Flower of Desire

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She went on for a while longer, planning to continue for as long as it took to bring Miyoshi the same joy she had imparted to her. But after only a few minutes, Alice abruptly found herself filled with an overwhelming desire to taste Miyoshi, a sudden longing that couldn't be denied. Withdrawing her hand, Alice slid off the couch and, dropping to her knees, lowered her head between the dark haired woman's legs.

Miyoshi had been enjoying Alice's attention and was slightly disappointed when it stopped, but only for a moment as she quickly understood what she was doing. She had dreamed of Alice performing cunnilingus on her at least once a week, and her heart jumped a beat as she realized that was about to become reality.

The scent of Miyoshi's womanhood was like an aphrodisiac as Alice reached out and cleared a path with her hands, allowing her to probe deep within the pink valley beyond with her tongue. Like so many other things today, it seemed such a natural thing to do, and she approached it with far more ease than on the first occasion of being in a similar situation with a man. She closed her eyes as she drew back her tongue, now covered with the ambrosia of Miyoshi's excitement, a honeyed treat which proved all that Alice had hoped it might be.

Emboldened, Alice sought out Miyoshi's clitoris, massaging it with the tip of her tongue before guiding it into her mouth, there to be further caressed with all the passion she could draw upon. Her fingers were again inside the smaller woman, finding their way to all the right places, some of which, Alice was pleased to discover, were indeed universal. Any small hesitation that might have existed when she started had been brushed aside and it didn't take long for her to develop a rhythm, one that soon began to drive Miyoshi wild as her body gyrated back and forth.

As Alice would later learn, it was common for Miyoshi to revert to her native tongue when aroused and now proved no exception. Alice didn't understand the words but their meaning was unmistakable. Especially when, placing her hands behind Alice's head and interlocking her fingers, Miyoshi made her desire clear as she pulled her even tighter against her mound, giving Alice little room to maneuver but at the same time increasing the results of her efforts.

Of all the things she had learned, or would eventually learn, about the woman she now focused her full intentions on, none would be more surprising to Alice than the fact that, prior to today, Miyoshi hadn't been intimate with anyone since before leaving Japan. The idea of being celibate that long was unthinkable to Alice, but at the same time she could understand how such an abstinence could leave a woman with a hair trigger - one that Alice was so very close to tripping.

In fact, it was only a few minutes later that Miyoshi's body stiffened for a moment, then exploded in orgasmic fury. An eruption so powerful that it also brought on a smaller but still enjoyable climax in Alice as well. For many years, Alice had heard of spontaneous orgasms, but always thought them no more than urban legends. Never had she been so delighted to be proven wrong.

Later, when she had the chance to think about it, Alice would recognize that it had been her sense of accomplishment in having brought Miyoshi to orgasm that had caused myth to become reality. For now at least, she was content to just rest her head in Miyoshi's lap and enjoy the moment. She knew her life had indisputably changed, in ways that would've been unimaginable only months before. A change that would not be without cost, but one well worth it.

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sellersricksellersrick22 days ago

Fantastic story Ann I really enjoyed it. Now too many of your other writings.

BiologoBiologo6 months ago

I can’t decide if the quote that follows represents a subtle joke—a throwaway really—or a logical hole. You seem too smart for the latter, yet your characters give no hint that they’re in on the joke. With Myoshi’s routine immersion in the time difference she would have no difficulty hearing the absurdity in Alice’s question about the ball game. Yet we haven’t encountered this sort of silly buggers sense of humor in Alice before, so one is left wondering.

Your pal,

Phileas Fogg

‘“It's already tomorrow there, isn't it?"

"Yes, there is a seventeen-hour difference," Miyoshi confirmed.

"Well, do you think your mother could tell me how the Padres are going to make out against the Expos tonight?" Alice smiled.

Miyoshi also smiled, her mood restored.‘

DessertmanDessertmanover 1 year ago

This the first story of yours I have read, but it certainly won't be the last!

You have great writing skills. I love women and love the gentle eroticism of lesbian stories. It is how I prefer to make love, not just have pounding sex! I don't care for most descriptions of MW sex.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

A marvelous warm cute heartfully love romance ...... Just 4 pages but felt like a little book ..... Need to use your sentence! . "That was ... extraordinary. You are extraordinary."

💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🍀💋

shayneoneshayneoneover 2 years ago

as the title says you delivered a good story you do a lot with a short attention span i look forward to reading more stories be well happy and safe a fan shayne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the story! Well written, erotic, arousing!

alexwatson62alexwatson62almost 3 years ago

Yet another great offering with the now expected elements balanced to perfection.

This one particularly piqued my interest though with the mention of the BEST book ever written and the WORST film adaptation ever.

I assume you have read Raise The Titanic, and hopefully some of Cusslers other tales, especially Vixen 03 which is another fantastic book. In fact all of his books are good, especially the earlier NUMA ones, but I digress ....

.... you are one of the half dozen authors who`s works I eagerly watch out for, and read as soon as they appear.

I have never been disappointed and I understand your reasoning in leaving "the future" up to the hopes and imagination of the individual reader, although I will freely admit that one or two stories I do wish there had been a continuation for purely selfish reasons.

Long may you continue to write and thank you for all of your efforts.

Ann DouglasAnn Douglasover 3 years agoAuthor

As I try and do with each new story, I would again like to thank all those who took the time to write a few words about it, be in here on Literotica or via email. Your comments are greatly appreciated and make the effort worthwhile.

As anyone who had read the comments can see, the predominant request in them seems to be for a continuation of the story. I'm afraid that I have to say that's not going to happen. Like just about everything else that I've written, Flower of Desire was meant to be a stand-alone story and what might happen after 'The End' is up to the reader's imagination.

The reason for my reluctance to continue the adventures of Alice and Miyoshi are several. First, I actually have a really short attention span and there comes a point where I lose interest in a story in favor of a new idea. I've lost track of how many tales over the years have been put aside for that reason. Some unfinished stories get incorporated into newer ones, whole others are abandoned, perhaps to be readdressed at a later date, or simply deleted. Flower of Desire actually fell into the first two categories as it was a quite different story when I first started thinking about it many years ago, both in the nature of the characters and the perspective of the story.

The second reason I don't like to do sequels, at least not direct ones, is that I suck at it. It's as simple as that. I cant explain why I'm so bad at it, but will fall back on that short attention span.

I give a great deal of credit to authors who can write multi-part stories or countless adventures of one set of characters. Unfortunately, I'm not one of them.

Again, thank you all for reading and especially for taking the time to comment.

BillyslateBillyslateover 3 years ago

Magnificently Written!

Have read virtually 100% of your posted stories, and "Flower of Desire" is certainly among the best for me. I really enjoyed the exquisite relationship development, following Alice & Miyoshi's 2nd lunch together. My only complaint is the story was too brief, as I would have immensely enjoyed reading another 3 or 4 pages.

Rated 5*-Stars & Please Please Write Another Chapter🎉!!

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Fabulous Again

Oh what a tease. Such a build up released in the latter half and then that tease - "She knew her life had indisputably changed, in ways that would've been unimaginable only months before. A change that would not be without cost, but one well worth it."

It's definitely worth a sequel - but will there be one???

Another great, sympathetic enjoyable story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fantastic!

Great story, well written, am going to look for more by Ann.

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