All Comments on 'Egg Money'

by RichardGerald

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Schwanze1Schwanze1over 1 year ago

I thought she would offer him a quick divorce on favorable terms

Diecast1Diecast1over 1 year ago

Love the story. Wife is a bitch. AAAAAA++++++

ZippityDoDaDayZippityDoDaDayover 1 year ago

You are an excellent, albeit sometimes frustrating, author, but it is fairly obvious you threw this one together rather quickly. ⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well structuered tale. Five stars.

RePhilRePhilover 1 year ago

What a story teller!!!! 5&FAV

Helen1899Helen1899over 1 year ago

Great story, happy ending, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another cuckold story, no great surprise. 2 stars.

dgfergiedgfergieover 1 year ago

As usual the anon's can't see a true artist and author when they are right in front of them. Still 5 stars.

GillotineGillotineover 1 year ago

Almost one year later, and this story has taken on much more meaning...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story although I would have loved to have read that in the divorce, his wife had learned of the existence of the fund and her lack of entitlement to any portion of the proceeds. 5 Stars.

Thank you.

G

nogravynogravyover 1 year ago

Interesting, but not up to this really good writer's usual offerings.

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirensabout 1 year ago

Nice story! It ended on a hopeful note for the MC and Donna. Nothing more is needed, in my opinion. Five stars, and sorry I can't give it more stars.

JimQ2JimQ211 months ago

Took too long to put her out.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Abruptly truncated. There’s so much available for a complete ending that it’s a shame the author didn’t finish it. 4 stars for an otherwise fantastic story.

Bill S.

BSreaderBSreader11 months ago
As always

A great read

MyInspirationMyInspiration10 months ago

Another story that ends just as it's getting Juicy 3*

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Dammit, I wanted to read about her fainting when she found out he was worth forty million. Oh well, it was still a really good story, just about half a page too short.

Thanks, RG.

MountainMan1336MountainMan13369 months ago

I enjoyed this story but only gave you three stars. As usual it seems like you rushed then conclusion, I believe you could get at least another chapter out of this story.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A good story,unfortunately You made your MC spinless.You made him lose respect and his integrity (obviously you gave him no pride) by making him put up with her affairs,especially with everybody knowing about her affairs for all the years. You also made him an idiot,he learned nothing. That egg money should never be disclosed to any wife,just discreetly used as needed.Something many men have learned the hard way. Also many have also learned 'love' guarantees nothing..In todays society a prenup is simply a wise choice for both parties.I know for myself,though I am happily married, the only reason I would get married now days is for the want of kids. Prenup mandatory...ARM

HighBrowHighBrow9 months ago

NEVER MARRY A MED STUDENT, ESP. A BLOODY SURGEON. Agree, disagree, you’ve been warned…

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

MC is a pushover. Too bad. **

oldpantythiefoldpantythief5 months ago

While it wasn't the classic BTB, it did end well for the MC. Just think he should have dumped the cheating slut much sooner and let her divorce him before having sex with Donna. Just because his wife is cheating doesn't make it right for him to while he is still married. Liked the story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Well that's certainly one way to stick a fork into your wife. Well done.

ScaliaScalia3 months ago

In the USA, it is always the higher ranked employee that is let go, not the underling.

AnotherChapterAnotherChapterabout 1 month ago

I generally like RG’s stories, but this one is an exception. Why would any self respecting guy put up with her slutty behaviour for so long? He had nothing to lose by getting rid of the bitch so much sooner. Second problem is that he starts an affair of his own before getting quit of his marriage. If you want to move on, then do it in the right order!

inka2222inka2222about 1 month ago

Meh. 3.5 stars. As others noted, this story had major problems: (1) he was effectively wasting his life married to her for no reason whatsoever (and the worry about losing the egg money was moot since the end of story clearly said it was protected in divorce). (2) he had clear and great blackmail material but let her steal ALL their marital assets he was entitled to in a divorce, (3) basically ZERO punishment for her (being fired from the hospital just to get another cushy well paid job isn't exactly "punishment".

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

it was a very good story with nice twists but no emotional depth, no sense of a loved one lost even by accounting the time line.....keep trying still 5/5

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

Meh

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

good story, would like to read about the wailing and gnashing of teeth when the slut finds shes not worth az much as she thought, her reputation is further in the gutter and hubby is wealthy beyond her wildest fantasies. i would have liked to read RG version of her gnashing of teeth, wailing and protestations of love during the divorce. Previous commenters have it right where they complain slut wasnt punished much being allowed to take everything but nest egg, thats not realistic even when one is done w/ everything to do w/ a wife to be x. Also knew she was cheating long before the xmas vaca tripw/ a lover, why was he not getting all the cheating facts together, again unrealistic. In general not close to RG's best. rk

NitpicNitpic13 days ago
Bit

Bit of an abrupt ending.Also,why didn't he divorce his cheating wife a lot earlier?.

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

Meh. Ending seemed very rushed and abrupt.

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