Game Time Pt. 02

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She really began to cry now, and I cried along with her at the idea of having had and lost our son--our own second child--during this nightmare; a son whom I now would very probably never get to see and know and love; a younger brother whom Steven would probably never get to enjoy. Lana told me that she had secretly named him--Nathan Andrew Brodie.

If he were still alive out there somewhere, he would be almost three now.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Why would he watch Fox if he wanted reliable news about the goings on? The author obviously leans pretty far right.

NoBullAlNoBullAl4 months ago

Not a bad story so far. Just having a problem thinking that the pregnant wife would be sufficiently recovered with therapy from her 2-3 year ordeal to be allowed to go home. It becomes even more questionable when we see the MC still dumbly stumbling around after 1-2 years of therapy after his wife disappeared!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love your story. Reading it, I felt like I was dealing with a published author. It is more than a Literotica story. Well done!

AllNigherAllNigher9 months ago

Anonymous 1 year ago.... Institute and had two kids? She was systematically raped for years she wasn't unfaithful. You are a blight on humanity.

Not enjoying this story. Not sure where it's going and to much detail that is not important. Ready chair could have been half a page to a page instead of 3 to 5.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

How come Lana talks like the narrator? Oh, god, how abysmal is the monotony of this author’s narration. I skimmed most of this just to see if a plot has been hidden somewhere and if true-to-life humans are allowed to express themselves in such a witheringly droning story. The author should have used an editor that could perk up this story. Does Maddux really have to adopt the new children even though he is the husband of record? We are sternly reminded elsewhere on Literotica that husbands are legally responsible for the children of their wives. I guess I’ll slog through the mire of the next story to see if Lana has anything for Maddux. I’m not pulling for a BTB ending, unless she is telling lies. But I do think the FBI needs to give Lana and the children a generous lifetime settlement. And I guess they are going to be attacked by someone through the swamp, hence the camera there.

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