All Comments on 'Lemon to Lemonade Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I am firm BTB having been there and done that myself my slut EX wife never tried to better herself so I feel no remorse at all. Kelly worked hard and suffered to redeem herself and therefore deserves a better life.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill698 months ago

Best chapter in agreat story.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I enjoyed the final two chapters much more than the first three, seeing Kelly fighting to improve herself was great.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Nice to read a story that understands that redemption doesn’t equal reconciliation. There’s no way she could ever have her first husband back. However, if she’s truly learned her lessons, she can live right with a new husband.

ZK

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

It was good to see Kelly grow up and mature. But given what she did in the first 3 chapters, nit sure why James woukd have much interaction with her. Her conversation with Carol was brutal. Her plot to put him into a trap by hiring out for Michelle and Sara (unknowingly as to their identities) to get leverage to contoj James. Her blatant deceit and disrespect. Not to mention her persistent cheating, and gangbangs with her "friends", those are really quite execrable. Sure James has moved on and is happy with Michelle / Sarah, but his scars will run deep with Kelly. I can understand forgiveness to get over his own pain and get closure and also just basic human decency to a deconstructed and remorseful Kelly, but all the rest near the end seemed a but much. Then again I am fine she grew up, sought to learn from her disaster with James, realizing she didn't really like him and she found someone else in Michael who will benefit from her growth.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

"James is a little on the stupid side you know!"

===> Michael is working with woefully incomplete information. I have no problem with Kelly finally maturing into an adult. And it is clear that she paid for her sins and she loves Michael. Fine. But after her diatribe to Carol, her plot to have him seduced by Michelle and Sarah, her recidivist cheating, ganbangs and her unholy attitude of suppressing James, why would James, and by extension Michelle (and Sarah) have any reason to associate with Kelly whatsoever. Fine if James wants to forgive her at some later date for his own closure, that is his call. But it doesn't mean forgetting. Kelly was a twisted abomination of a wife for some 7-8 months. She was literally out of control, yet somehow not mentally ill. If James wants to soften the truth to Michael to let Kelly move on with another guy, so be it. James has his own happiness now. But Michael's comment is nothing short of either ignorant or ludicrous. If he knew the full truth and listened yo her call to Carol, he woukd be shaken to his core. Just because Kelly grew up and will no longer do that to her man, that is still some warped, sick sh$t she pulled on James, repeatedly, with no guilt and full of malice.

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