Jeremy's Dorm Dance

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After we kissed goodbye, I handed him the package. I'd bought a gift box and put a present and card inside. He opened it and took out my underwear and bra that I'd worn the night before, and read the card:

"Sweet Jeremy, I hope this little memento will help you remember a night that I'll always cherish as one of my best ever. Your lover, Michelle". I'd also drawn a little happy face with a cupid arrow through it on the bottom of the card.

I told him, "If I were you, I'd probably want to pin them up on my wall."

Jeremy grinned ear to ear and gave me a very nice kiss. "Thank you so much Michelle, I really do love you. I hope you don't intend this to be the end of our relationship?"

"Jeremy, I love you too. I can't thank your mom enough for getting ahold of me. I'll always treasure you whether this is the end or not. I don't know, only time will tell, but I hope you'll find a girl your own age." I added, "I'll call you after I get back from my month's long vacation, even if it's just to see how you're doing."

Jeremy stood and watched as I got back in my car and started for home. My cheeks were soaked with my tears. I had no idea when or if I'd see him again.

On the way home, I thought about what to tell Robert. I wanted to be honest with him, but knew if I told him everything it'd make both of us so horny, and with that damn contract, we wouldn't be able to do anything about it. I decided to play it by ear and see what happened.

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tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110about 4 years ago
Robert spends far too much time alone.

Whatever happened to Trish? He should be boning her when his wife isn't around. Isn't that what he did with Jacqui? Going without makes look like a pussy. *****

kiteareskitearesover 5 years ago
Would have been excellent

If it hadn't been for the pending shadow and what it meant in the wider context of things.

OnethirdOnethirdover 6 years ago
Long night

So, the last commenter apparently likes to read about dogs fornicating. What an odd fellow- this is a human-on-human site for the most part. Better google something more to your liking. This was a nice long chapter, with a very well described strip poker session. Can't believe she had the energy to finish the night. Saying it was the best night of sex ever is really saying something for Michelle- totally relegating Robert to about 4th place, soon to be fifth place after the cruise.

TwentysevenTwentysevenover 7 years ago
Must be me

To me this is about as hot as watching dogs rut.

SkanderbegSkanderbegover 7 years ago
Very hot!

I agree that the only critique is the name changing. It's a really great read, thank you for taking the time to write and post it.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 7 years ago
A VERY good story -

Only thing I saw that was a bit disconcerting was her being called "Amber" one minute and "Michelle" the next. A little bit of human editing helps to catch the errors that computers just skip over.

DWornockDWornockover 7 years ago
A good story--4 stars.

There was a little that was confusing or not explained, but not enough to affect story. I would have preferred that Amber would be much younger; mid twenties or 2 or 3 years out of college. Older than the college students but not old enough to be their mother.

BobNbobbiBobNbobbiover 7 years ago
I love . . .

. . . a good love story. Jeremy is one lucky dude to have a mature woman, a really experienced mature woman like Michelle, teach him the ropes and take him under her sexual wing so-to-speak. This is a well told coming of age story but I am wondering just what Robert was passing through his mind and emotional self as he waited at home while Michelle played at whore and sexual therapist.

wylie236wylie236over 7 years ago
Love the disrespect

You don't have to read any more than the first two sentences of this story to see how much disrespect Michelle has for her husband and her marriage - if you can call what they have a marriage. "I didn't really want to go. I wanted to spend the night with my husband, but I'd made a promise to Jeremy and I know Robert understood." What about the promise she made to her husband on their wedding day? I guess that promise doesn't really mean shit when you're whole essence is nothing more than being a life support system for a vagina.

In terms of the story being a tool for somebody to jack off to, I guess it hits the mark in that category.

MbgdallasMbgdallasover 7 years ago
Excellent story!

Robert. You outdid yourself on this one. Very very well done.

"I didn't really want to go. I wanted to spend the night with my husband, but I'd made a promise to Jeremy and I know Robert understood. I felt terrible about getting sick. My poor hubby and I were looking forward to Thursday night."

Michelle not only lies to her husband she lies to herself. This will be the downfall of the marriage in reality. If she didn't want to go she wouldn't have gone. If she had wanted to spend the night with her husband she would have spent the night with her husband. What about the promise she had made to her husband? She a convenient excuse for a lie. Just becasue she says she felt terrible doesn't mean she did. There are no actions to support how terrible she feels. Well, at least her buggy was probably looking forward to Thursday.

She spends far More time with her lovers and boyfriends than she does her husband and now she blows him off on their last night of sex before she cuts him off for a month then goes off for a month with a sexual predator. Does anyone really see any love from Michelle? When she finds the guy, the guy she is going off for a month, that can provide for her better she will jump at the chance. This is a disaster in the making.

Robert, you have just done an outstanding job of putting this story together.

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