- Erotic Couplings
- Heat
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Click hereLying there, out of breath, sweating, I watch as Hari raises himself up on one elbow to look at me. He smiles, then laughs. 'You really are something, Hannah. I can't believe you're here.'
'Me neither.'
'Hungry?'
I realise I am. Nod.
'Me too. I was so nervous I couldn't eat much tonight. I'm starving. Let's see what I've got in the kitchen.'
'Nervous? Were you?'
He nods. 'This wasn't going to happen in my wildest dreams.' He indicates the both of us, naked, tangled and sweaty, lying there on the daybed.
'Not a plan, then?'
'A plan? Are you kidding? No. I was just going to ask you out to dinner or something. But that was nerve wracking enough.' He traces a finger along the side of my face and down my neck. 'I'm so out of practice. But something happened at that sink, when you reached up your hand to my face, something took over and -'
'If this is you out of practice, I don't know what I'm going to do,' I say shakily, suddenly realising quite what's happened between us. I think he sees the alarm in my face.
'Hey this was much faster than I thought. We can slow it down, take it slow -- whatever you need. I can't imagine what it's been like for you since Declan died -'
'Shh,' I press my hand against his mouth. 'Me and Declan had a long time to talk about what would happen once he was dead. He was so clear headed about it. Generous, to the last. And he would be happy to see me like this. With someone else. With you. He liked you.' I kiss him. 'And now we've found each other again, let's enjoy what we have.'
He strokes my cheek, my top lip, smiles.
'Ok. That's a deal. Now then, let's see what food there is in this shack of a house.' And with that, he's up off the daybed, pulling on his shorts and striding into the kitchen. I smile at his shyness, hug myself, suddenly bereft without his body wrapped around mine. I get up, pull the sundress over my head, and follow him into the kitchen.
- COMMENTS
NotHemingwayover 2 years agoExquisitely written; all the dialogue and descriptions purposefully moved the story along. A very sweet story. Loved it.
Devilbobyover 3 years agoDear Sara unfortunately I can't improve on 5 🌟 but every time I read this story it just takes me back, somewhere else a long time ago. And you Sara, are my absolute favourite storyteller, as I 've said before.
Sara2000Zalmost 4 years agoAuthorThank you for your message, Anonymous - I'd like to reply more personally but can only do that if you include an address for me to reply to in your feedback messages (not here in the comments, obviously!). But suffice to say I really appreciated your feedback on my writing. Thank you. Sara.
Sara2000Zabout 4 years agoAuthorThank you, Anonymous, for leaving this comment (above) - it's one of the most affecting things anyone has said about what I write. Above all I want my characters to be believably like real people who experience all the frustrations and successes and complexities of communication that really real people do, and the sex is just one part of that. I also wish for a kinder world, so your choice of the word 'humane' is so wonderful. Thank you.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoand I'm not fully sure why, is "humane." You have the ability and thoughtfulness to create characters who seem fully human, with cares and complexities and real personalities and, oh yes, they are sexual beings, too (and hotly so, I might add!). Very nice.
KingCuddleabout 4 years agoMostly, it has your same LOVABILITY!
SWEETNESS, Thy name is Sara!
RangeExpanderover 4 years agoSo hot - and so well written. Thanks for sharing what is, as you said, partly a true story. I love the detail, from the crunchiness of the lettuce to the first look at the nape of the neck - to the rush of the sexual heat.
Devilbobyover 4 years agoI cannot believe I hadn't commented on this before, you know I love your stories and I have just found another word to describe them. Sincerity, says it all. I shall now go on to re-read "Tenderness "
roveroneabout 5 years agolove the characters, and expertly written.
Looking forward to pt 2.
5 and fave story...noted every story, I believe, has an H-rare...hope you're still writing, and looking forward to reading more
steverob1054over 5 years agoSara, what a wonderful first story - I have read all of the stories you have posted and am now re-reading them all and thoroughly enjoying every second. Thank you for sharing your amazing gift with us
