Holiday Phuq

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I staggered painfully to my feet, down a couple of glasses of cold water and returned to find her still lying exactly where I left her. I admired her thoroughly phuked body and her spunk-covered bum. I kissed her on her head and she chuckled. I lay next to her and seconds later I was fast asleep once more.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I agree with the others. I know the Queens English is different from US English but this was horrible. Phuked sounds so stupid. Please get with an American editor before submitting more crap.

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PrfsrPrfsrabout 3 years ago

Agree with the above - ph substitution is too distracting, not cute, and downright stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

i did not think that people from england would have sex. it just seems weird to me...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Learn grammar and how to spell and one day you might just manage to become a writer of erotica

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great sex scene, you can tell a story and you can write a coherent sentence, gave it a 5, but dude, the weird spellings are a serious distraction. I assume phuqed etc are supposed to give you a cute signature style, but really they're just a nuisance.

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