All Comments on 'Forever Your Girl'

The stupid bitch could have said, "he can slap my ass if he wants he is my father" but had to pull the whole I don't need your help shit.

Drycreeks,

Go fuck a cactus

I agree, this was caused because she pulled a high and mighty act when she could have simply said, "He's my dad". Then he had his loooooooonnnnnnnnggggggg turn to being an enormous stupid head. "What we have here is a failure to communicate." I really enjoyed the story though. Miss your writings for sure.

10 years is a bit of overkill, but it was a good story.

Pure bs

Sweet, romantic Femdom agitprop bs. Dream on…

Not even realistic, wrong catagory......... maybe Fantasy?? certainly not romantic as this would never happen. Not even entertaining as a romance. A romance might have survived one minute longer as she would have stated it was her grandfather or father whichever he was in the first sentence, not several sentences too late.

Stupidity is universal.

I’m… im actually impressed, that was genuinely terrible, so much wasted time with dumb fucking characters, the only thing I agree on is the fact yes it would be creepy if grandpa was slapping the younger females of his family on the ass

Might be your worst story.

Waiting 10 years for someone who wouldn't listen to you trying to explain what had happened? Being prepared to do that? Almost as stupid as ignoring someone talking and not seeing your mum for years because she said someone's name. There really is no cure for stupidity lol. BardnotBard

Instead of asking him to talk, you can just blurt out he is your father. Instead the character just says she can do whatever she wants, in a fit of independence.

Your MC is plain stupid, Same than this story. They are all right about him he is a moron and overreacted

10 years?? That's ridiculous.

Lisa didn't deserve him, who ignores a girl or refuses to hear an explanation? He should have died miserable and lonely seeing the girl of his dream with another man.

One of your rare stories I like and yet dislike.