by BurntRedstone
And thoroughly entertaining. And the cat toy! I agree. It's a roll-on-the-floor and laugh-my-ass-off sort of thing.
5* Thanks for sharing. All in one go. Going to bed now. :)
Slainté
These are great full stories. Even without the sexy bits I couldn't stop reading until the end!
First off, I loved it. Love all the interaction with Jack's children and lovers (although none of his Atlanian (hope I spelled that right) children make an appearance). An avenue that always intrigued me, are all Atlanian males lazy jerks, has an avenue to be explored with a male who has potential.
Secondly, I've noticed that every chapter after the first, Jack gains a souvenir. First the horns, then the streaks of silver in them (which I now realize is gone), then the slave collar, now ribbed horns and a harder head.
Third, is oral sex something only humans have discovered? The only species Jack had sex with that weren't baffled by the very idea was the Phem Kalos.
Fourth, the idea of a cat-like species loving what sounds like an advanced cat toy is hilarious.
I'm going to let myself digest this story and then go back and read it again. I hopefully will have some additional thoughts.
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