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Click hereShe really began to cry now, and I cried along with her at the idea of having had and lost our son--our own second child--during this nightmare; a son whom I now would very probably never get to see and know and love; a younger brother whom Steven would probably never get to enjoy. Lana told me that she had secretly named him--Nathan Andrew Brodie.
If he were still alive out there somewhere, he would be almost three now.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoWhy would he watch Fox if he wanted reliable news about the goings on? The author obviously leans pretty far right.
NoBullAl5 months agoNot a bad story so far. Just having a problem thinking that the pregnant wife would be sufficiently recovered with therapy from her 2-3 year ordeal to be allowed to go home. It becomes even more questionable when we see the MC still dumbly stumbling around after 1-2 years of therapy after his wife disappeared!!
Anonymous5 months agoLove your story. Reading it, I felt like I was dealing with a published author. It is more than a Literotica story. Well done!
AllNigher10 months agoAnonymous 1 year ago.... Institute and had two kids? She was systematically raped for years she wasn't unfaithful. You are a blight on humanity.
Not enjoying this story. Not sure where it's going and to much detail that is not important. Ready chair could have been half a page to a page instead of 3 to 5.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoHow come Lana talks like the narrator? Oh, god, how abysmal is the monotony of this author’s narration. I skimmed most of this just to see if a plot has been hidden somewhere and if true-to-life humans are allowed to express themselves in such a witheringly droning story. The author should have used an editor that could perk up this story. Does Maddux really have to adopt the new children even though he is the husband of record? We are sternly reminded elsewhere on Literotica that husbands are legally responsible for the children of their wives. I guess I’ll slog through the mire of the next story to see if Lana has anything for Maddux. I’m not pulling for a BTB ending, unless she is telling lies. But I do think the FBI needs to give Lana and the children a generous lifetime settlement. And I guess they are going to be attacked by someone through the swamp, hence the camera there.
HighBrowabout 1 year agoI would “forgive” her but her trauma would traumatize me as well. I don’t know how I might react to the bewildering, contradictory feelings.
AngelRiderover 1 year ago"This author has a writing style based around the premise that he should not use ten words when ten thousand will do"
There are a lot of clowns on here do this. I can't stand them.
