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Click here"Benson? Is that you? What happened?" She said, groggily. In what seemed like a drunken stupor, the corner of her mouth twitched upward, into a smirk. "Oh, I remember. I died, didn't I? Oh dear. This... this is hell, isn't it?"
"Why would you say that? You're very much alive."
"Oh, ha ha, very funny then. You got me good. But it's too early for Halloween."
"Wow, you're really out of it. I have no idea what you're talking about."
"But that girl beside you. She's got, like, horns... and stuff. Is this some sort of prank? Then I'm afraid I don't get it."
Benson looked worriedly in Caeli's direction, but there was nothing to be seen. She hadn't accidentally undone her glamour, or anything of the sort. She'd even dulled her eyes to a more natural deep hazel color.
Her hand clammy, sweating into Benson's now, Caeli raised her other hand and pointed at herself. "Who, me?"
"Of course, you. Are there any other girls in here, silly? That's funny, you'd think I'd remember a pretty little thing like you being hired. But seriously, where'd you get the costume bits? I like how your horns have those pink glowy bits at the tips. That's so cool."
"So, Elena, you're saying you can see those?"
"Why wouldn't I be able to. And that cool swishy tail, and.." Elena's gaze flicked up to where Caeli's wings would be, but rather than continue to speak, her eyes went wide and tears began to well in the corners.
And then she screamed.
This is well structured and a joy to read. Certainly breaks up my boring workday, and makes things interesting along with keeping me guessing.
I wonder what developments are in store next?
Oh how I hope there is more and your well and writing.
I absolutely love this tale.
The characters, the background, the detail to development.
Well worth the extra words.
Got me all wrapped up in this wonderful adventure
Bravo
Ah the infamous 'and now for something completely different' routine or uh-oh for short :-)
I've been flying through all the chapters and hit the end (OW!)
This IS a fantastic and wonderful story - a joy to read!
Now for the patiently waiting part to see what's next!
Thanks for all this and looking forward to what's around the corner!!!
Extremely satisfying on multiple levels. Please keep this up for as long as possible. You've created a wonderful world with deep characters.