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But that's a story for another time.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoWhat a confusing, mixed up story. That’s not counting the misuse of pronouns.
Anonymousover 6 years agoOk I didn't read the earlier story. Is it too late to go through and fix this. Your character are changing sex multiple times in the same paragraph. She when it should be he. Hers when it should be his. Rose even makes a mysterious appearance. It made no sense until I realised a lot of copy and pasting was going on.
Anonymousover 6 years agoHELL OF A WAY TO STOP!!!! Dammed good story too. Looking forward to a sequel?
