All Comments on 'Don't You Remember?'

This story seemed to lack any kind of spark to get my interest. It could have been the tense in which you wrote it (First Person can be tricky). It felt "phoned in", if you know what I mean. Like, if it was a stage production, the people involved would have been mumbling their lines in a bored monotone and just wandering to their marks.

Not attempting to be cruel, just offering an honest opinion.

A little tease that got me wet. The possibilities are delicious.

I really couldn't tell if this was a lesbian story or something else.

If it was something else you had the perfect opportunity to make it a lesbian story when Victoria were outside to get some air

I was hoping that the two girls would get together and at least taste one another's pussies.

I'm sure that I'd remember if someone touched my pussy no matter how much I had to drink

Another sexual assault story. How unfortunate that this gets passed as experimenting.