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"We're ready to go."
"So this is farewell," Dreek said as she stepped up beside him.
The Private stood up and dusted off his hands as he looked to her. "It is."
"Shame I couldn't have you in my bed one more time," she said in Drow, before pausing a moment to give Galen a chance to think her words over.
He quirked his mouth and furrowed his brow, "I'm sorry, I didn't understand that."
Still holding that mischievous smirk, the Commandant leaned in and said in a low voice. "Next time you find yourself in Faerssune, expect me to be waiting. And Celia or not, expect lots of sex."
A chuckle escaped Felyn as she both heard Dreek's words and witnessed the shocked look on the human's face.
"Safe travels, Lince'sa," the Drow leader said, bowing her head. "May the Darkness conceal your blade."
Nodding his head and trying to stop his face from turning to a tomato color, Galen snapped to attention and gave her a quick, sharp salute before turning and climbing up into the driver's seat of the wagon. With one last wave, he snapped the reins to the horses and got them moving into the tunnel leading out of the city.
"Where to next, Private?" Flak asked from inside the canvas enclosure of the wagon. "It's your ballgame now, I'm just a pitcher."
"Petra?"
Papers rustled in the back, the Neko humming as she sorted through the pages of Pretayus' journal. "Closest Tree Elf is south-east of Atzla. A baron of a mining town who I figure bought several times from Pretayus. After that, we'll be heading... south... A northern city in the mountains."
"Trip through the woods, a baron, and then some traveling, huh?" Flak commented. "Well, shit, here I thought we'd land ourselves in another shit-show."
"Knock on wood, Sergeant," Galen started with a smile. "I'm 101st Airborne. We're born for trouble and when we plan our trips to Hell, we're sure to be going feet first."
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Author's note:
And so concludes the first arc of my story. Thank you for joining me in this tale of mine, I hope you enjoyed immersing yourself in this world as much I enjoyed sharing it with you. It has been a pleasure.
Dark Pulse.
- COMMENTS
GeorgiaRedeye10 months agoDARKPULSE, if you are still around, I want you to know that this story is, in NO way, trash. Whoever told you that must have been having a bad day. Yes, it would be nice if the story continued and we could share in Galen's adventure as he saves the 4 elves. However, you did end the story at a good point. So many writers on here stop in mid-story and never come back to finish it. So, thank you for providing us with this excellent tale, and for finishing it. Bravo. Now, I'll move on to your other stories, which, hopefully, will be just as good. Thanks again.
Mmtggrover 1 year agoI have to be honest with you DarkPulse. I cursed you a few times every time I realized that my alarm was going to go off in a couple of hours for work and I was still completely immersed in your story. To continue being honest, I'll be cursing you more cuz I plan on binge reading the rest of your stuff in short order.
Awesome, awesome entertainment !!
Sincerely, Mmtggr
bereznikabout 2 years agoI really enjoyed this story, lots of unique characters with good dialogue and an excellent plot. I hope that the author will return to continue this story to complete his journey. 5*
wheels0132over 2 years agoI thoroughly enjoyed this story and would love to read more, but according to DP's author profile page, it seems he's moving on from these characters. It's a shame, but I respect his wishes and am glad that he seems to be continuing on with other stories from this fun world he's created. Hopefully there'll be some cross-overs so we could see what's perhaps transpired with regards to Galen and his crew and their adventures. What's funny is that DP did not seem to be impressed with this, his first attempt at writing, evidently doing so at the age of 18. Reading it, I surmised that this story was from a matured writer. Here I am at my age, this was his writing at 18? Well shit! Then I write like a toddler hahaha! Yes, there might have been a few errors or ex-machina moments (but these are to be expected when gods/goddess are concerned) but I thought that the writing as a whole was terrific! As an army veteran, I did spot a few minor inaccuracies, but the author definitely did his homework and obviously spent a lot of time trying to get things right with his research. I commend him for that. I initially came onto Literotica to find a little smut, but then I ran into some really great erotic Sci-Fi/Fantasy stories like Snekguy and xtorch has here, and now I don't want anything else. I find myself many times more into the story than the smut... sometimes...sometimes! Since I got all caught up with Snekguy, and impatiently waiting for his next installment, I've found this. Thanks DP for a fun world, I look forward to reading more!
MediocreGingerover 2 years agoFollowing you so Hopefully if and when you do the next arc I can read it. I loved this story and it has so much potential in your capable hands.
Geromino91about 3 years agonot the only one on hiatus. some authors ive seen gone 10 years between chapters. myself included, since device lost power n lost big chunk of a series working on ~ lost writing motovation. ill get back 2 writing 2 some day. just dont know when. good luck fellow author, lookin forward 2 what comes next.
