All Comments on 'Just Imagine It'

by Britease

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DrgwngDrgwngabout 1 year ago

Incredibly weak. No man this stupid could be successful in business. His ability to think things through was non existent. How many times did our esteemed writer use the phrase” I did not say anything, I did not know what to say, I could not move or react. Just very weak.because it was so incongruous. However, this writer produces this sort of over the top drivel very often. Sort of a repeat recipe for idiocy.

NitpicNitpicabout 1 year ago
What

What a wimp,he should have dumped Janice after her session in the alley with the French kid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Read this submission and find the main character weak. Can't believe he married Janice when she thought playing around has no consequences. Still well written and a somewhat interesting tale. A reluctant 5*****

dgfergiedgfergie10 months ago

A well written story and it had you guessing for awhile. But I think your story was a bit weakend when the wife got back together with Tod asshole after the hotel incident. But I guess you painted her that way just a weak willed woman that got off by flirting and being touched by less than honorable men that were not her husband. A wife just does not go off with another man without permission from her husband. The same goes for a man. Of course that's just the way it was before this WOKE thing or this super liberal thing or the one in the 60s that said 'if it feels good it must be ok so just do it!" 5 stars

SeaChangerSeaChanger10 months ago

MC was really unable to decide his girlfriends/wives were not the kind of women he she be attracted too.

His indecision was painful. He was so obviously unable to react sensibly.

Nevertheless ... 5* ... a lesson in how not to live.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

What a glutton for punishment

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I enjoyed the story, what a rollercoaster. I guess the guy was addicted to flitatious women, until he eventualy learnt his lesson. There must be men like that, but I can't immagine his charecter would do well in business.

I know some very likable businessmen, but they are all pretty astute.

some people can be good at business, but poor in love.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Not up to your usual standard, well written, but the protagonist makes no sense.

ibuguseribuguser5 months ago

Gawd. I don't like BTBs and favor a good reconciliation story but this Tim guy is a FUCKING IDIOT!!!

I want to punish you by giving a 2 or 3* but you write well so I can't do that.

Pjam1968Pjam19685 months ago

This author must be a woman, there is no man that can explain the thrill of having men mandling a women naked body and understand the effect that gives to a women. I find this is not my cup of tea but also understand this might be the author cup of tea

26thNC26thNC5 months ago

A long read to find out that I didn’t like it very much.

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