Lucky Pt. 03

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Jeff leaned forward and then stopped. "If I kiss you again, you aren't going to hurt me?"

Angela laughed. "No, I'm not. Kiss me, please. Baby, I have missed you so much."

Jeff pulled her into his arms and kissed her deeply, groaning into her mouth. He stood and scooped her up into his arms. She had lost weight since he had seen her last, even with the swelling in her belly. He carried her into her bedroom, set her down and stripped her naked. He didn't even bother removing his own clothing yet. He needed to see the changes in her, then he was going to make love to her as he never had before.

He reached out slowly. She understood. She took his hand in her own, and kissed it. Then she placed it on her belly. It was a sweetly rounded little bump. Angela smiled as he stared at her abdomen completely in awe of the fact their child was growing there. Their healthy, beautiful baby boy who would not have their father's red hair. Angela's smile grew even bigger a moment later. "He's kicking your hand," she laughed. Little butterfly wings were smacking up against Jeff's hand, too faint for him to be able to feel. "Say hello to your Daddy, Christopher."

Jeff laughed, kissing her belly, then kissing it again. Suddenly, a scent reached his nose. He inhaled deeply. It was his baby sister's own unique pussy smell. He hardened instantly and spread her legs open without any warning. "Oh God, I missed this."

Her scent was exactly as he remembered, only a million times more wonderful. She was wet for him and at the first taste, they both went wild. Jeff's tongue probed her sweet cunt and Angela whimpered his name. Her toes curled into the mattress. Her one hand lay on her baby bump, the other gripped her brother by the hair. He quickly found her clit and flicked it. Angela arched her back, her body so luscious from his vantage point. Her breasts were larger. Much, much larger. His barely C-cup sister had moved into the Major Leagues of Boobs while his back was turned. He sucked her clit into his lips and tugged on it, loving the way she responded, hissing like an angry cat, even as her pussy grew impossibly wet. She screamed his name, then orgasmed intensely, much harder than he ever remembered her doing it before. He would later find out that pregnant women experience amazing orgasms because of the increased blood flow to the area, but for now, he didn't care. He gulped his beloved sister's cum and inhaled her sweet smell, getting it all over his face.

He kissed his way up her body, sparing one for his son on the way past. "Are you sure this is okay," he asked. His dick was hard and he was going to die if he didn't fuck something soon. He unzipped his fly, shoving his pants over his hips but not bothering to take them all the way off. He didn't have time that, he had to have her now.

"Yes," Angela said, grabbing him by the cock and aiming it between her pussy lips. "Make love to me, Jeff." She wriggled underneath him, trying to take him into her body.

Jeff groaned, then slid his dick back into the pussy he had loved so much. He couldn't get enough of it before. No force on earth would make him leave it again. She was so tight, so wet, so perfect. He kept his weight off her belly, but otherwise, he spared her nothing. She wrapped her legs around his ass and held on as he fucked her, her cock filling and stretching her sweet cunt, her juices coating his dick. He throbbed for her, gasping her name as she squeezed him. They looked so much alike. They had the same parents, it was possible to believe they had been made for each other. She was his mate and he never had the need of another woman. He would kill any man who touched what was his.

Angela came again, her brother's dick giving her so much pleasure she sobbed with it. Whereas before she had talked filthy during sex, now she talked of her love for him. It was as if the lid had been removed from a steaming pot and an emotional explosion had occurred. Her full breasts jiggled with every thrust. Jeff would have ordinarily been biting away on them, but he had his head together enough not to do much with them until he asked her about the changes. He licked each nipple, kissed each breast and focused on making her pussy feel as good as he possibly could. His own sex was so close to cumming, he struggled with his control. He wanted it to last, but he had been dreaming of her ever since left. He couldn't hold out much longer.

As if she could read his thoughts, Angela pulled his head down so she could kiss him. "Cum for me, baby." She murmured his name, told him again how much she loved him. How much she loved it when they fucked. Jeff let his dick go at that point, thrusting until his balls rumbled and he exploded, filling her cunt with his ejaculate, creaming her insides as he kissed her deeply.

They panted, out of breath. Jeff rolled off her body and held her close. He kissed her sweaty forehead. He was so complete in this moment, he could have bawled again. It was so perfect.

"I love you," said the brother.

"I love you," said the sister.

Epilogue.

A newborn baby's cry filled the room of a New Orleans hospital and people clapped and cheered as Christopher Jeffrey Kramer entered the world. He had an angry look on his face, as if he were deeply offended at having been pulled from his mother's body and laid naked on her stomach. His father cut his cord, but Christopher didn't know anything about that. Covered in vernix, he looked like a little alien, but his parents thought he was perfect.

Angela and Jeff held the baby a moment, overwhelmed with love for him. Then he was whisked to a small area where the nurses cleaned him up and did whatever tests it was they did. When they handed him back, he was wrapped up like a sausage. There was just one thing clearly visible and they both gasped, then laughed.

Their beautiful baby Christopher had a full head of bright, red hair.

