- Incest/Taboo
- Lucky Break
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Click hereI know society says that what we did was wrong, but to Simon and me it couldn't have been more right. Even though I had earlier joked with myself about incest and outcest, I refused to accept that word in relation to our lovemaking. Society's use of the word incest made it sound dirty and disgusting, and what my brother and I had was anything but.
What we had was a pure sweet love between brother and sister, and we both knew that his cock was mine and my cunt was his, and no matter what anyone else said or thought, we would continue to fuck for as long as we had breath in our horny bodies.
- COMMENTS
Turtle1952over 6 years agoA really well written sexy and loving story. I only hope you would like to write some more of these two as their romance progresses.
Anonymousabout 9 years agosounds like the writer and most of the readers are borderline rapists with their thinking. I wonder how many unsolved rapes could be solved if the cops investigated all the rave commenters on this story.
ChasBover 9 years agoThis story was well written, with an aura of truth about it, but a little too tacit and abrupt. A bit more background and descriptive detail would have made it better. Why was the societal proscription so strong at first, for example.
The Anonymous who keeps coming back with No means No must have little sexual experience. As rufriter said in answer, women don't always give it up instantly. They often want extra foreplay, and need it to get ready, even when they know they will ultimately participate willingly. A little apparent resistance may make the final act even better for them. They may also know that a man often likes the feeling of conquest, and may want to please him in that way. Of course, if the resistance becomes serious, then it really means NO, and the man must stop or he is committing rape, which is a criminal act. Sometimes, it can be hard to know a serious No, at first.
DYNO224almost 10 years agoI agree it was a good story but could use a few more chapters.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoGood effort this time, but just too short with everything progressing like the box directions on a packaged cake mix. Realism means that serious taboos are seldom explored in a simple and direct way like this without a great deal of back story. It's as if you prepped your characters "off-stage" to make everything happen without a hitch, then only told us what happened for the grand deflowering scene.
An okay read that could have been very very good. So instead of 4 or 5, it only rates 3+ stars.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoif you ever tried what you wrote here you would be jailed for rape NO MEANS NO PERIOD. the ass that said all girls say no but don't mean it is probably writing from jail for rape it is idiots like this writer that create most of the problems women face by giving guys the wrong ideas. this is in the wrong area and needs to be moved and the writer banned and all commentors that like it need to be investigated by the police for possible rape.
Anonymousover 12 years agoYou're already reading stories about incest, for Christs sake. Leave your morals at the door. There never was any rape, anyway. Reading comprehension, learn it.
Anonymousover 12 years agoever wonder why this site has a reluctance area when asshole writers don't use it? some readers here have been raped or forced into sex and don't want to be reminded of it by uncaring asshole writers. use the proper area or don't post at all. as to anonymous comments ever think some readers use public computers and would be banned for joining sites like this some use work computers and would be fired drop the bigotry and restrict all comments to the story ONLY.
