First Time Sharing

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My first story submission. This is about sharing my wife.
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The First Time I Shared My Wife. This is my first story submission.

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A little background, I had mentioned to her before, while we were having sex, my desire to share her. She seemed interested but said that it wasn't something that she could do on her own. She said that maybe if it were a surprise she would like it. Well, that definitely got me thinking. If she wanted a surprise then a surprise it would be. So I devised a plan to set her up for a very memorable first time of being shared.

We had the Honeymoon Suite of the St. Louis Marriot West reserved for the night. We are in the Limo on the way there having Champagne and talking about the fun ahead of us for the night. I told her that I had a very special evening planned for her that I was sure that she would enjoy. She was excited and ready to see what I had in store.

The driver pulled up to the main entrance and came to open the door for us. I took her by the hand and lead her to the door. I had already checked in and had the key so we proceeded to the elevator. The door opened and we walked to our room for the night. We had an hour and a half before we needed to be downstairs. I opened the door and picked her up. I carried her into the room and gently placed her onto the bed. I walked over to the table where there was an iced bottle of Champagne and 2 glasses. I popped the cork and poured us each a glass. I toasted to a night to remember.

After she finished her Champagne I helped her move up on the bed and get more comfortable and poured her another glass. I asked her if she was ready for some fun before we went downstairs. She replied that she was indeed ready. I suggested that she get on the edge of the bed on her hands and knees, which she gladly did. I told her not to peek and that I would be right back. At that time I went to open the door. When I got back to the bed I pulled her dress up over her back to exposed her bare ass and shaved pussy. It really was quite a site to see. I asked if she was ready and she wiggled her ass in response.

That is when he walked into the room. He slowly walked up behind her, being careful to stay directly behind her so that he would not be seen. Once he was behind her he bent forward and kissed her ass and the back of her thighs. Upon feeling the contact she shuttered and spread her legs slightly giving him access to her sweet shaved pussy. After a couple long licks he stood up behind her and removed his pants. Next he grabbed his huge throbbing cock and placed the tip at the entrance to her smooth wet pussy. Upon feeling it touching her lips she began to rotate her hips grinding her shaved lips on his cock. Ever so slowly his began to rub the head up and down her pussy lips, teasing her. I could tell this was having the desired effect on her. The next time the alignment was right she thrust her hips back toward the cock at the vaginal opening. Her pussy was so wet that it had lubed his big cock while they were rubbing together the head popped right in with little resistance causing her to cry out with surprise when she felt herself quickly stretched by the large cock that was practically inside her. After pausing for a minute to become accustomed to the girth she began to back farther onto that cock. I asked he if it felt good and she just began to moan and they picked up the tempo and began to thrust towards one another. That is when she began screaming out as she began to have her first orgasm. As she was cuming he sunk his cock into her until he hit bottom and held it there while she continued to orgasm on his big cock.

After her orgasm subsided I asked her if she was ready to roll over and see the ownerr of the cock that she had just cum all over and she said she was definitely ready. I helped her roll onto her back being careful not to wrinkle her dress while she kept her eyes closed for the surprise. Once she was on her back I pulled her dress back up the expose her again and pulled the top down to expose her 36D tits. He moved in between her legs and slipped that big cock back into her tight pussy and thrust to the hilt in one smooth motion. He leaned forward and took each nipple into his mouth in turn and then moved up and started kissing her while he began sliding in and out of her again. That is when I told her to open her eyes and look at him for the first time. She began to cum instantly when she looked down and saw that Big Black Cock pounding into her white pussy. Just as she began to moan and scream he thrust all the way into her until his full black balls were smashed against her ass and started to pump stream after stream of his hot thick cum deep inside her recently married white pussy. After they had both finished cumming together I reminded her that it was time to go downstairs. After they had a minute to recover enough to move I helped her get to her feet and smooth her dress out. Then we headed downstairs to the banquet hall. That's right, I shared my white wife with a BBC on our wedding day before the reception.

We arrived down stairs with just a couple minutes to spare before the reception started. The DJ announced us and we entered to the cheers of our friends and families. We made our way around the room "Thanking" everyone while the meal was served.

After the meal was finished the DJ announced the first dance followed by the Father/Daughter dance. She met her dad out on the dance floor for the dance. As they were dancing i noticed that she seemed to be kind of squirming and I wondered what was going on. I soon found out why she was squirming. I was watching her dancing and I looked down at her feet as she floated across the floor. As I watched her feet I saw a giant load of cum drop onto the dance floor. I am not sure if anyone else saw it or not but when I saw that I got instantly hard again. After the dance was finished I quickly grabbed a napkin to clean the cum off the dance floor.

Next it was time for the bouquet and garter toss. First she did the bouquet toss and one of her college roommates caught the bouquet. Next they brought a chair to the middle of the dance floor for her to sit on so I could retrieve the garter. She sat on the edge of the chair and leaned back while spreading her legs. I moved in front of her and got on my hands and knees, slowly crawling towards her while her brides maids lifted the front of her dress for me. I climbed under her dress and she lifted her right leg and placed it on my shoulder. I reached up and grabbed the garter and started to slide it down her leg. I am not sure why but I was surprised when her inner thigh was wet and slick with the cum from the BBC that she had enjoyed earlier in the evening. They garter was completely soaked with cum. We didn't have an extra one or time to switch it out anyway so I had to toss that cum soaked garter. So, with the single guys gathered around behind me it took the garter and shot it over my right shoulder. I turned around just in time to see her garter caught by one of her college friends boyfriends. He caught it and held it to his nose and took a deep whiff of it and smile at the smell of sex on it. If he only knew where the smell came from.

