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Click here"Oh, God, angel... I'm going to come... Stop..."
She wouldn't stop. She leaned back, clutching Jacob's knees and forcing herself down on him, riding out the last of her earth-shattering climax. He rose up, pushed her all the way onto her back, and pulled out of her in time to spill all over her belly. . His eyes squeezed shut and his breath stopped as his semen shot from the purple and swollen head of his cock.
Even in her delirium, Christie was amazed at what she had just done. If she had ever seen a porn film, she might have been even more proud of her sexual accomplishments. As it was, she just gazed in awe at the glistening pool of Jacob's seed upon her chest, then up into his eyes.
"And to think it's not even three yet," she said in a voice somewhat hoarse from all her moans and cries. "Maybe I'll make you ask for it next time. Can I have one of your cigarettes, Jacob?"
- COMMENTS
JehanSuchahardalmost 11 years agoDear Angelle,
I must say I endorse all the previous comments, even the little restriction, and with great enthusiasm! !
May I presume this story is at least a bit autobiographic, no? with so perfect description of all the details, and also the sensations of that Little angel ...
Eager to read the sequel ... and to meet you again,
Jehan Francisco Suchahard
sunshinebunnyalmost 12 years agoWonderful work! This story is fantastic. Your characters are so well formed, and the relationship between Christie and Jacob is awesome. Love it!!
Anonymousover 13 years agoOutstanding writing. I so enjoy the seduction, the fall into wanton lust!!! Gonna read the rest now, and well, you know, maybe later, too. :)
Js_Keeperover 15 years agoI'm glad I stumbled onto your writing. I liked the way the velocity and intensity grew throughout the story. The sex scene was well-crafted and hot! I have to agree somewhat with other comments about the last paragraph - it was a bit of a left turn, and I understand what you meant to portray as her "awakening" but it was a little too sharp of a turn. Still, that didn't really detract from an otherwise strong story.
I'll be devouring the others in this series shortly.
~JK
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI must agree with fumble's
comment about that last paragraph.
Besides.....Good girls truly go to
heaven when they swallow....
cheesy80sover 16 years agoAgain, your writing style and gift of prose raises mere erotica into literature.
Stimulating and beyond enjoyable. I anxiously await further stories from you.
Flpantherover 16 years agoYes, I loved it! Yes, I agree with the other comments, beautifully written and what a great pace. However, I didn't care for the last paragraph. You caught the ball on the goal line and streaked 99 yards, dodging, cutting and accelerating on the field of eroticism only to fumble on the one yard line. Sorry, the end seemed forced and didn't work...for me. I love your imagination and style...please keep it up!!
sharkandpenover 16 years agoGreat story. I love your style, and if Christie seems like a bit of a brat in the begining (okay--he sat down on the bench next to her, why jump to the conclusion that he was following her, jsut because the man can plainly see the cup of wine next to her?). I even got over Jacob's "The wine isn't up to my standards" remark, which, even paired with a 'self-concious smile', made me want to roll my eyes at what a blowhard he was. But I learned to love them, despite their initial fumblings :-) Again, great story--great writing. I really enjoyed it.
Alvaron53over 16 years agoExcellent prose that is well-paced. The characters are interesting, and the author's careful writing entices us to learn who they are. The sex scenes are erotic and tantalizing. The plot isn't complicated but it's well-handled. Christie overcomes her shyness and self-imposed isolation and re-embraces her sexuality. Jacob is patient and loving, leading her to express her desires and reach out to satisfy them. It's a wonderful metamorphosis that's upbeat and leaves you happy.
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Thank you for an enjoyable read.
