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Click here"To the crew of the magnificent ship that just destroyed my energy net with ease, join us we could become rich with the power of your ship." The voice said.
"Uh huh, and what pray tell would be in it for me? You sound like Republic lap dogs, for god's sake grow a set and quit helping those piss ants." Derrick answered getting readings as to which ship belonged to the leader.
"You son of a bitch! Destroy him!" All the ships opened fire; Derrick could only shake his head, Idiots!
"Ok Shelby, target all their engines first, then their weapon systems." Derrick ordered.
Shelby giggled as twin beams shot out hitting each ship with almost pin point accuracy. Amid the screams and shouts, there were of course the threats.
Derrick opened a channel to the leader, "next time asshole, think before you take on a ship you aren't even half as powerful as. Tell the others in prison they will have even more company soon. That is if they survive, I'm tired of turning you over to the Rangers, I should destroy you here and now, no muss no fuss." There was a sudden overwhelming begging and pleading coming from every ship, Derrick laughed that ought to make more than a few give up pirating.
"Shelby," Derrick sighed, "Inform the Rangers; tell them they have another gift, fifteen more ships. Also tell them a pirate clan leader is among those disabled." A slight smile on her face Shelby sent the message then pulled away far enough to watch. An hour later, several second class Ranger ships dropped out of hyper-space.
"Derrick I have seventy percent light shield but I am afraid they might be able to detect me. We still have fifty five minutes thirty seconds before trans-warp is active. I started cycling the engines already so as soon as they are ready we can depart." Shelby stated.
They stayed the entire time, though Derrick was sure they had been detected twenty minutes after the Rangers arrived.
Onboard the lead ship, the Plymouth, the science officer started to notice an anomaly ten thousand miles away. When he asked that they check it out, he was told to go back to work and not mention it again. The young officer noticed that his commanding officer was very tight lipped about it. Shrugging the young officer continued to take readings but found most of his scans were reflected back at him. Thinking a moment he remembered hearing something about this, where was it? Yeah! The academy! It wasn't a defense per say but the type of metal the ship was made of. Quickly he switched scans; this was caught immediately by Shelby who adjusted for it.
"Derrick I think someone might be on to us I'm not sure, I am detecting a scan specifically for us. I have already adjusted but I advise protective cover." Shelby advised.
"Alright let's go." Fuck, Derrick thought, no more watching, that was close.
Hi, Pars! It's just me, your friendly neighborhood binge reader passing through, again. Still loving it, just FYI.
Rereading your story for the second time I absolutely love it I hope you will consider having this story properly published as I would love to buy them to add to my science fiction collection of novels, PS please consider writing more chapters from where these leave off as I would definitely like to continue to read Derrick and Shelby's storyline
Great story so far, liking the interplay between the main and the AI's. Thanks for your efforts.
As was pointed out to me by one my readers, apparently it's actually 'per se'.... yeah, I know, anal retentivenes is a hobby...
This story is awesome. I have been reading it on the other sites where you posted it and looks like almost finished with it.
I first want to say this is a great story and that you should be very proud of it. But with that being said you could use an over all edit when it is down. There are some areas of the story that conflict with each other. Like Derrick havING no clue about his past then stating that he always wonder if it was possible. And a few others about the ship and the outside world you are making. Just my thought feel free to tell me to piss off. Thanks again for the story look forward to more.
I was getting ready to send a complaint to Lit about screwing up and not posting the next chapter. You had spoiled us with daily updates and then two dates with out. One of the other series I follow was not posted on the regular intervals and was posted today too.
Very well thought out, written, and presented..
Amazing story. I am torn between wanting longer posts, with much longer time periods between posts, and more frequent but shorter ones. I have been checking constantly for new updates so shorter and more frequently won out.
Being elderly I well remember the thrill of reading my favorite authors of the golden age of science fiction, it's so nice to feel a bit of the same thrill once again. And please, don't change anything about the AI's, they are perfect just as they are. I can't wait for the next installment!