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17 Comments
linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Perfect

Those were an unbelievably good group of stories. Very hot but also a beautiful and tender story of love.

gemini0257gemini0257almost 6 years ago
Excellent

Just a great story with an excellent finish.

brirob51brirob51about 6 years ago

the entire series was excellent. A good balance of sibling love/confusion to make the reader think about the whole picture and a wonderful sweet ending.

thedayafterthedayafterover 6 years ago

Beautiful story. No more needs saying.

alextasyalextasyover 6 years ago
What an enchanting vignette

i love your characterizations. The way you ply into the incestuous thing obviates the need for a lot of the angst typically associated with family love. Simple, clean, and sweet. Keep it up!

Best Regards,

-a

OedipusErectusOedipusErectusover 6 years ago
all's well that......

Thank you for this series, especially part 3. I only read good sibcest stories, IE. those that have tenderness and emotional depth to them. Some sex is essential (after all, this LitEROTICA) but I find those postings with nothing but sex to be tedious and boring. You balanced things out in the end and I'm very much looking forward to reading more of your work.

Athenais_MarcellAthenais_Marcellover 6 years agoAuthor
@crusader235

Thank you so much for your comments!

Brett will be getting his own incestuous adventure. You saw his reaction, "That's kinda hit." Once I'm done with my current series, i will try to get back to Brett.

A.

Crusader235Crusader235over 6 years ago
Wow

Wow, if "Lucky" is any indicator of stories to come, we the readers are in for for some wonderful reading! Thank you so much for this one. Five stars wishing I could give it more. Just wondering, does that hound dog Brett have a sister?

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Thank You

I appreciate this caring and compassionate depiction of two people gradually recognizing and coming to terms with their love for each other. Doubts? Misgivings? Fear? Guilt? Remorse or even Regret? Of course. Societal sanction can be overwhelming. If they didn't love enough to sublimate their own feelings to protect the other it wouldn't be a love that would survive.

I want to acknowledge the artistry of the author. Sex, passion, and ardor between siblings depicted delicately and with respect is extremely difficult.

Well Done

Thank You

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 6 years ago

I absolutely loved this story. I adore this genre of incest and had a secret crush on my much older brother for years. Unfortunately I couldn't do anything about it because he died when I was only 17. Thanks again!!

Athenais_MarcellAthenais_Marcellover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you, everyone.

Hi all,

I just want to thank everyone for the wonderful feedback about Lucky. I had nearly given up on writing here after the bad receiption of my first series (maybe I will finish it someday). It's been very gratifying to be appreciated. I won't be leaving anytime soon!

Someone asked what I thought would be controversial. I was referring to Jeff's behavior and dalliance with Greta at the start of Part 3. The first instinct is to protect the integrity of your characters. I had the story start with him receiving the blowjob for 3 reasons. 1) Jeff had no idea his sister was pregnant, he thinks she doesn't feel the same way, so naturally he tried to move on. 2) If I didn't put that bit in there, we wouldn't have sex until the end of the story. I know my audience. I wanted to have a little something something to keep you all reading. 3) I wanted to explore the depths to which Jeff had sunk.

I had an alternative ending written in which Jeff told Angela about Greta. In my opinion, it didn't work. It bogged things down and took the focus off their joy. So while I'm a big fan of openness in all things, Angela gave Jeff a pass. His punishment was the guilt he felt over his own behavior. They put the episode behind them.

Another controversial bit was the fact that they did have a child. I know that bad things never happen in Literotica, but as a nurse, I had to include the fact that Angela did receive Genetics Counseling and testing. Recessive genes are a fact of life. Two siblings do have a substantial risk of having identical recessive genes, thereby giving their child a 1 in 4 shot of any number of illnesses, such as cystic fibrosis, sickle cell, hemophilia, etc. Because I was going for the happy ending, I had Angela come up negative as a carrier for all major recessive illnesses. Jeff wasn't available for testing. We can assume he did later and that he was negative as well. Even if he weren't, at worst their child could only be a carrier.

Maybe I took it overboard, I just felt that despite my love for this particular kink, I had to be realistic as well.

I hope you all read my next series, No Sacrifice. The first story is already available. You can bet that Jeff and Angela will appear again in a future story. I also want to have some fun with Brett.

Athenais

ansdguyansdguyover 6 years ago
Good ending...

but i don't know what you were refering to as far as trying someing differt. Nothing unual that I could see. Anyway, thanks for a very good and loving story. Incest without love is just not interesting and is unrelatable to me. I know about love.

honybipolahonybipolaover 6 years ago
a better ending

couldn't have been written... This awesome story totally belongs in the hall of fame...so glad you wrapped up the story with true love for our sibling lovers and their baby would keep them together now that they are a complete family...can't find the right words to describe this last chapter...suffice it to say that you should keep writing since us readers could really use a great read from such a gifted erotic writer of this genre...Thank you...

Robinius1Robinius1over 6 years ago
Perfect Ending

Sad and depressing at first. From the depths of despair rising to wonderful heights. I absolutely loved this story! No sequel necessary - this is great as it is.

Thank you for sharing your talent!

SandMan29331SandMan29331over 6 years ago
Great story

I love this story, and I really hope you continue it in the future.

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