Good Girls Go to Heaven

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"Oh, God, angel... I'm going to come... Stop..."

She wouldn't stop. She leaned back, clutching Jacob's knees and forcing herself down on him, riding out the last of her earth-shattering climax. He rose up, pushed her all the way onto her back, and pulled out of her in time to spill all over her belly. . His eyes squeezed shut and his breath stopped as his semen shot from the purple and swollen head of his cock.

Even in her delirium, Christie was amazed at what she had just done. If she had ever seen a porn film, she might have been even more proud of her sexual accomplishments. As it was, she just gazed in awe at the glistening pool of Jacob's seed upon her chest, then up into his eyes.

"And to think it's not even three yet," she said in a voice somewhat hoarse from all her moans and cries. "Maybe I'll make you ask for it next time. Can I have one of your cigarettes, Jacob?"

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JehanSuchahardJehanSuchahardalmost 11 years ago
Bravo, bravo !

Dear Angelle,

I must say I endorse all the previous comments, even the little restriction, and with great enthusiasm! !

May I presume this story is at least a bit autobiographic, no? with so perfect description of all the details, and also the sensations of that Little angel ...

Eager to read the sequel ... and to meet you again,

Jehan Francisco Suchahard

sunshinebunnysunshinebunnyover 11 years ago

Wonderful work! This story is fantastic. Your characters are so well formed, and the relationship between Christie and Jacob is awesome. Love it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very hot story!

Outstanding writing. I so enjoy the seduction, the fall into wanton lust!!! Gonna read the rest now, and well, you know, maybe later, too. :)

Js_KeeperJs_Keeperover 15 years ago
Can't Wait!

I'm glad I stumbled onto your writing. I liked the way the velocity and intensity grew throughout the story. The sex scene was well-crafted and hot! I have to agree somewhat with other comments about the last paragraph - it was a bit of a left turn, and I understand what you meant to portray as her "awakening" but it was a little too sharp of a turn. Still, that didn't really detract from an otherwise strong story.

I'll be devouring the others in this series shortly.

~JK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Waste not.....

I must agree with fumble's

comment about that last paragraph.

Besides.....Good girls truly go to

heaven when they swallow....

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