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Click hereI ran out of there so fast I forgot my coat, but I didn't go back for it.
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Anonymousover 7 years agoGod that must hurt... Poor boy, first guy he actually wants to kiss, and the dude books it. After what must have been one of the most intimate sexual experiences OF HIS LIFE. *shudder*
Great story so far though!
Morningskyabout 11 years agoThis is a wonderful tale...
Hope you have a chance to finish it.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoPlease finish! It's sooo good and really interesting and you should continue because you are amazing and should keep writing. thanks :)
jeansguyover 11 years agoI detest people who are so chicken s..t about there ugly comments they refuse to post them as a registered user. I really wish it was possible to block those people from having access to this site. Cliffgirl does not deserve those inane derogatory remarks. In my opinion she is one of the better authors on this site. Rant done.
Corey, you are doing great, other than the one line on the second page! That was a bummer. I think you have a great storyline going and I certainly hope you take it much further. Thanks for your great efforts. I've enjoyed all your stories!
TimothyMover 11 years agoWell, that was interesting, who would have thought that an intelligent guy like Jack would be such a fool. Surely he should have realized that Vince would want more than just a one-sided blow job. And rejecting him like that will make things even worse.
I think cliffgirl's comment was spot on too, and I got the impression that Jack has some bad stuff in his past, that will contribute to fucking things up even more. So I'm afraid the author does not need any suggestions from us to give these two cute guys a terrible time !
We await developments with trepidation ! And please do not tease us with a one line second page again. That's just cruel.....
badweed60over 11 years agoDear Anon, the comment about cliffgirl was completely out of line and totally cruel. I didn't see anything in her comment that offered advice about how the author should end his story. She complimented it and made an observation about a character. Have you read her profile? Do you know where she's speaking from? Stop acting like an ass.
Sorry for the rant, cforester. I hate it when people make ugly, misinformed remarks about people. I'll get off my soapbox now.
I also think you are doing a great job with your story and I happen to agree with cliffgirl. Jack and Vince are falling in love. In trying to help, Jack made things worse for Vince.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI forgot about your questions during previouse comment.
Of course we are gready and want long and frequent postings......:)
If we must choose, I prefer several pages per post, even if we must wait a little longer. Any shorter would probably make it choppy and this story is too wonderful for that.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThat's the kind of story I love to read on this site. Great storyline, addictive characters and truly well written. BTW Corey: Please don't let cliffgirl08 convince you to end this story in the same way that she does with her's; every loved characters dying in bloody pool or madness...
Anonymousover 11 years agoSo in his panic, Jack basically told Vince he was a pity fuck? And then ran off? Way to dump more on the guy. Vince is definately headed for a spectacular crash.