The rest on the reception consisted of a few more drinks and dancing. Finally, around 11:30 the reception came to a close and it was time to head upstairs to the honeymoon suite for the night. In the elevator, on the way up the suite I asked her if she had enjoyed herself and she said that she most definitely enjoyed every minute of it and i leaned down to kiss her. I told her what a lucky man I was and how much I was looking forward to spending the rest of my life with her and enjoying many more adventures in the future.

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11 Comments
Ray RobertsRay Robertsabout 4 years ago
Takes all sorts to make a mark on what they enjoy with their wife or Partner

Hmm, I am sure they are in for an enjoyable life together. The lifestyle is not for everyone but for those that include appropriate "Wife Sharing" are in for a good ride.

Ignore the knockers these stories are well-liked and popular on this site. Would love to read of a follow-up

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Your first submission

Your first submission and thankfully your last.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot story.

Needed better character development and how hard he was fucking her and not miss great cream pie discriptions with maybe hubby running a hand up her leg and getting some cum on it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Share?

Funny thing about these so called men that share their wives. I bet you anything if you ask to use their car or truck they would give you a hell no. Kinda lets you know where there priorities are.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerabout 8 years ago
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I gave it 3 stars, but with a little work I think it would be higher. Some have already mentioned several problems such as not developing the characters, a completely unbelievable plot (in the present form) and , while I'm no expert, it seems to me you have written several scenes, not a complete story.

Tell us the character's names, give us some idea of how they look and think, tell us how it comes to be that a man is dumb, or crazy enough to share his bride, and just what happened to cross up the wires in the brides head to the point she would allow it.

You do have an interesting way with words and I suggest you don't get discouraged. Keep writing if you enjoy it and I promise you, many readers will enjoy your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Mildly imaginative and somehow endearing

But still confusing, who was who?

rocketeer50rocketeer50about 8 years ago
Agree with impo 61's comment

Want2share,

Ignore the comments from those who hate the very idea of wife sharing. Instead of skipping over stories they know they hate, they get joy from reading every word of such stories so they can self-righteously say how terrible they are.

However, impo says yours has some potential, so he or she is not a categorical hater. It is hard to accept the idea that a newlywed husband would spring the surprise on her on the wedding day which usually includes a vow to take no one else. So, you needed to prepare the reader for that kink, maybe with discussions between the couple as they were dating about their attitudes toward marital fidelity and jealousy. Even so, having it happen on the wedding day with a stranger is hard to swallow. Your story might have been better served by setting up the bride seeing or meeting the potential lover that day and have the share be consummated later.

I want to encourage you to write more. Take advantage of this site's volunteer editors. They can help you improve your stories before you publish them here. Don't get discouraged.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Ugh! Ick! And no names! Ya, so he comes home from work a few days after their return....

....from their honeymoon where she daily had less and less interest in having sex with him. He couldn't call it making love, she barely tolerated him now.

Entering their apartment, he immediately sees the large manila envelope, a sheet of paper and her ring.

Rushing over, he reads, "John, I've filed for an annulment. I can't live without Tyrone's giant cock. Even while on our honeymoon, I went and found big black cocks to fuck, instead of spending the day at the spa, while you were golfing. Every night we went out, I fucked one when I went to the bathroom.

Now Tyrone says I can move in with him and he and his four roomies will all take good care of me. You don't recall do you, that Ty is is the porn business. I'm his newest discovery! We've already shot eleven scenes and I got the paperwork back, so stopped by to drop it off on my way to the shoot.

Sorry, honey, I can't help myself. I didn't want anything, so it should be easier for you to move on. See you in the movies!

-Carla"

He collapsed on the floor in a heap and cried like a child for his lost love.....

So....a brave first attempt, but an abysmal story.

1. Use names for characters.

2. Develop characters' personalities, so readers can relate.

3. Try having some respect for even the modest intelligence of your potential audience. If you're going to do something outrageous, you must provide a vehicle, an event, or a method/vehicle to set it up for readers to accept it.....or they simply won't.

4. Make sure you are telling a story, and not just writing a scene or two and calling it good. If it doesn't start somewhere, head in some direction and end somewhere else, you might want to hold onto it and do some rework....

5. Ending your missive with some blithe comment with a tone similar to, "And isn't that wonderful?", might get you lynched. Unresolved stuff in stories leaves people dissatisfied.....gets you talked about, and not in a good way. Then after about three more minutes, you are forgotten, along with everyone else that thought they didn't have to Finish The Damn Story.

You seem to write pretty well, but that gift is a waste, without a real story to tell.

I hope you will try again and not take my frank and admittedly, often blunt comment as an affront, but rather as a rejoinder that seeks to leave no doubt about the mistake that this item was.

screwherscrewherabout 8 years ago
My wife

My wife and I want to renew our wedding vows. That night I want to watch another man fuck her.

impo_61impo_61about 8 years ago
Sorry, this had some potential, but...

Sorry, this had some potential, even with the surprise to be in their wedding day...but after that the story was ruined: 1st - Refer to the man that fucked her as BBC, I think is racist all the way...2nd - If it was their wedding day, when did they got married? 3rd - And he took her to be fucked while all the guests waited? I don't think so...4th - Why the hurry for her to fuck another man? Couldn't it wait for the next day, or next week? Or even late that night? 5th - Ruining their wedding day, a day that should be unique to a couple, was a wise move? They had all their lives ahead of them, why to ruin this special day? 1*

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