All Comments on 'Divorce and Future - Passed'

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IrishLaddy59IrishLaddy596 months ago

Excellence realized sir.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I like SiFi and Fantasy and I really I like this, a lot. That said had Tina gone back in time to just before her mother went on that dinner and simply 'took' Davenport then the story would not fill a paragraph, so there would be no story. Then again Tina's mother would not have been sexually assaulted and they would have lived happily from then on. No brainer in my opinion, she goes for Davenport before the dinner.

Frankfiredawg06Frankfiredawg065 months ago

Such an awesome story

For a sci-fi nerd it was perfect

5 ⭐️

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

An enjoyable and eye opening read. I'm the story, even Davenport had sired Jakey, it would have been well if Jake had learned to accept him as his son. But that's not your story

I liked your story and rate it four stars.

JPB

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

What the hell.

Five stars.

JPB

ImshakenImshakenabout 2 months ago

Tachyons are lethal? As I understand it they don't interact with normal matter in any way. Oh well... It's Stang's universe in the story so let's just roll with it. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

LMAO at the need to write an explanation!

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