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Click hereReally, there were only a couple of decisions: I could press charges, or not, and I could get stuck with child support, or not. The fact that Shannon had committed adultery - can there really be adultery in a 'marriage' between two women? - they'd have to work out between themselves.
It was Shannon who came up with the deal: I wouldn't press charges, and she wouldn't name me as the father, so I wouldn't have to pay child support. I was giving up all rights to my son or daughter, and I'd never try to see the women or the eventual child again. The case would be in the files, so that if I turned up missing or dead, they'd be the first suspects, so I had that as the best protection I could get. I knew where they lived, and they knew where I was staying, so that was some kind of insurance, I guess.
But, in the end, they didn't know where I lived. The house I rented on Fourth Street was a decent one for me - half of a duplex, so not that large - but I wasn't in any way committed to it. I was on a month to month lease anyway, so it was easy enough to break, and that's just what I did. I moved to a place over in Slatington, not too far away, but still someplace they didn't know. I installed a security system, and bought a Model 1911A Colt .45 automatic. If Cynthia got a wild hair up her ass, I was going to be prepared.
Did it bother me that I was going to have a kid out there that I'd never know? Every once in a while I'd think about it, but really, not very often. I occasionally thought about driving past their place in Jim Thorpe, to wonder if they might be sitting on the narrow front porch with the kid, but the odds of actually catching that were small, and really, it was something I didn't need to do.
To my son or daughter, I hope that you've got two better parents than I could ever be.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoO. K. I liked this even though I did not like the end. At least this tale had an end. 4 stars.
Bill S.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoOk. Hopefully my comments, won’t inspire Reed to leave another tirade defending his story. I thought the premise was good. However, let’s look at this, if Shannon was married to a man. She picks a guy up, fucks him, and gets pregnant. She isn’t wearing a ring, so there is no way the guy knew she was married. Husband does some searching, and finds out the one night stand is single as well. I can see hubby doing all sorts of things, but why would he kidnap abuse, and threaten to kill the guy, who was blameless in all of this? I really liked the premise, but I can’t see it playing out like this. At the end of the day, they got a kid out of the deal, and stayed together. Which would have been the same outcome, without all the drama. The other issue is the assumption, that the local police will ignore the kidnapping,, false imprisonment and possible drugging that took place.
Reed- I am going to give you some free advice. Sometimes people will not like your story, because they do not like the way it ends. You will never make these people happy, unless you only write stories with those sort of endings. And... sometimes people will comment that the story does not seem believable, or plausible. A lot of times, this is because you have not effectively filled in the details, that could make it believable. For instance, maybe the sheriff or police chief, is related to Shannon, and wants to try to minimize the fallout. Don’t look at these type of comments as tearing you down, or inspiring yourself to have to explain your story in the comments. Look at your finished version before you publish, or let friends check it out. Is it believable?
In any case, that is my two cents. Thank you for listening.
linnearalmost 3 years agoGood plot but was kind of boring, I thought it could have been much better.
