All Comments on 'Hate at First Sight'

A coming of maturity thriller full of diversity, unlike a John Grisham story. Charming habit of novel first names for your protagonists. The characters are as unique and unforgettable as their nick-names that soundbite sur names. Community/familial relationship charts are also more than a coincidence.

Fun to read you Randi!

What a beautiful romantic, sexy thriller. I love your writing style and over 5000 followers do as well. Count me in as a follower too!

Well done. 5*

It's going to take some time for QuickMagazine to catch up with Randi's non-LW's. This is #2 of something like 25, and it's another 5-star knockout! Even more so than "Catch Of A Lifetime," and that was mighty damn fine. The writing here is pretty heavily Randi, so I guess GA probably contributed plot development, maybe some of the police stuff. Don't know what to make of Randi Black. Let's just stick to BlackRandI1958. Finest kind.

Top stuff, I'm late for work, couldn't put it down.

One of the best stories I've read on Literotica. Captivating storyline, well thought out and written with plenty of drama and angst, great characters and interaction with just enough sexual situations to earn the title of erotica. This is the first story I've read by Blackrandl1958 but rest assured not the last. I appreciate your, your co-author's, your team's and your Muses' imaginations and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you all for sharing your vision and talents.

ReRead. Really enjoyed it, again. I think this could very easily be converted to a screenplay nuff said

I love good writing. There are good stories on this site and then there are exceptional stories. This is a prime example. I see why all the writers here sing your praises. You are gifted. If I could give it a higher score I would. Thanks fir writing.

Randi, I love your stories and writing style. Hope to see many more from you!

Perfect story with a perfect ending. It’s a shame not all your stories have an ending, you just leave us wanting..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved this story its even better the second time I've read it Thank you

I love this collab, moar please!

Story was so good, I read it three times. Getting more out of it each time.

Excellent duo writing.

Again thanks! Way good! Wow, great story! I would give very positive feedback, but, somehow I lost my password, dang. I really appreciate your stories and this one rates right there with Vagabonds! DerMtMan

As good as it gets.

LMJ

Another great story and Happy ending! Thank you.

SWEET! Five stars (of course).

Perfection he fought and toiled and won the race, she fought for what was right from day one and was rewarded with someone who loved her

Awesome 5⭐️ story ,, well done

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A Beautiful Story, Beautifully Written!

I like your naming of Livingston and Anderson for the girls.

11/10!!!!!

Great tale you two, it's been a while since my first read - thank you 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Second read Five big ones

4th read, again 10 stars...😏

Fire and ice. The hotter the sparks, the hotter the passion? Jopie wuskis, wustina Jopie!

5*s. Good plot and character development. Looking forward to reading down the list of your offerings.