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Everyone wore masks; Ryan had his own, too. But after weeks of peeling back the layers, Ryan was finally seeing the inner Erik who was eager and ambitious but a little insecure and uncertain. Ryan liked what he saw—a lot.
"Babe?" Ryan whispered softly. "Erik?"
No answer.
Ryan pressed a soft kiss against Erik's temple. "I think I love you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoYou got me in tears. This chapter is so relatable to a lot of people. The writing is incredible, shows the true depth of feelings, knowing that your family rejects you for who you are...thank you, really thank you. You have a genuine talent with this. Most often people read books or stories to incorporate pieces of them into their lives or sympathetize with what the main characters are going through. And I feel lile you did an outstanding job here. This well deserves a 6 or a 7 or even a 10 star rating. Thank you again 😭
catamiteabout 6 years agoBeautifully written, beautifully told. I feel honored witnessing their passion and love. Great job.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoIt seems that finally, maybe the mask and the hard shell in place to try and protect and keep Erik safe has almost completely shattered! I'm hoping that Ryan can help him see his real value and self worth, and that most of what Eric believes to be him being the Best, is mostly an illusion. I was devastated that Erik's Mom reacted in the uncaring, selfish, very hurtful way that she did. We don't have to agree or approve of the Sin, but we are commanded to love the sinner!!! I'm looking forward to the next segments of this intense very well written gay love story. Love has the power to conquer all things. Can't hardly wait for more. Thanks hudsbart....
Anonymousabout 6 years agoA good take on an age-old story. Erik's rejection wasn't particularly dramatic or shocking, but it was as painful and emotionally violent as it always is.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoIt’s about time we have authors like you in literotica. Thanks for sharing your talent here for free. But I feel selfish at the same time. You should be rewarded monetarily for this.
