All Comments on 'Family Affair: Backseat Sister'

Bathroom mommy forsure

Liked it, please continue with mommy and sister and cum inside their pussies, they need it.

Please continue.

i would love to see mom and daughter with son while dad is away. mom didn't get mad so she's probably thinking i got to get me some of that dick.

Extend the fun to the rest of the family, but he should father his sisters'child

Please continue. I enjoy your writings.

Loved the story hope chapter 2 will bring mom together with brother and sister

please continue

Please continue into this one.. I prefer stories that are one on one..

Option 3 Dad Takes Dick too

Make the mom join in too

id say mom and daughter tag team son/brother and leave dad to be included later on if you decide to expand.

Good story. Don't add dad, keep it secret from him. It's good to have something to fear... getting caught.

I'd like to see options 1, 2, 5, 6 and 7 happen and include the Auntie and maybe the father fucking his mother and being joined by his daughter

Leave dad out of it. Options 1,2 4 & 6 sound good. Your backseat mommy series was pretty good so maybe that should be a tired and true formula.

All of the above please?

Any of those ideas for more chapters would be great. Would especially enjoy Dad Takes Dick Too.

Bathroom Mommy works for me...

Fucking the sister is great.

My vote is for:

FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME

Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away

I vote for the crazy threesome as the sequel.

Mom with Son and Mom + Sister and Mom + Sister + Son.

Dad should not be included actively. Passive like this one. Story was hot!

No Dad please

First, I would like to see another story between Brother and sister THEN a story between son and Mom.

Continue the story, however I'm not that interested in the Dad+Son thread but the others sound great

Keep it here. It is hot enough

Curious about what you mean exactly when you said "Almost every time I think it should and write a part 2 I am wrong"? How exactly are you wrong about it? Is it not enjoyable for you to continue storyline you feel are complete or that you have covered what you wanted about them? You really should only continue the story if you want to because writing it would be enjoyable for yourself.

That being said personally and selfishly I would really want you to continue this story line with every idea you mentioned (also please don't leave out the dad he should be able to enjoy both his son and daughter as well). But I agree with some of the other posters suggestion of another brother and sister get together before mom joins in. I would imagine that they would want a little more intimate time together after this unique first time.

I showed this to my sister and we started playing the 69 game that night. We have not been caught yet though, We just finished fucking and my sister sucked out the condom, She is very hot and is going to college this fall, I am going to visit her on weekends, No Mom yet. Not sure that would fly but she and Dad have split so my sister and I have talked about telling her and offering a three way when she comes home for Thanksgiving,

We would like you to continue but for obvious reasons leave Dad out lol.

All of the possible story episode look great. I would not be interested in a father-son episode as that is not my thing. let us know when you may be introducing all the other themes for sequels

I think that you should continue the story. They're on a camping trip and that could allow for a very satisfying scene. Maybe they share a tent and it storms out. This would mask the sounds of them having sex. Having a situation where they can take their time and see more of each other would be very arousing. Maybe you could have the mom trying to secretly and quietly masterbate while trying to figure out how she might be able to join in. Thanks for the great story and for helping me imagine what might happen next.

Hello, even if there are many stories of that kind already written, I wish you to continue this story. The plot is good, your writing of their mutual feelings is very good, very sensitive and sensual. I suggest you to write part 2 about the "bathroom mommy" and part 3 about the swapping tents.

Keep on like this, your story and writing are great and make this story about a well-known theme an excellent one in this kind of story.

Yes please do continue - All the options sound good except the father liking dick

First off I love your stories. but consider this before you write part 2. In this story you had written that both the Brother and sister LOVED each other. All to often people write great stories like this, and say the characters fall in ,or are in, love with each other, but in the next chapter these same characters are fucking other people. While this may be all well and good for some peoples relationships IRL. It takes place all to often in these stories. Instead please continue on with the story (or other future tales) with the sex focusing on just the main characters and the relationship.

