All Comments on 'Humiliated'

That story was great, can't wait for the next chapter.

It really needs to go in to BDSM, this submissive and humiliation is not loving wives but by passing.<P>PT

loved it hiction or not it was so hot to me

loved it hiction or not it was so hot to me

those are the same people that have no need of the shrink! Once someone has enough adverse comments and low scores perhaps one should reconsider their story and perhaps lifestyle.

I thought it was a good story. I hated what it described

but it looks to me as if you did what you set out to do and

deserve full marks. I probably won't read the next one!

Wonderful story. For those who do not understand the need should keep their comments to themselves and move onto vanilla boring stories. The story does stretch the limits of being so open in front of all co-workers. But, it worked for me. I have been teased by my wife a couple times while she let other men grope her. It is all in fun. Keep it up.

Author and lead male character both need a shrink.

Single huh. Sounds like no respect just like this sewer runoff. A person who used to be a man gets into male humiliation because there ain't nothing else left anymore.<P>

No self respect and no respect from those around him. To have such a low opinion of yourself is beyond sad. It approaches concern for the self cuckster and those around him.<P>

A shell has no human values and progresses towards no conscience which can become worse with either wanting to get caught or going deeper into the morass of inhuman crudeness.<P>

Since you have been at this for years it won't be long.<P>

A real shame as there is talent lost on the extreme few into human self degradation. Get some help little sick one.

God help the citizens in the city you patrol. God help us all if they let fucked up sad examples for a man in the police now a days.

I'm sorry, I didn't like this story. Not because it was another "wimp" story...but because it was not consistent. The wife was a 30 yr old virgin? Why? If she was as hot as the author says, then why was she a virgin? Morals? IF so, then why weren't they evident when other guys were making on her? This supposed tough guy won't tell the other guys to back off? Why not? Because he was secretly turned on? If so, then what about his previous girlfriends. This was not about humiliation, it was about disrespect and control. Her actions were not based on love of her husband but on the fact that she despised her husband...how is that a turn on. Sorry elia..it had potential but it fell waaay short of the mark. Don't be discouraged, you're writing will improve if you keep at it.

Another wimp husband story and one that reads exactly like all the other wimpy husband stories.

Who is writing the comments ? Strange that all the comments uses the same style of writing and all are 100. Personally I vote 0. Bad writing, bad plot, bad characters, in short bad author. And yes I am Anonymous simply because this site is too bad to bother registering. MAYBE once in a while a good story is published but lately the crap is getting out of hand

Not very well written,IMHO, and certainly not a pleasent story. Typos and such didn't help.

this author must be deleting comments because this story would get negative responses

The best story I've read in a while, please keep it going, love the rivalry aspect!

Great story!! Hope you have a follow up for this one. It really got me hard reading this. Wish I could get my wife to do something like this to me. I would love it!!!!

i felt the humiliation seep into my mind with each passing moment. Loved it!

I enjoyed the interaction between the loving, married couple as they discussed their desires.

I hope part 2 is cumming!