All Comments on 'Gamer Goddess Ch. 01'

Okay. I am not in to boy/girl stories. Mostly find them a complete turn off, I only gave it a go as it was based around gaming, and I intended chewing you out about gamer girls mainly being boys faking (which is possibly true, but this one isn't).

That said this was beautiful.

Funny, sad, inspiring, well written.

It reminded me of someone I have never met and that brought tears to my eyes. Not something I do often.

I applaud you.

Never been a great one for gaming so despite the initial glossary I was lost at times. Even so I can see what I hope is a great love story coming out of this, especially towards the end.

Absolutely love this story. Wish I could score it higher than 5.

Not a gamer but your glossary made it understandable, really enjoying the story so far

Wonderful story!

A beautiful building romance.

Great story! Such compelling characters. I hope they make it through the obstacles ahead.

I'm no gamer, but as a nerd / geek I understand what's happening. And I LOVE the tease. Very well written. Thankyou.

I understand why this is top rated. I loved every minute. Thanks! I am looking forward to the next part

Wow.

I should have gone to bed an hour ago... I cannot stop reading!!

What a great story. Hooked from the opening. BardnotBard

Glad I found this story again. Such a great read. Loved how you subtly built the characters. Sheri was amazing. Great plot twist near the end with their histories. Instant favorite.

Nice job. I thought your character development progressed smoothly.

I hate that I have to do this anonymously, but for reasons I can't go into, that's how has to be.

I've been reading your wonderful stories chronologically and I know from your generous writing tips how feedback matters to you, as it should. So I'd like to say how truly impressed I am by the work you put into your Literotica content. Perfectly paced character development, superbly crafted narrative arcs and a real sense of hinterland and back story to every tale.

And here's the real testament to your skill; the fact that you give each story room to breathe, enough space to allow your readers' imagination do some of the heavy lifting and in so doing allow them to truly engage with every aspect - whatever the genre - of your tales.

I hope these comments are received as intended; a small hat tip to an admired artist.

Thank you.

Insanely good story