I would go with "FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY" as the next part. I agree with another comment that the bro/sis should be the central romance, but the subtext between the mother and son at the end of this one is a plot thread that needs resolved. I don't really see much dad/daughter subtext, especially with such a clueless father, so I would keep clear of that.

Maybe have it as a stand alone too!

I gave it a 2 for the contest--not enough nudity--actually zero. But for a monthly story it deserves about a 4.5

I'd like this to continue. There's some reason their mother was so passe about the whole thing and helped cover it up. Either she's had the hots for her son for a while...and maybe her daughter too, or she had a similar experience with her older brother. I could see this family moving into full-on incest with not much trouble. And maybe adding an uncle and an aunt.

Do anything except the father turning gay. Story was good though

Definitely needs a follow up - personal favourite would be 'FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME'...

To much of last year's Backseat Mommy: A Long Hard Ride. You are a great writer so don't recycle ideas.

Love your writing and would be eager to read more on this family!

For part 2, have Mom ride in the back with her son, as they have bought so much stuff, that there is no other place for her to ride...besides, sis wants mom to enjoy herself too!

yah I would love to have you wright a second part to this now that mom know what is going on she needs to be in the next story with the brother and sister in some way. I think this could be a real big story if you so choos to make it that way I would love if you did . I score this at a 10

Write all the Family Affair stories - they'll get 5 * just like this one!!

Don't add the dad, just keep the son

Keep going this is awesome love your writing style one of my all time favorite stories keep it between the son and other female family members

Mom sequel

Further the sister until she leaves for college and then let mom slip in for a few before sis comes home for the holidays. Sis has a few boy-toys at college but finds she needs to be with her bro and him only. Sis gets a great job far from home as he gets a good gig in the same town - they become defacto married for a few years with mom's knowledge and dad's ignorance - until family time..... Awkward times when visitng grandma/pa at home with kids.... And a next-door melding old bible thumping bitch calls social services due to who the kids call mom & dad on a Christmas visit.

Just keep it plausible - no weird wacko unlikely's.

not to big on the idea of involving the dad. furthering the relationship with the sister is a good idea. so is dding the mom. bathroom mommy and crazy threesome is a good start

This was a nice quick read, though can't quite figure out how he got on his knees in the back seat without his dad seeing him ... or maybe he did!

Sequence should be

Mom and Son

Threesome (son, daughter and mom)

Swapping Tents.

I would not mind the fishing story (hint! hint!)

P.S. Love all your stories, especially your Turning Stories.

Please add some more stories to this series.

I would like to see all of the ideas except the family orgy

Put me down for a story with the dad!

Fantastic story, you have a gift! I would love to see this evolve in many more stores, including dad takes dick!

Are you insane? Of course you should continue! Great story, can't wait for more.

I love everything that you write and I'm always waiting for your next submission. Continue the great work.

Please continue just as you outlined at the end of the story.

Could be your best series yet!!

I vote you continue, but with JUST the siblings. I don't care whether or not mom cares, or preferably you continue from an alternate ending where mom never found out. These two siblings have real chemistry, that I would love to see continued without involving anyone else joining.

I loved it get the whole family in it

Yes please continue on as you write great stories and yes start off with the mother,sister and brother go at it when the father goes away for the day.Then have the mother wanting her son by herself in the washroom or somewhere in the house.Then so top it off have the mother and the daughter have the son in the back see on the way home.

But if honest I would explore bro and sis together sneaking around slightly helped by mom more and more until you start to bring the rest of the family in.

I love it when women catch people having sex, we already know what 90% of guys will do (watch or try to join), but it's always interesting to see a woman's reaction to such an event.

But my vote is for the first two: FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY &

FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME

Swapping and Orgy are Ok with me too.

My vote is to leave dad out, bt that's just me. I immediately dump any story that hints ANY dad. Sorry just me, that's my vote for a sequel.

