Invisible Girl - An Erotic Romance Pt. 01

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She looked at her watch and was astonished to find that it wasn't all that late. She felt like one of the characters in her favorite book, The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe, who would walk through a magical wardrobe into another world, have adventures that went on for years and then return to find that only a few minutes had passed in the 'real' world.

It must have been the magic bra and panties, she thought, giggling to herself, half-asleep. They were both dead on their feet--and he still had to walk home.

Still, he walked her up to the front door and they put their arms around each other and kissed, just as if he'd taken her to the dance. Then he looked at her, his face close to hers and said quietly, "I'm glad..."

And she replied, "Me too."

They hugged once more, then he smiled at her and walked off into the darkness.

When she got to school Monday morning, she discovered that someone had been there before her and pasted a red heart to the door of her locker. When she looked more closely at it she discovered it had been cut from a piece of cloth--and that it had a tiny stain on it.

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Excruciatingly slow . . . but beautifully written. Thank you.

5*

@ the anonymous wanker below - I'm British, the author's American. I take exception to your tone.

Dixon (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

@ author.

Very nice story. I love the Very nice balancing from noncon to doubtcon to highcon.

You chose the scenario very well. I normally moan if two people don´t know anything about bdsm and the safety rules it involves. That should be known anno 2022. But in 1965... not knowing is very much believable.

I´m really looking forward to the second part.

@ anon2. If lost me means that you leave evreybody alone with your stupid troling I would say I´m rather happy that the author "lost you"

vodiodo69vodiodo69over 1 year ago

Loved it. Sexy and romantic. And coming of age.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautifully written. Please, may we have some more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lost me at the anal stuff. All you british cuck authors can't avoid the gender-neutral asshole in your so-called straight writing. Every last one of you is a closeted beta. Stop lying.

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