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Click here"Oh god," Evelyn said as they reached their climax. They leaned back and fell against me. Their trashing had put me over the top and they caused me to cum inside of them. I had planned to pull out but in the heat of the moment I just couldn't stop. I caught hold of them and laid them down on the ground and held them. We started to pass into a slumber. "I'm tired, I haven't felt that way in forever," Evelyn said before nodding off. I woke up just before dawn and they were sucking me off again. Once I was hard they climbed on top of me and started to rid me. We came together just as the sun rose over the trees. Evelyn started to glow and feel warmer while the sun started to rise.
"I always wanted to be loved by someone and I finally have been. I am happy and glad you came along, thank you," Evelyn said. Tears fell down her cheeks. "After making love with you I feel so happy. I can feel something calling to me. And it is giving me a feeling like what you give me." I don't have to answer the call I can stay.
"No, you have to go. Good bye Evelyn," I said.
"I love you," Evelyn said.
" I love you too," I said. She kissed me. The sun crested over the hill and Evelyn started to break away from Alice's body up into motes of light. I tried my best to hold on to her but know that I can't.
As the sun finished rising I heard her voice one last time, it sounded like it is far away and echoed slightly. "Thank you," and even fainter "I will always love you." Alice and I watched the sun rise together in silence.
- COMMENTS
Ilovetophoto688 months agoHoly crap. A fantastic story. Not what I expected but it was great. Thank you for your work
Anonymousabout 1 year agoThat was a decidedly weird yet engrossing story and very, very enjoyable. You tell a great story and except for some misspelled or left out words, was terrific. Even without the sex at the end, it would have been a great story. Extremely well done!!
Anonymousover 1 year agoNot much sexual action, but that wasn’t really the main focus, so it’s okay. I quite enjoyed the story, I’m glad I read it.
storyteller19almost 2 years agoAuthorResponse to Anon from 5 months ago:
I missed your comment when you first asked, but here is your answer.
There were only a few times when someone tried to bully me. I was a little chubby growing up but could usually make any would-be bullies laugh or talk shit back to them so I wasn't much of a target. The only exception would be my freshman year of high school, one of the last two times I went Trick or Treating. A friend and I went to our school Halloween event, which was a little carnival on the football field. After it we were waiting in front of an LDS church for a local neighborhood bus to take us closer to his house, a jeep of seniors drove by us while my friend and I were fucking around. They went to pick up a girl who was talking to us, and I said something they didn't like, and they ended up snatching our bags of candy from us and threatened to kick our asses. I couldn't joke my way out of that situation since that was what got me into it. There was an awkward moment where I held the girl's gaze who they were there to pick up. There was sadness in her eyes like she regretted what was happening, but she didn't say anything. She got in the jeep and drove off with them. My friend and I went back to his house and played some Halo 3, but the night was ruined.
Anonymousover 2 years agoThis is my first comment. You made me remember being bullied at a city school and the adjacent park on my way home. The fear and humiliation were palpable in your rendering of this story. I was really curious as to your insight to the situation and have to ask if it was the fruit of an exceptional imagination or if from your own brush with bullies. I hope it worked out favorably
Anonymousover 2 years agoWith a story as imaginative and well conceived as this one, who cares about a few spelling errors? I would love to see a sequel. 5 stars.