Yes part two and I agree leave dad out and make it mom and daughter and son in the end. But more son and daughter and also son and mom and have daughter spy on them and then join in at a later date.

Daughter does daddies dick, dummy dad doesnt delineate!

I DEMAND IT!!!,!1111

Awesome story, looking forward to seeing how you carry this on xxSuexx

Yes please write another chapter, any and all of the suggestions would be fabulous!

Am I the only one who wants to know how 2 people could be fucking in the back seat and the driver not knowing. HELLO. Have you ever been in this position yourself? There is no way to mask the unmistakeable smell of sex in a motor car and unless both parents had both lost there sense of smell they would have to know just what was happening in the back.

Still, forgetting this lack of detail, the story was inspiring and an OK source of penile stimulation, meaning it caused me to get a fat so it was worth a read but not a 5.

Wow..your story wanting for more...your stories are always a good read. Please continue...but also bring in the aunt and cousins....:)

I love your stories, I hope you continue this one, I actually wish this one was longer, kudos to you!

From what I can see you get the most negative sequel feedback when things are taken too far.

Have you considered having the mother being approving and even helping to cover for them without direct involvement?

It's a great story and I'd love to see ALL of the suggestions cum to life as only you can tell it.

This was beyond great! Please keep it going!

You've left the door open perfectly for a sequel. Even if you only write one more, just to get the mother involved. You've gotta do it!

..............that Mom will accept what she has witnessed as fulfillment of her now ignited and hot trending libido !

No cars and little knowledge of what to expect of girls. Now at 85 I am way past all of what I have just been excited about. Well I can dream can't I.

sequal......

I really enjoyed your version of backseat sex... but if you write a sequel, I would like to read about an encounter of these two siblings having loving sex without the cars' backseat location. Perhaps somewhere they can truly show each other how much love they can demonstrate thru (during?) sex but in much more comfortable surroundings.

Part 2 is written and almost done editing and will be out later in October.

It is called Bathroom Mommy and even has a bit of a twist.

Jasmine

can't wait for part 2 and more parts! I love most of your stories

Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock...yes, that sounds like a hot continuation on where the car ride story ended. This was an extremely hot scenario.

hot and nice story with a surprise ending.

I want a reading of a sequel!

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English is not my native language.

This part is great and I'm currently working on Part TWO. I've completed editing to the point at which Philip is busy tasting his mother's honeypot.

I'll try to finish tonight (Friday, Oct. 20) because I realize you are on deadline.

I'm not used to sending these kinds of things so you may have to help me along in that regard. I know there's a risk in publicizing #s ... 9098626584. Call me if you want, or email me your No. or just email me directions and your Email Address.

Thanx, Dan

A very yummy story indeed! I like your ideas for the follow on stories too! Thank you!

I love this $tory cant wait to read more

Excellent story. Can't wait for part 2, 3,4. (hoping)

My vote are the two:

FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY

Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock.

FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME

Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away

This is a great story and I look forward to more chapters but leave dad out. Or if you bring dad into the relationship don't make the men bisexual. Like Philip I wished his sister would have been wearing stockings when he took her virginity.

Loved the story also love the ideas for the other stories you must write. But please leave Dad out and please do not make Phillip bi.

Best story more please!!!!!!!!

I would love to see the tent swap. Dad could get involved, but please, nothing between Phillip and Dad.

Please continue this .Awesome story so far .

Funny and hot.

Read great. Keep it going.

That was a really good story. Definetly should make a part two. It even more

Please keep it up! Love your work.... can't wait for chapter 2!

I'm in love. The hidden sex under others noses are the best. Please keep writing this series and if you need another proofreader, editor, or just someone to cum from the story, let me know.

Good, hot story. Well told. Looking forward to a continuation.

all the ideas soung good except the dad one, forget him with the kids, put him with grandma and his wife, maybe his/her sister, that's plenty hot. no gay stuff.

Any of your suggestions would be greatly appreciated, you did a great job on this one.