by Slirpuff
It sometimes takes time to see the light and then put it out. What a bitch! I have started to wonder if there is a limit and it becomes impossible to write a wife who is a bigger bitch than that limit. So far, I've not see it.
Steve is obviously brain dead or he would never have married her in the first place.
Steve is worthy of great empathy. You didn't cheat and give.him a mystical moment. Instead, just be another guy in a bar. People cry about women all the time, what THEY need, what THEY want! We condition our smart boys, ones to follow the rules, to be servants and slaves to their wives and jobs. Unfortunately I know many guys who could have been a model for Steve.
Once you get past that first page it is a chuckle :)
One thing still bugs me: what is a “large five figured amount” exactly?
Thank goodness he had a friend like Gary. Took while, but he finally took out all the trash.
Took him too long to grow a pair
Should have done more to wife and mother
Move on don't let experience with her hold you back as it was a lot your fault
baloney. cartoonishly evil women. cartoonishly wimpy man. Manly manfriend in bar saves day over beer. WIMPMAN LAYS DOWN THE LAW! and all bow before him. Women shed their clothes like the Fall leaves. Can you say "Incel fantasy?"
was to stash money. Because why you'd fuck a skank after she just came from fucking another makes him nothing but a long term cuckold. Which falls in line with other slirpuff stories
Realize this whole story was based entirely on cliches and was all one big joke? Signed: BTW
It is hard to understand why he took his time about it. She got half of what could be seen, so it sounds like a no-fault. She confessed, so why wait so long? Still, it was a good story and I thank you.
A pretty basic cheating wife gets burned, well done by Slirpuff. Shoulda tased his Ma too.
Ok story, but it would have cool to get final reaction from his ex and his mom.
Excellent
The cunts were caught. The wife and her mother-in-law. Cunts of a feather stick together. Ha Ha
Five Stars
Good story. But he did put up with a lot of crap before he finally grew a pair. I I do agree with 26thNC, he should have tazed that God-awful mother of his too. Twice, at least.
This was so outlandish that it's funny. However, the divorce portion was rather anti-climatic given how their household rhetoric was.
The whore of a mother needed to feel some pain. Nothing like an old whore to show a young whore the way
I enjoyed the story a great deal. However I felt that at the end there could have had a twist and it could have turned out that Gary was his father.
Great story line, very enjoyable. I wonder are there really women like that out there ? Are there really men out there that would put up with that shit from the beginning ?
Good story, but too long a wimp to be great. Would have been great to hear mire pain and suffering of his ex and his mom in the divorce aftermath!
pitiful
Five figures is enough to set him up for life - max $99,000?
some impressive lifestyle.... hahahahaha!
Enjoyed the story, put a smile on my face. Glad Sandy got what was due. Thanks for your writing.
Odd story. Like a cuckold's rite of passage or hero's journey. More of a fable than a realistic story.
I have to admit that you write the wimpiest of wimp MCs... I just wonder how you are able to identify them so well.
It works as a sort of high fantasy revenge story. Probably not even close to a real world scenario, especially the divorce and everyone gets what's coming to them. But it's a bit of cheeky fun to read.
Sore, I could only give it 4 stars. MC took WAY too much shit from the whore before doing anything about it. DMW aka Sumnut
Sandy was right, of course. Oh, sh!t! I don’t know what made me say that. Guess all tje Femdom agitprop is wearing me down,
Great story. It would have been better if he told his mother to go fuck herself. I still gave 5 stars.
Nice. 5/5. Unless you have lived in a female dominate environment you have little idea how long tit takes to grow a pair.