All Comments on 'Jack's Snow Day'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Jack the giant killer. The love doctor. The family man.

The hero.

JodailyJodaily18 days ago

Alien orgy sex meister! What a man. Another great story. My only complaint was that it needed better proofreading. The occasional wrong word was a little distracting. Still got a solid 5 stars!!

And Bal and Gee are weenies. Wah, too cold!

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