All Comments on 'Fall Cross Country...'

I really liked it. Good guy gets a great woman and dumps a bitchy cheating tramp. Nicely written, and nicely thought out.

How about some more like this? We've had enough wimpy loser stories, more like this would go a long way to adding some fun to loving wives.

Well thought out, the husband was not a fool, and didn't go for revenge. Just walked away with his head held high. Thank You.

Fun, fun,fun I don't care if some of it was done before.

Well executed. Cheating, self centered wife gets the shaft,

How could it be better than that?

could have been a good story , I liked the plot but what put me off was having to read all the dialog of the southern woman . Why do writers make everybody from the south sound like they have only a 3rd grade education ? it really ruins things reading dialog that amounts to a white version of a scumbag rapper giving an interview . Many writers write the southern dialog out normally and mention the accent as you go along .That would have made this story quite a bit better . I do hope you take this as constructive and keep on writing as your husband characters have balls and dont put up with the cheating . LW needs all of that we can get .

Trite? Hackneyed? Clichéd? Formulaic? I say; "Yes, Yes, Probably, and Maybe So! But it don't mean a thang! 'Cause I LOVE A Happy Ending!" And this story a thoroughly enjoyable read, delivers a happy ending BIG time. I am so glad StangStar06 has managed to grow a pair, after his/her last couple of dismal tales about male humiliation and wimpdom I was about ready to add him/her to my short list of bitch writers that I do not read because they consistently denigrate men, and just plain suck. Do I detect a real man's GM or MOPAR in the near future? Please, no more "MouseBangs." LOL!!!!

Even though it's been done before, you pulled it off nicely. Well done!