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- COMMENTS
inka2222over 1 year agoLoved about 95% of the story. Not happy that the author has given the cheating bitch a happy ending though. I won't be complaining about the undeserved goodness from the protagonist (forcing daughter to be civil, 5K money, wedding invite) - I can possibly maybe see it as useful to him. But the fact that the author chose to have her happily re-married with children, makes me want to retch. She in no way deserved a good man to marry her, regardless of her supposed regrets. That takes 1 star off of otherwise excellent story.
clearcreekabout 2 years agoI have been hearing George Jones in my mind, singing that song for the last three days.
AA82ndAAover 2 years agoNice read. Little lite in chaaracter development, however conversation format did fill in some of the details.
fredbrownover 2 years agoThis story is a fiver to me, a nice gentle romance with a satisfying ending. In my life, I have noticed that of the billions of souls on this earth you can be thousands of miles and years from your old haunts and quite unexpectantly come across old acquaintances - the shock can just leave you speechless!
stewartbover 2 years agoOye ... Such a story! Enjoyable from beginning to end. Thanks for writing it.
etchiboyalmost 3 years ago... yet act and speak like a mid to late teen.
Ok, two pet peeves, though someone (I think Harry VA) has already mentioned it, the husbands are all TOTALLY CLUELESS BOOBs. Never suspect anything.
4-stars
hebert100over 3 years agoLovely story. wonder why people nitpick on a story that is so enjoyable to read. thank you again.
BigDee44over 4 years agoLoved your story. As I read things I find that I catch many grammatical gaffs. Across all authors, why is it so hard to put two 's' in "dessert" and so easy to put two 'n's in dining??? And when did a nod (a gesture of a positive response) become a shake (a gesture of a negative response)?
End of pet peeves.
Carry on!
jtwheelsabout 5 years agoNot criticizing but critiquing
As you said might be you etc
Sentence structure off in a few places if I didn't know what you meant to say I would have been lost
I thought of writing them in here but why story is done and I only see it as minor problem as I am not an English teacher etc
