to me hahah I just wanted to share my thoughst about it. Please continue this story

ObsidiantheDragonObsidiantheDragon3 months agoAuthor

Fair dues, I will keep your feedback in mind ^^

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

the "kid with a lolly" and "drinking milk like a little girl" analogies are a huge turnoff: avoid analogies with children in your sex writing, it feels so creepy and stops the eroticism of it

ObsidiantheDragonObsidiantheDragon3 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much! It means a lot >w<

PlutoburnsPlutoburns3 months ago

Oh damn that was really hot breeding

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