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Click here'I want you,' she persisted. 'You promised you'd teach me new tricks and I'm ready to learn.'
'Martha . . .'
'Please Dotty. You're the best friend I've ever had. Please don't spurn me in my hour of need.'
Could I possibly resist an entreaty like that?
No, could I heckers-like.
I shoved her back onto my bed and dived on her.
And yes, that Berlin Wall of ours crumbled after less than one second.
- COMMENTS
Beejay36 months agoM Y, what a turn of events..quicker than a blink of an eye!
From one to another to another…sex …sex..sex..wherever it turns up
Question is…what’s up with Michelle?
LimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthorThank you for thanking me for doing what I love (writing). And thank you even more for reading and taking time to comment.
LimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthorThank you for your detailed comments and for worrying about Dotty's drinking habits. I'm sure she'll cut back a bit as she gets older and wiser (not that I ever cut back much myself!).
Mrtoufover 5 years agoI paused at the end of page 1 and decided to leave a comment. :)
This is brilliant stuff. First of all, even though it took me a few pages in the previous story to appreciate the story being narrated by Dotty with her own particular dialect, that's really grown on me, and it works really well here.
You've done a good job filling out the world these characters live in so that it isn't just a cardboard backdrop for the story.
The characters seem genuine and relatable. Sort of worried about all the drinking that they're doing, but it's not out of place either.
Can't wait to see how the rest of this part turns out!
Best of luck continuing the story!
LimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthorI was beginning to worry about not hearing from you!
Thanks as always for taking time to comment. I'm approaching halfway through writing the next part and the Dotty/Michelle/Martha triangle is only getting more complicated. Without giving too much away, jealousy is possibly the last thing on Martha's mind. She's just had a whole night of sex with Dotty and wants more.
jenorma2012over 5 years agoSorry it took me a few days to read this, every time I tried something pops up and I could not get back to the story,I though this was a little better than the first part and I am sure that Martha was wondering about her and Dotty for a while now it is coming true, I wonder if Martha is feeling jealous over Dotty and her new gf, well we can see about that in the next part
LimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthorNot sure exactly what you mean by "willie heckers-ike" and apologies if I said that along the way. Thanks for commenting, though. I like getting feedback more than getting high star ratings. and I will always take feedback on board, positive or not.
LimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthorBig shock for you but, as my bio makes clear, I am male. Sorry if that knocks he wind out of your sails. And in all fairness, I'm only ever trying to be humorous . . . .
