All Comments on 'Drunk Strangers'

by starburstcherub74

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newexoticanewexoticaalmost 9 years ago

Solid! Enough detail to give a richness and depth which is unusual in stories on this site but not so much to be tedious. Nicely erotic, maybe its my own personal preference but would have liked more detail on the rough stuff, more dirty talk, more detail on the way he pushed her physically, but overall really nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Well written all around. It gives you enough detail to get lost in the story, but also leaves enough to your imagination. Very well done and very hot

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