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Click here"What are you doing?" Mom asked.
"Balancing the load like you said."
"Aw, Honey! Don't you know sex on the washer is better with load out of balance?"
- COMMENTS
Gymmyealmost 5 years agoThe smoking didn't add to the story at all. Kept looking for it to have a part of the story. Did not happen. Author must have a smoking fetish.
falcon29almost 6 years agoNot a bad story, but the ending was weak. I'm a smoker,so I didn't mind them smoking. But the habit doesn't need to be emphasized so much.
KarissaTseviabout 6 years agoPlease write some more. Especially along those lines. I liked it a lot.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoAw, this was trash. Aw, he's retarded. Aw, why do I say that? Aw, he put his dirty underwear in the dryer! Aw, she's retarded too. Aw, so is the author. Aw, the only solution is to eat more chicken fat. Aw, send me some lock washers please.
largebrownguyalmost 7 years agowith some better grammar, spelling, and a longer buildup.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoAm I the only one who wondered how a house full of chain smokers could ever be clean?
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI enjoyed the read. There were a few little errors in grammar and spelling, a proofreader would have caught. Drop the 'aw' every time she opens her mouth.
Chris7swalmost 7 years agoGrammar, a few spelling errors, repeated phrases, over-emphasis on the smoking (which, since my own wife is a heavy smoker I have no overall objection to) and more made this into a fairly average read. The story is fine in principle - but to be honest, us readers nowadays want more - a real adventure - a proper tale and this left me sadly unaroused. Nice try, but...
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoSo he magically got dressed between waking up nude and going downstairs.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoYes, by all means, listen to the "person" who can't stand it when others dare have a different opinion.
ROCKY70almost 7 years agoPLEASE !!!!!! keep going, most of us can figure it out. Iam not saying you don't need help, but some people will take it to heart, and stop writting. Look at me I can't spell for shit, but I keep going,, remember mom and son sex is the best. ..GOOD LUCK
Anonymousalmost 7 years ago"Aw, Honey, come here," is four words, dip shit. How'd you fuck that up?
